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KasaiInuyoukai [2009-05-02 20:20:34 +0000 UTC]
^-^ Hiya! I'm from , here to critique your picture! ^-^
Here's what I think you should look at in this picture;
*The far arm's position. Her shoulders actually can be that high, and her hand can be showing back there, but only is the upper arm is going backwards instead of down. If you drew a straight line from her hand to the lower part of the arm (where it attaches to the shoulder), you would have a good arm there. When I drew on the screen, only her shoulder would be in the front, the arm itself would be almost hidden. Also, her hand would be a bit farther from the body and a bit smaller (for perspective).
*Her body is leaning too far forward, it looks like in a few seconds she would fall forward. One of her legs should be going a bit more forward to stabilize her.
*Last note is that lock of hair she's holding. Hair naturally tries to keep straight, therefore when bent, it makes wide curves. The hair, as it connects with the body of her hair, should be more of a wide curve, it wouldn't want to bend that abruptly. Just try bending your hair-it'll sooner twist in your fingers and go sideways than make a 45degree angle bend. ^-^
Overall the feel of this picture is great. I really like all the soft colors and the expression on her face. I would give this pic maybe....4.8/5. It's very expressive-you just need some work on anatomy. ^-^
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Mimiu78 In reply to KasaiInuyoukai [2009-05-03 01:10:44 +0000 UTC]
yes anatomy, my worst enemy OTL;; but thanks to you i'll be improvingg thanks so muchh ;W; <33333333333333333333333333
oh btw, the hair thing, it's actually a ribbon OTL.. i guess i looks like it's connected with teh hair. >.<
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KasaiInuyoukai In reply to Mimiu78 [2009-05-03 04:58:36 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome. ^_^
And if you wanted that little bit to look more like a ribbon, you could make it twist in the air a bit more. Ribbons also follow the same rule as hair, although they can be bent with a bit more force. [link] is a good reference for ribbons in the wind. ^_^
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moonless-dawn [2009-03-16 21:29:32 +0000 UTC]
awww, muy lindooo <3
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Mikiou [2009-03-16 16:11:32 +0000 UTC]
Such a sweet idea ;__;
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TokenDuelist [2009-03-16 01:02:08 +0000 UTC]
So pretty and cute...
Heart Balloons ftw! :3
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xl0vex [2009-03-16 00:10:04 +0000 UTC]
yay first cmnt!
niiice piicture!
it has my fav colours in it!
WHITE AND BLUE! (H)
anyways its cute!
bye now
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Mimiu78 In reply to xl0vex [2009-03-16 00:15:20 +0000 UTC]
lol thanks xD
b-bye now? o_O
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