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Naruhina: Star-FallenArt belongs to kivi1230: kivi1230.deviantart.com/
New Idea!!!
Cast:
Hinata: Age-unknown, Immortal, forbidden to fall in love, the only star that has managed to find her destined person, her body is of a star, which is why her skin glows in the moonlight.
Naruto: 17 year old, high school student, in love with Sakura, is granted one wish.
Sakura: 17 year old, high school student, in love with Sasuke
Sasuke: 17 years old, high school student
Itachi: 22 years old, Sasuke's brother, former teacher
(MORE ON THE WAY)
(Note: No Ninjas, Naruto lives alone, Minato and Kushina are not alive in this fanfic)
Plot:
It was a typical day in Konoha. Naruto was at school as usual with his friends. Naruto has
always been in love with his childhood friend, Sakura, who unfortunately did not return
those feelings. But one fateful night, as Naruto blankly stared up at the night sky, he
spotted a shooting star. This particular shooting star, was making its way down to Earth
crashing into Naruto's backyard. Naruto, completely startled ran to his backyard to
examine this bizarre star. Naruto's eyes widen and his heart beat fast as he stared
mesmerized by a beautiful girl. Her long dark blue hair flowing in the wind, her bright
white eyes sparkling. Her fair skin twinkled in the moon light. As she met his gaze, she
smiled. This girl's name is Hinata. She is a shooting star. Every shooting star has a
destined dream, to grant one's wish. Hinata's destined person is Naruto. She has come to
him, to grant him one wish. However, these particular stars are forbidden to fall in love.
Hinata may not know what will happen if she does fall in love, but love is always worth it
Not every love story has a happy ending, but for Naruto and Hinata.... well you'll
just have to find out for yourself
COMING SOON!!!
Comments: 30
really good. i hope you making this idea to a good story.
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I like very much this plot. I want to read this story.
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Yay! Thank you! Look forward to it! <3
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Ok! I'm waiting the fist chapter.
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Seems interesting, though it reminds me of something that I saw or read..
Anyways, I'm interested in reading it.
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Thank you! I know it isn't very original but I have lots of twists and great moments to write in it <3
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Awesome, I look forward to reading it c:
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YAYAAYAYY
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Reminds me a little of this one movie: Stardust. Sounds interesting all the more!
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ooo I love that movie! and yeah thanks! <3
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I like the idea, but it raises two questions: 1) How is Naruto Hinata's destined person if her kind of stars are forbidden to love? Seems contradictory, but if you have a reason, then never mind. 2) Can we assume Hinata is fully clothed when she lands in Naruto's backyard? XD Sorry. Hahaha. Just the thought of her being a star made me wonder whether or not she would have clothes when she landed. Could be an opportunity for some Ero-sennin level humor. XD
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Both questions are answered in the first chapter XD. It explains everything pretty nicely. I just didn't want to give away why because it's basically very important to the whole story and is really a big reveal, haha and I haven't figured that yet, I mean for the first chapter I imagined her as a star, stars are quite bright I would think so bright, you wouldn't really see the details of her body like her boobs or anything like that, everything is covered by the illumination of her lightΒ
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Ah, true, true. But Naruto could still have a moment where he thinks, "Wait. If her whole body glows and all I can see is her glowing...then that means..." *nose erupts in blood as he realizes there's no clothes on her to block some of the glow* XD
Not that I'm pushing for a pervy joke. It just crossed my mind and made me laugh.
The story idea sounds really interesting, though. Can't wait to see the first chapter. ^_^
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lmaooo Yeah, I'm using Naruto's full personality here so maybe I could do something pervy XD hehehee and yes thank you! I always love your comments <3
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Hahaha. Glad I could help. ^_^
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So-so. Be better than that. Be better than me. You writing was good, but I want great!!!! Be better than me. Be better than anything or anyone's. Be 105% YOU!!!
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Lol XD I read this comment and immediately started smiling and laughing. Well of course I will be me. This was just the beginning and a quick draft of my writing I hope I Β please you. I'll do my bestΒ
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All right, but just for now.
"The Eye's"
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