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Minacoleta — DeiTobi Doujin pg. 1
Published: 2007-11-06 13:34:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 3725; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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THIS IS A SHONEN-AI DOUJIN (fan made comic). IF YOU DO NOT KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS, A MORE KNOWN AND MISUSED TERM IS YAOI. IF YOU DO NOT LIKE THIS, BECOME FAST FRIENDS WITH YOUR BACK BUTTON. HATE COMMENTS, DISSES, ETC. WILL NOT BE TOLERATED. THANK YOU.FULL VIEW PLZ!
Hey guys! I know its been a while, but its because I just went on a rampant doujin making spree, lol.
This is the first page of the doujin, and I hope you guys like! I'll try to upload periodically each weekend, but for some reason, I have this thing where I get many pages sketched out, cause I like where the storyline is going, you know? So I still have two panels of page two left un-inked, while last night I just started sketching page seven, lol.
So yeah. Many of my friends have already seen this in school, but here it is for all of you who didn't!
EDIT: the sizing is a bit weird, so it may be a bit blurry...
EDIT 2: I'm fooling around with he size so you can download it and it's not huge, ok? Cause I'm not sure if the enlarge is working, as it isn't for me.
EDIT 3: IT'S ALL FIXED! I got the sizing right!
Deidara, Itachi, Kisame, Tobi (c) masashi kisimoto-sensei
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Comments: 42
i'm sorry, i dont think i understand the question. :\
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ok it tobi or dei death (heating waise aka there ears don't work?)?
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No the idea was that Tobi was mute.
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oh she he dosn't talk i got it ok thanks
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awesome! So i read previous comments... Tobi's gonna b mute?
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that was the original idea, yes.
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original idea? does that mean he's not gonna be anymore?
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Sorry, I totally missed this response! No, he still would be, but I'm not continuing the comic, so...
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-dies- tis heaven, this sweet beautiful scene that fills my watering eyes!!!
lol ok, looooooooong overdue for a comment here!!!
cant keep up with your deviations -grumbles- lol
I LOVE THIS
but i guess you know this by now, seen from the way i lunge at you everytime you draw a new page...and awww geez pinky rings! -dies again-
*off to comment on your other wondermazing drawings now*
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XDD its ok, but it is somewhat funny, as I am to see you tomorrow, lol.
XD Yep, I actually uploaded a bit this weekend, lol.
THANK YOU!!! *will hug you tomorrow*
XD DON'T DIE!!!! *sob*
XD thank you!
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I like the way you drew the hands. >3 All vague and everything.
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XD thanks!
They're easier to draw than like... fingers and stuff, lol.
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AWWWW! 8D YOU DO KNOW I WANT MOAR NOW, RIGHT? >: D
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XDDD OF COURSE!!!! I just need to ink those two panels on page two, lol.
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DID IT!
I'll be uploading tomorrow!
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omfg
pinky holding = <3
omfgomfg so cute
ilu thankyousomuch ;A;
i can't fucking wait to read more!! fdisfesfs
is tobi like mute or something ;A; maybe i just have to wait to figure out what you mean by "i feel bad that i can't hear you/i can only imagine"
LKFjedffafewalkf <3
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yes yes I know!!! pinky holding FTW!!!
I LOVE YOU TOO!!!! YOUR RESPONSE IS AWESOME AND JUST WHAT I WANTED!!! <33
yaaaayyy people want to READ IT!!!! *spazzes*
Ok, this is my problem with that.
I don't know if he should be mute, or deaf, you know? It's not really clear who's talking, so I can push it any way, you know?
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO!!!!! D; HELP ME!!!
I started out with him being deaf, then later on he was going to regain his hearing, you know? but... I want him to be able to regain whatever he doesn't have in the beginning of the doujin at the end.... so.... yeah.... >>;
help me plzthxbai?
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OMFG OMFG DEIDEI = DEAF omfggggg yes!!! i like def deidaraaaa idea better<33
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>< ARGH! SO DO I!!!!! but I already sketched out multiple pages with Deidara speaking.... so he cant....
;-;
Ok, so I've decided. Tobi is going to be mute, ok?
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hahaha ok!
i can't wait to see more HURRRYYRYRYR 8D
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D:
I feel bad now....
>< I UPLOAD TOMORROW!!!!
goodnight! and I also made you my tobi!!! <33
-3-
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I totally love this...
I cant even draw this..D:
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O: thank you!!! <33
oh yes you could, if you tried!!! Guess where I got my hands drawing style from, eh?
YOU!!! <33
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Really ? x3
I love it
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yes yes!!! I mean, I love it! it's so much easier than drawing individual fingers, lol.
If I saw you in real life I would glomp you SO MUCH!!!!!
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w00t, it's finally up! And the story writing shall begin and not be done until you are. >D
ily, Tanya. :hearts:
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I totally missed the 'ily'
I LOVE YOU TOO!!!!! YOU ROCK HARD FOR MAKING ME THIS FIC!!!! <333
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XDD, ok!
can I be your beta? meaning, you write it, then send it to me, and I read it over to make sure its cool and ok, then I send it back to you, and you could either immediately upload it or read through my changes, and if you don't like some of them, you can change them back?
please? cause there are some things in my head that I can't really portray in the comic that well, that were supposed to be there, you know?
And also, there are going to be chapters in this doujin... maybe.... 16 pages each (the amount kishimoto-sensei uses in the actual Naruto manga) and then you can put up the chapter of the fic?
There isn't enough information in one page for you to write a whole chapter, you know?
get back to me! <33
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pinky rings XDDDD
yeah i love those things |D
nice paneling and such and yeah stylish clothes instead of cloaks :3
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yuppers! they both have the pinky rings so they match! Tobi got them both rings for Deidara's birthday.
thank you! :3
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