CurseByChance [2008-10-23 04:58:10 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm....
I really like the idea, but your layout looks funny.
Krypto dominates the picture, being the only light object, and draws a lot of attention away from Ace.
And the perpsective on the building looks strange next to the picture in the background. They don't mesh well. I think maybe if the skyline was visible in the city it would make more sense artistically.
Also, the blue lighting is inconsistent. It's really noticable on Krypto, and hardly visible at all on Ace, who is almost directly behind him.
"Advanced Critique Encouraged," right? ^_^;
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