Comments: 23
twilitmint [2014-10-18 14:20:08 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
first off, i really love the concept here. the colours are really soft and warm, and you blended cold and warm colours perfectly.
the vision/concept is really original, and the abstract-ness of the painting is wonderful. as for technique, the softness in the sky and on the hill (?) looks really nice + the shading is sublime
but as i mentioned earlier, but there are a few technical errors :>
firstly, the bunny's left eye is a little too far to the right, and it makes her look rather awkward. secondly, i don't think the fox's hand is needed- it interferes with the flow of the drawing and it makes its form look odd.
but besides those small errors, the piece looks great! it's really calming to look at and there are so many nice, small details, like the fur-texutre on their coat & the way the fox's glow illuminates the bunny & the lovely shading/detail in the bunny's hair! i really love this drawing, it's one of the nicest i have seen (:
wonderful job!
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doozle-lange In reply to twilitmint [2014-10-18 16:55:55 +0000 UTC]
If the fox's hand stayed, I would have drawn it closer to the body. Seemed to flow better closer to the body.
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Miranduless In reply to twilitmint [2014-10-18 14:23:33 +0000 UTC]
thank you so so much!!!!!!! >u<
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twilitmint In reply to Miranduless [2014-10-18 17:41:41 +0000 UTC]
no problem! :> (i hope the critique wasn't too harsh)
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Miranduless In reply to twilitmint [2014-10-18 19:06:11 +0000 UTC]
not at all i LOVE critiquesso much they make me improve!! >u<
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twilitmint In reply to Miranduless [2014-10-19 14:01:19 +0000 UTC]
same here, however, critiques tend to be hard to get on deviantArt, sadly :>
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Miranduless In reply to twilitmint [2014-10-21 16:50:22 +0000 UTC]
i'll critique you tomorrow!!!! >u<
remind me!
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opcodejoe [2017-01-30 21:09:08 +0000 UTC]
i know i've got a mind in the gutter.
But be aware, that from a distance, this picture can look like someone's stomach, genitalia, and an orange blob floating over (if not an orange head of hair).
even the bump between the rock and the slope looks like a hip bone. LOL
no big deal, gives me an idea to try making one of those pictures made up of lots of little pictures...
cool picture!!
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Miranduless In reply to opcodejoe [2017-01-30 22:24:50 +0000 UTC]
JESUS OMG I'm crying LMAO
Cool way of swing things though😂😂😂
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TenshiAya [2014-11-23 00:36:55 +0000 UTC]
so cute! >w<
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Catface350 [2014-11-07 22:41:28 +0000 UTC]
That looks so awesome, love it!!!!
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Miranduless In reply to JukitaChan [2014-11-07 07:37:50 +0000 UTC]
ajasksdajkh graciaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaas<3!!! >u<<<
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UsagiChanchan [2014-10-19 22:11:25 +0000 UTC]
me encanta cómo lo plasmas!! los colores tan suaves y contrastantes!
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HotaruSenpai [2014-10-18 20:08:36 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh this is amazingggg
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Samonsea [2014-10-18 15:56:35 +0000 UTC]
cute!
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