Hiyarukia [2013-04-10 11:11:37 +0000 UTC]
Awsome! I love it! Please continue this
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SouthernWriter2 [2012-11-25 03:36:51 +0000 UTC]
Best yet. I loved the suspense and the information you used. Just 2 thingsFirst, what does -TWD-TWD- mean?Second, it's "beat," not "bet."
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Minty-Nutmeg In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2012-11-25 12:06:47 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thanks so much dude! :'D Really glad you think so, it took me a while to write this one up - though, surprisingly, the action scene was relatively easy to write. I think it's a change from the usual slow and steady pace I go at XDAh, I forgot to clean that up! :0 That little -TWD-TWD- thing was so I could easily see the kinda flashback scene separated from when Glenn and Jeanie are out of the building :L Righty-ho, I'll go fix those two things now - thanks for pointing them out!
SouthernWriter2 In reply to Minty-Nutmeg [2012-11-25 17:03:04 +0000 UTC]
ok, then.