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Published: 2009-01-28 04:52:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 463; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 9
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Description EDIT: Okay, first off refined the background cause obviously I half-assed it before. Also changed the lighting on her skin... MORE CRITIQUES PLEASE. (Besides on her pose cause I know it's screwed xD)

First off... sorry for spamming your inboxes. I'm on a roll. This is one of my OCs from my comic which unless you've found it, will remain unknown because it's embarrassing ROFL;; (and it's GL.. not sure how many people who watch me like that stuff)

Her name is Alex she's uh... Korean...and...this picture is totally random...to be a mini-print at Sakuracon and I'm making a matching picture of her girlfri---best friend Shirley. I think Imma scratch out doing all 4 girls... haha xD;;;

SAI~
Dunno how long. :c

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Comments: 34

dorodoro [2009-07-02 18:58:02 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous. *O*

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l-DiSHY-l [2009-02-01 20:08:28 +0000 UTC]

Dudddde i love the blue-ish shading MAN its beautimous
Dress shading/folding looks loveli

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mima57775 In reply to l-DiSHY-l [2009-02-05 16:30:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Dishy xD

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ZazieRainyday [2009-01-30 16:56:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh and one last thing, I think the BG should be darker since it's night ._. Like where the wall and the floor meet and by the fountain there should be more shadows. And if thats darkened, then the glowing Alex will pop out more and look sexier 8D

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Hana117 [2009-01-29 04:59:41 +0000 UTC]

RED DRESSES MAKE GIRLS LOOK PREDDY.
no, lol, i think you did such an AWESOME job <33 :>>

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mima57775 In reply to Hana117 [2009-01-29 16:17:12 +0000 UTC]

Cause red dresses are sexxay

Thanks dear <3

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Hana117 In reply to mima57775 [2009-01-30 18:20:44 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW RIGHT

welcome hon <3

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meowsap [2009-01-29 02:21:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow, the folds on her dress are like...perfect. It looks soooo good!!! I really like the background too, especially the fountain. The only "crit" I have is the lighting I guess, but I don't know how you could fix it. I'm bad at lighting anyways.
The picture is overall very very pretty!

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mima57775 In reply to meowsap [2009-01-29 16:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Yea...I'm going to go play around with it some more today. Thanks so much Marie. :3

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meowsap In reply to mima57775 [2009-01-30 01:57:37 +0000 UTC]

Have fun...
You're welcome!

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mei-wei [2009-01-29 01:01:26 +0000 UTC]

it's so pretty! O8

-steals her dress-

Um... as for critique... Add a little more shadow to the arm that is holding the dress up around the elbow. It needs a little more depth since hte arm looks a little flat. o:

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mima57775 In reply to mei-wei [2009-01-29 01:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Keyo!

Hmm..alright, I'll go try that now. Thanks for the critique <33

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ZazieRainyday [2009-01-28 17:29:11 +0000 UTC]

"If her boobs aren't Rilla big they aren't big ENOUGH" *crazy*

No but seriously Mima.. Wow O_o *sets as BG* I agree with Aisha, since it is night moar shiny please, plus it'll add a more sexy feel to it <3

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mima57775 In reply to ZazieRainyday [2009-01-28 20:18:23 +0000 UTC]

LOL. You ARE crazy.

I tried making it more shiny, but you know I fail. :c

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ZazieRainyday In reply to mima57775 [2009-01-30 02:34:21 +0000 UTC]

Practice makes per--- ... boobs...

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Kippi [2009-01-28 13:39:38 +0000 UTC]

I like the folds on her chest : D and her hairrrr~

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mima57775 In reply to Kippi [2009-01-28 16:08:20 +0000 UTC]

....Lmao...just what ARE you looking at...? +_+

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M-ocha [2009-01-28 06:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job on that dress! The details of the folds are amazing~
She looks like a cute character!

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mima57775 In reply to M-ocha [2009-01-28 16:08:59 +0000 UTC]

Haha...thanks Mocha! She has her ups and downs...but I definitely enjoy drawing her. :3

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Ransouu [2009-01-28 06:06:38 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me that I need to go dress shopping for that silly dance I'm supposed to attend...but seeing that my stomach will be the size of a watermelon by then, I don't think I'll look as nice as your OC Character dose!

I agree with the brighter lighting.
And the folds of her dress are simply GODLY. <3

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mima57775 In reply to Ransouu [2009-01-28 16:15:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you'd look fine in a dress like that. There's this certain beauty to pregnant women when they wear dresses. <3

T-thanks Ran! ;A;

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Versus-Mail [2009-01-28 05:15:55 +0000 UTC]

i have a dress like that lol

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mima57775 In reply to Versus-Mail [2009-01-28 16:10:11 +0000 UTC]

LOL! You serious Vanda? Lemme see

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Versus-Mail In reply to mima57775 [2009-01-28 21:30:40 +0000 UTC]

lol i'll try and find it when i get homes

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KrunchyWindo [2009-01-28 05:00:23 +0000 UTC]

I really like the folds; You colour them so well! :'D
Beautiful work, very stylized. : D

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mima57775 In reply to KrunchyWindo [2009-01-28 16:11:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Krunchy. Your comments still make me smile when I read them. ;w;
Stylized? Have you looked at your own drawings? Now THOSE are stylized P:

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KrunchyWindo In reply to mima57775 [2009-01-28 16:48:01 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME. You know what they say...a smile a day keeps Dr. Phil at bay. (Well I say that) LOL
Seriously though, you've got a great style, and dang...I JUST LOVE THOSE FOLDS.

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mima57775 In reply to KrunchyWindo [2009-01-28 20:19:17 +0000 UTC]

LOL. Keeps Oprah away too. *shot*

I'm glad they looked normal. I had so much trouble coloring them in. xD

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vinuumon [2009-01-28 04:54:25 +0000 UTC]

jerpejr i want to read your comic LOL

the background is so nice -jealous-

foihf pretty work
I like the dress

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mima57775 In reply to vinuumon [2009-01-28 16:08:03 +0000 UTC]

LOLOL. Nooo. It's so gay :c (and since some of the pages are old, looks like crap ROFL)

D-don't be jealous! D8 I think the background is horrible. I definitely need to go in and refine it some more.

sdga! Thanks :3

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vinuumon In reply to mima57775 [2009-01-28 22:42:29 +0000 UTC]

lwhfowhef your backgrounds are so cool D< and theyre good blurry seeing as they arent the focus and stuff so sdhfsdhfouhw

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Aisha-kun [2009-01-28 04:52:23 +0000 UTC]

MINE!

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mima57775 In reply to Aisha-kun [2009-01-28 16:06:30 +0000 UTC]

....o_o

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Aisha-kun In reply to Aisha-kun [2009-01-28 04:53:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh and I think that the lighting should be brighter @w@ shiney desu lolol...no..but seriously brighter XD make the contrast nicer so her skin stands out 8D

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