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Published: 2012-06-27 22:12:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 2543; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 27
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Little doodle
I love girls with Blue hair 
Might make her a Pokemon OC
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Comments: 44
Really cute!! Is that mira (your ao no exorsist oc)?
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A little bit of artistic critique- her top half appears too large for her legs and her knees are uneven. I'd widen the hips so they're not narrower than the shoulders and maybe make her whole top half smaller. Her center of gravity is way off of what it would be for an actual person. Have you tried doing a basic frame work in your sketches? It helps a ton with anatomy if you're struggling with it.
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Really nice, I admire the way you color, and the character looks lively and happy
Only thing that's bugging me is her knees
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you're welcome. I've glanced at most of your artwork (and pictures...you're quite cute) and I like it a lot.
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Thats really sweet <33 Thanks
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Wow, awesome job, you should definitely draw a full body pic of her. ^^
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really nice work, the pose is very natural and the lines are clean, and the anatomy is pretty good, . i like the way you shade, im a fan of using nice dark colors that stick out for shading >3<
the only thing is her shirt looks off. i can't think of the words but basically its kinda stiff and the folds aren't falling... naturally?
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THanks and yeah a bit xD
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I do believe your, how to say this, body placement is getting better. Your older works seem a little stiff, but this girl looks more relaxed. However, for future reference, I would recommend having that left leg going down in a more straight line, which would be holding her up. Also, while I of course respect your style (anime is very varied) I would say perhaps you could make her irises either smaller or thinner, and/or her eyelids closed a tad more. That way, you could direct her line of view more, making the picture feel more personal. All around, this is a nice picture, and your effort shows.
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Thanks I will continue to work hard
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I hope you do! That's what we artists MUST do.
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Thank you dear <3
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What a cute OC so far <3 I Love her wardrobe; she kinda does dress like a young woman XD
What's her name, btw?
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Thanks xD and I was thinking Mira
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"Mira is a 17 year old girl from Hoenn. She is Erika s' cousin, but she prefers to live in Hoenn with Norman s' family, or travelling with May, Brendan, and Wally. She also prefers to train normal types. She is Norman s' apprentice and has a personality much like him: paternal, with a calm side. Her pokemon team consist of: Slaking, Clefable, Milktank, Wigglytuff, Furret, Lickykllicky. She also has an "apprentice" Chansey, who cooks for her, and a pet Linoone who acts like a cat."
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You're welcome, and that's a cool name ^^
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How cute! *-* She looks so pretty! I love her hair!
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Thanks so much sweetie <33
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You're welcome dear! >u<
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Your style of drawing is slightly changing the eyes are more cleaner looking!
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Thanks xD and maybe a little better >.<
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