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shirohiru [2012-01-26 23:57:41 +0000 UTC]

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my first critique (´・ω・｀) hope it is ok (´・ω・｀)

pertama! for color exercise, this is already good. I love the gentle colors. the BG is also suitable as a simple atmosphere, as well the sweet expression.. (´・ω・｀)

The second ... about anatomy. anatomy is already pretty good. shoulder with her head just right. but the hands of the bottom ... err .. I forget its name, the part after the elbow was - hehe - a little bit 'awkward' lol //slapped (╯⊙ ω ⊙╰ ）. in a sense too straight. just look at your own hands as a reference. the hand after the elbow was actually somewhat inflated first and then decreases towards the palm. (´・ω・｀)

the belending on her cloth is already nice, but not really following the flow of the flying dress. actually this is a soft and mild clothes? (´・ω・｀) try to crshing a tissue and blow it. that is a good reference in my opinion. you can use everything to be your reference

overall this is nice. keep working! ＼(o￣▽￣o)/

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kuroshiin [2012-01-26 16:16:20 +0000 UTC]

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maaf paka bahasa indonesia.. XD

tulang lehernya diperhatikan lho~ shading kulit harus sesuai dengan gestur tubuhnya. Sesuai dengan otot otot badannya.
renda-renda bajunya masih kaku. Coba diperhatikan lagi dan mencoba untuk menggambar lebih detail dan beri shading yang pas sesuai lipatannya.
yah warnanya sudah lumayan bagus,tapi kurang kelembutan
nah,Saat menggambar yang seperti ini,seharusnya sih diperhatikan terus suasana dalam gambar ini.
terutama pada kainnya. Ini kain ringan kan? kenapa harus dibuat jadi kaku? kainnya diperhalus juga. Kamu pake SAI kan? pakai saja water colour yg dicampur dengan marker. Nanti saat dioleskan,di tarik dengan lembut kebawah.
sekian,ini adalah kritik dari saya,semoga berguna untukmu. ^^

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Souruuriin [2012-02-12 20:00:37 +0000 UTC]

this is soo cute O7O

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Manz99 [2012-01-28 02:30:13 +0000 UTC]

All perfect~ Bagi saya lah xD
Your colouring was awesome!
Do you making speedpaint?

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Iksia [2012-01-27 02:55:42 +0000 UTC]

btw , skintone dan hair color-nya bagus~ w suka banget cara lu paint rambutnya, I love pink~ xD

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Iksia [2012-01-27 02:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Say, di rumah ada printer? kalo ada coba di print gambar ini, item putih juga gpp
W mau besok kita bahas bentar nih gambar oke? Pas setengah jam sblm sesi selesai

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Nee-han [2012-01-27 01:31:41 +0000 UTC]

so pretty she looks so innocent and cute

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chiikyourisenka [2012-01-27 00:59:23 +0000 UTC]

aih adik ini
/shot

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Toriichi [2012-01-27 00:08:47 +0000 UTC]

so sweet~~

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PuiMei [2012-01-26 20:04:47 +0000 UTC]

*Q* <3

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Loiralae [2012-01-26 18:30:04 +0000 UTC]

Ah. I love how you shaded her dress!
So flowy and air-like. :)(:

haha. is she eating that flower?

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NagishaDrazuki [2012-01-26 16:50:16 +0000 UTC]

waaaaa such an adorable character >_____< wonderful training, but so cute with the flower <33

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animeluver222 [2012-01-26 16:22:48 +0000 UTC]

so nice. Bagus sekali.

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minataka94 [2012-01-26 15:51:54 +0000 UTC]

mon, coba deh lu kalo gambar kanvasnya gak cuma gede, tapi savenya di PNG juga, supaya kualitasnya lebih keliatan, soalnya yg ini gambarnya keliatan agak pecah gmn gitu padahal koloringnya udah bagus QvQ

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