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mint-chocolatechip — Punk Princess
Published: 2009-08-28 23:34:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 558; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 11
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Just a rough sketch.My scanner hates me. ;-;
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It's looks good so far, but I'll give you a few crits from what I can see:
(I was actually going to make a redline but I don't see that many mistakes to make one.)
1.) The eyes are a tad mismeasured. (I make the same mistake.) one one eye is bigger than the other. (A tip on how to work on that is drawing a straight line in the middle of the eyes and see if the pupils match up. If they don't then one's too big/too small/etc.)
2.) This might be intentional but when you measure straight down the face, the eyes, the nose and mouth all measure up right down the middle. The mouth is too far to the right. (But that might be intentional to give her some attitude.)
3.) My little brother saw this. I'm not too sure if it's right but I'll put it up anyway. The boobs are too far apart and one is a tad bigger than the other.
4.) She has chunky hair at the top. That must be some really powerful hair gel. The hair at the bottom looks fine but usually when hair is up in a ponytail it's more stringy.
5.) Lastly, the leg on the right looks like she popped it out of place. I think possibly you were trying to draw a knee?
But otherwise it's a great pic. It's quite creative and different.
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Thanks~
Yeah the eyes... I was originally drawing her face tilted a bit but I changed that. I guess I forgot to fix her eyes.
The mouth was supposed to be that way for her expression, I guess it might look a bit off though.
I don't know about the boobs thing. I thought because of the way she's posed with one shoulder higher than the other would cause her chest to move the same way.
Chunky hair? I was trying to give it that spiky/choppy look but I must've done something wrong. XD
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i think she looks really cute mina
she's gonna look even more awesome when she's colored!
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Thank you!
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ur welcome!
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This one is really really good! 
keep up the good work, I like it :3
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I wish I had money to buy that, but NO, I have "normal clothes" 
Awesome Job
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Me too.
Thank you!
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Very nice. :3
You're style has changed a bit, I've noticed. Or maybe its just this pic? Either way, I like it.
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Thank you!
Maybe? I've been trying different things.
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They way I've seen it, you need to make the lineart darker for the scanner to pick it up... it does stuff like that to me all the time
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I think it's just my scanner...
On the old scanner I had a long time ago it would scan the sketches like this: [link] but they weren't any darker than my sketches now.
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That sucks D: I hope you'll be able to find a way to get them in better, though
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