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Published: 2003-08-26 00:01:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 15125; Favourites: 540; Downloads: 155
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Remember the time when you were dead?You woke up in a coffin instead of a bed.
Fate has decided fate must be true,
But come on and tell me why must it be you?
I see you behind the mirrored glass,
Straight jacket muzzle mask,.
Kicking and screaming tied to a chair.
Come on and tell me, this just isnβt fair.
Its time to go and leave this place,
Lay to rest, and forget that face.
Now its over you can breathe,
We know your safe, and I can leave.
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Leave this place.
never i would,
where madness reigns glee retains.
A marbled stare of malice and chalice.
I never forget a face my friend.
As that chair and muzzle their says the straight...
the crooked or narrow.
I see the far beyond...
beyond your crooked smile.
Doctor please sink the needle in, death will smile right at you.
You ve done a good deed, and so they say...
but should you not crack open the mirror.
Terror i see in your eyes,
and i cant begin to visualize ,
what terror haunts your tempered step...
as you gasp... at what you left.
felt you needed another ending to your poem. -_0
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nice poem i like it
oh look I'm so early (sarcasm)
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That is truly a good poem, very well written
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omg...this poem is amazing. I wish I could write like this.
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you should write more, honestly! this one is great!
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amazing poem I write poems myself
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may i have permission to expand this poem and turn it into a song?
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dark brandon; i must say thats even better than mine. bravo! bravo!
toon brandon dabs his eyes with a handkerchief "beautiful sob"
mean brandon: even i'm speechless.
diva brandon: it's got a flow to it i approve.
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omg ur a true poet i wish i could rite like that
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This is really good, it tells a stroy and has a lot of depth to it. Amazing.
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I really like this poem. It's chilling, yet positive at the end in a way. Great job!
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beuatiful, the only word descirable for this
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Really.REALLY beautyful!!!!!!!! It is just beautiful!!!!!!
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AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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That's amazing. love the rhythm it has. it flows nicely,
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is this about anyone in particular?
if you dont want to tell me you dont have to
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dood, it recalls to 1 of my dreams I had...
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