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Martin's Comments: This was one of several pages kind of added in post, sort of; initially it and the one after it were one page but for numerous reasons decided to expand the content of the first few panels of that one into its own page here. Think it works out pretty well; the greater focus on the deal with Eva does kind of allow us to see a few shots of her with different designs (including matching up with the the first time we saw her way back in chapter 4 of Wright as Rayne), gives some more visual flare to the proceedings here. And hey, leads to an excuse to get characters from MG, WaR, and Blues all in one panel at the same time, probably not going to be a lot of chances to do that.

Is kind of a hard page to comment on admittedly but am rather happy with it. Like giving Zan a bit more of a spotlight here, especially since I'm a little afraid it'll be kind of easy for her to feel comparatively out of focus otherwise with how much more downbeat she is than the other two.

Adam's Comments: Heheh... Yeah, love steps like this that show off the greater universe. Also the idea that Narcisco is known within the hero community but is kinda mysterious outside of it. It's a very neat little touch and something that could happen. Also gives her connections without intense fame. Plus the idea of Alex and Protocol just having mutual friends is neat to me; already pretty fond of how Alex and Protocol are friends even if they can't ever really meet up due to WaR's plot.

Zan might(?) be my favorite member of Alpha Male's crew, so was very happy to see her show off her skill.

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www.deviantart.com/militant-go… Back | Forward www.deviantart.com/militant-go…

Read Our Sister Comics!

Martin's Comments: This was one of several pages kind of added in post, sort of; initially it and the one after it were one page but for numerous reasons decided to expand the content of the first few panels of that one into its own page here. Think it works out pretty well; the greater focus on the deal with Eva does kind of allow us to see a few shots of her with different designs (including matching up with the the first time we saw her way back in chapter 4 of Wright as Rayne), gives some more visual flare to the proceedings here. And hey, leads to an excuse to get characters from MG, WaR, and Blues all in one panel at the same time, probably not going to be a lot of chances to do that.

Is kind of a hard page to comment on admittedly but am rather happy with it. Like giving Zan a bit more of a spotlight here, especially since I'm a little afraid it'll be kind of easy for her to feel comparatively out of focus otherwise with how much more downbeat she is than the other two.

Adam's Comments: Heheh... Yeah, love steps like this that show off the greater universe. Also the idea that Narcisco is known within the hero community but is kinda mysterious outside of it. It's a very neat little touch and something that could happen. Also gives her connections without intense fame. Plus the idea of Alex and Protocol just having mutual friends is neat to me; already pretty fond of how Alex and Protocol are friends even if they can't ever really meet up due to WaR's plot.

Zan might(?) be my favorite member of Alpha Male's crew, so was very happy to see her show off her skill.