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Mindsebbandflow — Angel's Song
Published: 2013-01-13 22:59:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1655; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 48
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Escaping into nights, I told myselfThat I was not at all alone
But after all, it revealed
Nothing but my loneliness day by day
On my way home from the bustle of the city
Though it was no different from any other day
I thought I would repeat such pattern of life
And tears welled up suddenly
Feeling weak and wretched
Uneasy and lonely
I wanted some warmth
In a faint voice
But it's certain you appeared suddenly
And a ray of light shone in my darkness
You smiled a little, told me it was all right with a nod
Took my hand and started to walk
I saw an angel's wings on your back
It was not because I wanted to be dull to pain
That I wished to be strong
I was helped and supported by you
We gave and forgave each other
I got what I wanted to protect
On that day
Sometimes you are too unprotected
And come face to face with me with all your might
It's so much dazzling
That I even spare the time of a blink
You have an angel's wings on your back
I heartily hope that you will not be
A victim of this sad age
I sing this song today just as I pray
So that my dearest wish may reach you
Princess Hinata, (New OC of mine)
I really liked how it turned out >.< Took a LOOONG Time, er 12 hours or so
anyways I hope it goes over well
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Sis, I absolutely adore your dress designs <33 she looks cute on that dress!
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Thanks so much 
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If I may critique?
First off, the eyes on this picture are absolutely gorgeous, in both color and shading. She does look a bit wall-eyed, though. But even with this flaw, in my opinion, the eyes are beautifully done and are the strongest part of the piece.
I do think that you seem to resort to the : D face a lot. But in this picture, it fits and gives the character a lot of expression. You're an artist with great potential, and I suggest practicing pictures that have a sadder mood.
I'm not quite sure about this- it could just be the perspective- but her arms seem too short beyond the elbow. Arms are usually longest from the elbow to the wrist. It seems in this picture that this section of the arm is shorter than from the shoulder to the elbow. Again though, might just be perspective.
The hands are excellent. Well done on those
The hair is also very pretty and looks like it hangs naturally. I like the small curls in her hair. It makes her seem carefree and adds to the picture's joyous mood.
On further inspection, I noticed that the eyes don't sit quite right. I suggest that, when you draw pictures such as these where the character's head is at an angle, you rotate the image when you draw the eyes. It really helps. (If your art program doesn't have this function, I believe GIMP 2 has it, as does Corel Painter.)
As with all of your art, the coloring and shading is simply excellent. It looks very professional. I especially like the little 'sunburnt' spots on her shoulders and the feathers in the air!
All in all, this art piece is great, but has a few flaws. However, I think that you have great potential and that the good of this piece overpowers the bad.
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Thanks so much
The eyes looked a little off to me too, trying new styles I think that next time I will make the whites of the eye smaller.
And thank you I will keep all those tips in mind =3 <333
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I want to hear that song
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Its called Angel's Song by Ayumi Hamasaki
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Just heard it ... and I love it <3
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Shes my idol
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Well I will hear them ;D
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Thanks so much
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You're welcome >w<
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