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YamiLover81Fun [2016-03-18 02:09:00 +0000 UTC]
That was great. I wish this was part of a longer story instead of just a short story thing.
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kittyrainbows [2013-07-28 23:13:39 +0000 UTC]
I really enjoyed this story, it felt like to me it would explain the personality Marik has in the abridged series ( I have not the slightest idea how Marik really is and I don't know whether or not this was your intent.) and that it didn't get all mushy while not overly violent and just pure smut, it was actually a nice lil refresher.
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LRyukluvrLighthater1 [2011-10-08 06:26:59 +0000 UTC]
that...was...AMAZING!!! but my *extremely pervy* fangirl self wishes it could've gone further XD
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Minami-no-Aoki In reply to gaaragirl912 [2011-07-27 08:07:14 +0000 UTC]
I know right.. Every time I read one of these it always turns into Bakura raping Marik. I didn't want it to fit into that category so I suppose I just had him showing Marik who was boss. Also, sex scenes are things I can never bring myself to write so I always try to avoid them and write something a little different~ Thanks~
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Tiger-LilyXxKunoichi [2011-06-07 22:50:01 +0000 UTC]
Still good. Dude though. Mine are waaaaay more "heated" then this xDDDDD
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Minami-no-Aoki In reply to Tiger-LilyXxKunoichi [2011-06-08 07:07:20 +0000 UTC]
I know. I'm such a big baby that THIS was as far as I could push myself to go.. xD
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Tiger-LilyXxKunoichi In reply to Minami-no-Aoki [2011-06-08 10:18:14 +0000 UTC]
LMAO, how about now? You just need to real more of my yaoi xD Like The Butler's Dog. Which I really need to hurry up and finish lmao xD Oh Kakashi. Getting yourself raped by a sexy butler.... GOOD JOB XD You need to watch Black Butler. It's a-frukin'-mazing.
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Minami-no-Aoki In reply to Tiger-LilyXxKunoichi [2011-06-08 18:39:16 +0000 UTC]
O.o you...imagine Kakashi being totally owned every single time don't you? lol the poor guy has no fight left in him xD
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Tiger-LilyXxKunoichi In reply to Minami-no-Aoki [2011-06-08 21:39:17 +0000 UTC]
Kakashi: *sighs* ..... Look's like I'mma be raped by a bird again.
Sebastian:
Kakashi: Oh boy.
Tiger: Well it's not rape. It's willing.
Sebastian: See~? It's willing~
Kakashi: ._. so wrong on so many levels---- *gets ass groped by sebby* AHHH! Watch it, demon.
Sebastian: Hell, mutt. I own you I can touch you wherever I want.
Tiger: Oh boy....
Kakashi: *starts to leave*
Sebastian: *grabs him and nibbles his ear*
Kakashi: GAAAAH O////O STOP THAT
Tiger: But it's willing..... You try to kill Naruto for him D:
Kakashi: .......Tiger there are so many things not right about you....
Sebastian: I know huh? She makes me out to be waaaay more of an ass then I really am. ._.
Tiger: Yeah, you'd never rape kakashi. Tho u did rape that nun...
Sebastian: I DID NOT RAPE HER. SHE ASKED FOR IT. IT WAS JUST OFF-SCREEN.
Tiger: suuuureeeeee
Kakashi: Don't worry sebastian, people say I'm in love with Naruto because of a stupid movie ending....
Sebastain: Ah, I feel your pain. Let's go out for tea...
Kakashi: OK
*both leave*
Tiger: ........ they're SO in love. RIGHT LAUREN? *huggles*
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stevie-kat [2011-06-07 21:01:59 +0000 UTC]
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY its so epicly well writen! dont make me rant about how much i love the punctuation! <3 wooot first comment too xD
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stevie-kat In reply to Minami-no-Aoki [2011-06-07 21:13:39 +0000 UTC]
x3 is amazing! and me, the proud smutt reading queen of glittery gay rainbows, cant even write something that heated! [i havent tried but i have a feeling id combust x3] so i bow too and admire your skillz!
and lol, i ment to say dont make me rant AGAIN x3 [i love punctuation used properly...if you couldnt tell x3]
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Minami-no-Aoki In reply to stevie-kat [2011-06-08 07:21:10 +0000 UTC]
lol that's as heated as I could force myself.. Literally that was my ultimate limit..lol though, reading it back I surprised even myself with some of the things I threw in there xD
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