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Description “Mmm.” Navarre reached down to stroke her head lifted a lock of the dark, silken hair. He lifted it to his face and ran it beneath his nostrils, inhaling her scent with a heavy sigh. His fingers loosened and he let the hair tumble back to her head. He reached back down, taking pleasure in the way she shrunk away each time he gathered a fistful and slowly let it loose.

“I should have known you would’ve survived.” He nearly chuckled as he let all but a single strand of hair fall loose. With a sharp jerk he plucked it out by the roots. Manasa’s hand shot up with a twitch of pain, but he caught her wrist and held it still.

He strained closer and lowered his mouth the considerable distance to her shoulder, like a monster crouching to devour its prey. His hand snaked under her tunic and clutched the bare skin of her stomach to pull her around. His lips followed all the way, making their way hungrily to the base of her throat. She closed her eyes again, screaming inside, screaming at him to stop, to let her go, to set her free, but aloud she could barely make a sound. Her throbbing heart pounded against her chest, and his mouth lingered there, just to feel her fear.

"Please," she begged, loathing the weakness in her voice, a voice she barely recognized. “Not again….”

~Among the Ashes by ~CallistoHime and ~WishIWould

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Wooooooooah. Heh heh. That's probably given you the completely wrong idea about AtA.

Considering putting this under mature (the chapter itself is) but only if someone says they'd rather I did.

Knowing me, you must realise that Navarre's the baddie ... otherwise it's unlikely I'd be drawing him. But at least this time I don't like him. I'm just - er - 'intrigued' by his character.
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Comments: 62

MillieBee In reply to ??? [2011-06-26 15:17:01 +0000 UTC]

The chapter title was 'Manasa', but I can't remember the number I'm afraid. There were two versions of the chapter - a mature one and a sort of 'censored' one. This was from the mature one.

Thank you!

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Rhinjinfan [2009-04-17 05:10:46 +0000 UTC]

nicely done, Navarre's got to go in a ditch and die there! Then he has to live at the earth's core and rot some more XD

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MillieBee In reply to Rhinjinfan [2009-04-17 17:36:42 +0000 UTC]

He certainly has!

Thank you!

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Rhinjinfan In reply to MillieBee [2009-04-18 01:18:23 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome, you're better at me with the color,

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WishIWould [2009-03-19 03:58:50 +0000 UTC]

I used this pic (and another!) in my AtA fanvid! [link]

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MillieBee In reply to WishIWould [2009-03-19 17:05:10 +0000 UTC]

WOW! Thank you! I'm MillieBee11 on Youtube. I've commented, rated and fav'd!

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WishIWould In reply to MillieBee [2009-03-19 18:02:45 +0000 UTC]

I struggle with youtube and being able to answer comments But the thumbs/links for each piccy are in my journal!

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WishIWould In reply to MillieBee [2009-03-19 17:05:57 +0000 UTC]

oh AWESOME! 8D

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dollyrose09 [2008-11-23 20:51:37 +0000 UTC]

Aww Mana! I feel so bad for her! Noone should have to go through that, esp her.

Navs.....I just want to stab him with a pitchfork
I was very happy when he had a cannon dropped on his head. He deserves it.

Nice work!

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MillieBee In reply to dollyrose09 [2008-11-24 17:14:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

I agree. Poor girl .
GASP spoilers! Nah, I read that part the other day . I was happy, too.

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dollyrose09 In reply to MillieBee [2008-11-24 19:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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Shirokh [2008-08-09 22:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Nice drawing! I love the shadowing details!

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MillieBee In reply to Shirokh [2008-08-11 12:23:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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allieryan [2008-08-06 23:40:21 +0000 UTC]

Amazing...you were able to capture the emotions so perfectly.

Definitely worthy of a

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MillieBee In reply to allieryan [2008-08-07 09:21:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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kitttiecatt [2008-07-31 06:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Great job! Everything about this is perfect!

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MillieBee In reply to kitttiecatt [2008-07-31 11:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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CallistoHime [2008-07-30 22:28:16 +0000 UTC]

MANA!

You ... this... WOW!!!! First off, Mana looks BEAUTIFUL! And so sad- so perfect for the scene. Her face is just lovely, and her expression has so much life and emotion in it. awwwwwwww, it makes me sad! I love the little detail of her shoulders being pulled up, that's VERY Manasa defense mechanismish. I love little details like that! *^___^*

However, O_< I love how you drew Navs. You made him look very handsome, which he is... his expression, just that little bit of smile... grrrr, but it's SO WELL DONE! Amazing. ^^

Thanks so much for sharing this, I love it!

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MillieBee In reply to CallistoHime [2008-07-31 11:52:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And thank you for the favourite, too .

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CallistoHime In reply to MillieBee [2008-07-31 19:50:43 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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WishIWould [2008-07-30 22:28:06 +0000 UTC]

WOW! The emotion on her face is just INCREDIBLE! Oh, dang...and your coloring is lovely and beautiful, too. And, gah, this is just so awesome!!! And SAD!

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MillieBee In reply to WishIWould [2008-07-31 11:52:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! And thanks for the !

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WishIWould In reply to MillieBee [2008-07-31 17:21:10 +0000 UTC]

No problem!!!!

Random stickler fact: is Manasa standing on a rock where we can't see? Cause Navarre's 6'4" and Manasa's 5'0", so there's a huuuge height difference between them =O

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MillieBee In reply to WishIWould [2008-08-01 10:34:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow, really?? Oops! I'm sure I went through Callisto's character pages ... but I must have mistaken 6'4" for 5'4", because I remember wondering if all Sentei's were short.

So, yeah, now she's standing on an invisible something.

*Bangs head on the wall*

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WishIWould In reply to MillieBee [2008-08-01 18:58:16 +0000 UTC]

D'awww, ees all good! It just shows that you put the thought and effort into looking it up, which is amazing! I only wondered. You're just that awesome type to know details and such, teehee, so it's really more credit to you that you looked it up and misread/misremembered, as opposed to, like, when people just assume and make Manasa like 5'8" or something

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MillieBee In reply to WishIWould [2008-08-02 12:52:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you appreciate it!

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bornahorse [2008-07-30 22:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Gah! *stabs Navarre*
*hugs Manasa*

This is awesome, in an artistic way. (DIE NAVARRE!!!!!!) The expressions are perfect- Navarre's makes me want to stab the computer screen and yell DIE!!! Manasa's makes me want to hug her and make her not feel afraid!

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MillieBee In reply to bornahorse [2008-07-31 11:53:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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bornahorse In reply to MillieBee [2008-07-31 18:20:23 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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SonicalConverse [2008-07-30 20:07:59 +0000 UTC]

GRRR! navarre you evil boy

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MillieBee In reply to SonicalConverse [2008-07-31 11:53:45 +0000 UTC]

He certainly is!

Thank you for the favourite!

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SonicalConverse In reply to MillieBee [2008-08-01 02:27:21 +0000 UTC]

your welcomee ^^

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Lunatheshewolf [2008-07-30 20:01:17 +0000 UTC]

Great job on this! You can tell that its good because it makes me want to punch Nav in the face!

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MillieBee In reply to Lunatheshewolf [2008-07-31 11:54:36 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you! I'm glad I've got everyone hating him - just like they're supposed to!

And thanks for the !

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Lunatheshewolf In reply to MillieBee [2008-07-31 18:43:34 +0000 UTC]

No problem. Your hateness is very effective!

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Rikku92 [2008-07-30 19:12:38 +0000 UTC]

woah, the deatail in this just send shivvers down my spine. Very realistic. Nice job

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MillieBee In reply to Rikku92 [2008-07-31 11:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you

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Merinas [2008-07-30 18:08:46 +0000 UTC]

i don't see any reason to mark it as mature. Amazing job. *favs*

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MillieBee In reply to Merinas [2008-07-31 11:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so . I tried not to make it too distubing. Thank you, and thanks for the collection, too!

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Merinas In reply to MillieBee [2008-07-31 16:55:41 +0000 UTC]

welcome.

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Shadow7Zerudahime [2008-07-30 17:46:39 +0000 UTC]

Gaaah! Freaking Navarre...man this is just creepy. Her expression...his expression I'm soooo faving this!

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MillieBee In reply to Shadow7Zerudahime [2008-07-31 11:56:10 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you!

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Shadow7Zerudahime In reply to MillieBee [2008-08-01 19:37:46 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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Branwennwolf [2008-07-30 16:50:10 +0000 UTC]

Every time I look at it, I get the shivers...

Really well done!

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MillieBee In reply to Branwennwolf [2008-07-31 11:56:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! It's nice to know, as an artist, that I'm moving people emotionally in the way I intended.

Thanks again!

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TerrierGal [2008-07-30 16:26:25 +0000 UTC]

EVIL! I hate this dude. Grrargh. Poor Manasa. We need to gang up on him or something.
Your style is very clean, and pretty. I like it alot.

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MillieBee In reply to TerrierGal [2008-07-31 11:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

Yes, we do .

And thank you for the favourite, too!

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TerrierGal In reply to MillieBee [2008-08-01 02:38:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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haikoui [2008-07-30 15:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow... this is amazing! LOL Your Navarre reminds me of Prince Caspian 8D Oooh how hot XD And Manasa ROCKS. I just pity her for some reason, though. X(

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MillieBee In reply to haikoui [2008-07-31 12:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you - for the favourite too!

I was kind of thiking of him, actually. Since Callisto described Navarre as being very handsome, I didn't want him to come out looking as horrible as he is inside .

Yeah, I think everyone pities Manasa. No one should have to go through that ... no matter how hot the guy is .

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