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MiraAngelBiersack — Children Of The Dark
Published: 2012-03-04 02:37:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 218; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 5
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Description We are the ultimate outcasts
We are the kids your parents tell you to stay away from
The night is when we feed
And the day is when we sleep
With a roar we wake up
With a roar we fall asleep
And with a roar we greet
We are  the ghosts that haunt the darkest corner of your soul
The knife that tear you appart
We will make you bleed
Bleed till youre as dry as a desert
Every single drop of happiness and hope we´ll steal
Because we are the children of the dammed
And we couldnt care less...
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Comments: 4

MiraAngelBiersack [2012-04-09 08:22:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I didnt knew my writting helped you that much, but thank you very much for all these nice words. And there will be more of me in the future, I´m just not that productive, hehe.

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rikeem [2012-03-05 23:00:59 +0000 UTC]

this poem said it all

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MiraAngelBiersack In reply to rikeem [2012-04-07 08:34:55 +0000 UTC]

Im really glad you like my work^^ but tell me, what was good about it? and what was bad? I want to improve, thats why I´m asking^^
But thanks^^

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rikeem In reply to MiraAngelBiersack [2012-04-08 02:33:38 +0000 UTC]

It speaks to me. Your poem spoke the truth, straight forward to the point. As a proud African American Goth girl that grew up with deeply religious people,i find i hard to show my true self. After i have read your poem, it gave me the spirit to move on and be the real me not matter what. So really i should be thanking you. To tamper with the poetic, realist talent that you have is insane. plus this is poem is a showman's ship of how you feel,whether i have a say so in it or not. Without further ado, THANK YOU for your expressive poem of truth, i hope to see more of you in the future.

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