Comments: 51
MyKittyStuff [2014-07-19 00:49:41 +0000 UTC]
awww how cute
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jackiejodude [2013-03-08 15:34:06 +0000 UTC]
Luv it!!!!!!
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348joey [2013-01-18 09:19:17 +0000 UTC]
You will be spared, for now.
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kuro-kai08 [2013-01-13 05:27:15 +0000 UTC]
cute
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Jo-Kno-Tor [2012-12-11 04:25:54 +0000 UTC]
YES! You are brilliant!
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Nick2802 [2012-11-09 21:15:46 +0000 UTC]
That was a good one shot, I feel as if you captured them well as charicters
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K1NGK4ZM48888 [2012-08-15 08:06:12 +0000 UTC]
Omg that was so sweat one ov the best
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AvatarGirl505 [2012-08-07 06:44:03 +0000 UTC]
I looooooovvvvvveeeeeeee this story, it really connects with the characters and how they would approach the conflict.......
_ is a Chinese freak who eats broccoli
_ is mentally dating Harry potter
X is wrestling brother and winning XD
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Jelly-da-Fish [2012-07-19 20:32:23 +0000 UTC]
Very cute!!! I luv ur avatar pic btw...very cute!
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L-4-2 [2012-01-14 00:02:22 +0000 UTC]
ccuuute~
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PhycoToad [2011-02-07 21:38:31 +0000 UTC]
Is good...Is very, very good!
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R-A-Enbows [2010-11-12 23:14:27 +0000 UTC]
d'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw
cute!!!!
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Ally-x-Wally [2010-05-20 00:13:41 +0000 UTC]
How Kayute! cx
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MMdarksoulgirl [2010-04-19 03:00:41 +0000 UTC]
The ending was very original! Great work on making the characters stay in character
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drashian [2010-04-18 23:04:49 +0000 UTC]
Awwww, that was adorable!
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sakuramidori [2010-04-15 01:05:36 +0000 UTC]
I love how this story is totally in-character! Not only that, but it's super cute, too. Great job!
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itsandydraws [2010-04-14 20:39:23 +0000 UTC]
Nice story, though I absolutely disagree that she would treat him that way after the movie. Ever after the flight she was very interested in him and protective.
I don't even think she would punch him that often anymore.
Anyway, great wor, more please.
If you like, check out my AstridxHiccup fanfic "Of closeness and completion!
[link]
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stevie442 [2010-04-14 20:11:11 +0000 UTC]
aaaaaawwwwwww thats soo sweet
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asfnone [2010-04-14 17:15:34 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't kill you lol
There's very little stuff about Hictrid(or Hicstrid or Hicgrid or Asccup or whatever the term is. One needs to be decided on.)
Anyway it's great to see some. Especially a good one. It was sweet =]
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asfnone In reply to Pale-Face-and-Rain [2010-04-16 20:18:04 +0000 UTC]
Lol I completely agree. My brother came up with it randomly one day.
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asfnone In reply to MilkyClear [2010-04-15 19:04:09 +0000 UTC]
Cool
Lol sorry about that. I thought it was a good sig myself.
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Mairelyn [2010-04-14 16:16:56 +0000 UTC]
this little ficlet was great. very in character for both of them, and also great character development.
might i suggest "Softening astrid/ or softening the heroine" as the title?
two little suggestions to change thought, nothing big.
first, in Hiccup talking to Astrid he could suggest they do more things together, like take another ride on toothless or train together or something.
second, while yes, Astrid was a bit of a... erm really hot volatile temper she would probably wouldn't even aim at Hiccup's head. it sounds possibly abusive.
she probably would throw her axe at him, but might I suggest she nearly missed his bad or good leg instead?
overall i really like this, it was a very nice fic.
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Pale-Face-and-Rain [2010-04-14 15:45:59 +0000 UTC]
thank you
NO ONE has written hicstrid stuff and it's about time
more plz even if it's not them... i like youre style
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Mairelyn In reply to Pale-Face-and-Rain [2010-04-14 16:20:01 +0000 UTC]
actually there IS a couple of really sweet hictrid stuff.
*one a bit erm.. suggestive. but excellent nonethless:
[link]
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Mairelyn In reply to Pale-Face-and-Rain [2010-04-15 03:13:31 +0000 UTC]
to my incredulous surprise I found Very little, but it is good nonetheless.
(Here hoping there is more hiccup/astrid in the future:
[link]
[link]
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Pale-Face-and-Rain In reply to Mairelyn [2010-04-15 19:38:09 +0000 UTC]
thanks a mil
the first one's my favourite
i owe u one
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Mairelyn In reply to Pale-Face-and-Rain [2010-04-15 19:55:59 +0000 UTC]
yah I think so too. i liked the first one a lot.
you don't owe me nothing.
but if you do want to do something spread the word! we need more Hiccup/Astrid fics!
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Pale-Face-and-Rain In reply to Mairelyn [2010-04-15 19:59:04 +0000 UTC]
i know we soooo need them....
i was gonna upload mine.... but it sucks sooo....
if u find anymore mail me??? i'll do the same
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Mairelyn In reply to Pale-Face-and-Rain [2010-04-15 21:07:17 +0000 UTC]
sure!
and hey maybe you can send it to me via note? *your story* I can beta it.
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Pale-Face-and-Rain In reply to Mairelyn [2010-04-16 17:03:07 +0000 UTC]
but i told you
tá se uafasach!!!! (it's horrific, in mah native language)
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Pale-Face-and-Rain In reply to Mairelyn [2010-04-16 18:05:27 +0000 UTC]
i'm not gonna put it up coz it is as lame as a llama living in a three foot sock
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Mairelyn In reply to Pale-Face-and-Rain [2010-04-16 18:31:42 +0000 UTC]
that i understood.
what i said was that if you want, I can read it and give you tips to make it better.
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Pale-Face-and-Rain In reply to Mairelyn [2010-04-16 18:34:30 +0000 UTC]
ah thats waht u meant
well nope not even that it's too suckish
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Mairelyn In reply to Pale-Face-and-Rain [2010-04-16 18:40:46 +0000 UTC]
well have about you start another one?
if you like the other one better after you finish it you can post it
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ChibiCoaster [2010-04-14 13:09:48 +0000 UTC]
Nice work there!
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