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MisiekPL — The Art of Speed (Commission)
#oc #pegasus #zephyrleaf #bandana #googles #mylittlepony #originalcharacter #skateboard #friendshipismagic
Published: 2016-12-18 13:35:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1027; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 11
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A bit of a challenge with the pose but overall I think it turned out fine.
Hope you like it!
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OC "Zephyr Leaf" belongs to sonic-itasha
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Comments and Critiques are welcome!
If you liked this art, then go ahead and watch me! Thanks!
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(Tylko w języku polskim): Naprawdę lubiłem rysunek kucyka na deskorolce robi sztukę prędkością. Co mu przykuł moją uwagę jest cieniowanie, oprócz włosy i skrzydła perspektywy wyglądają bardzo dobrze w przeciwieństwie do całego ciała. Włosy Widziałem przetarty szczotki zęby wygląda.Wszystkie zasadniczo w tym samym kierunku, a nie jest w sposób losowy. Inną rzeczą, jaką lubię były brwi, które również lewego oka.Fundusz jest spektakularny, zwłaszcza po prawej stronie jest prawie czarny kolor, a reszta jest metaliczny szary.Wreszcie ja zostałem bardzo dobrze, chociaż nie było różnicy w tym, trzymaj je z rysunkami, nadzieję, że w dalszym ciągu rozwijać się w tym wszystkim, jest rysowanie i malowanie.
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Translating a critique using google translator is pointless.
English people won't read it cause it's polish and polish people won't read cause it's an illegible polish.
Take it as a advice from me if you want to make critiques.
Either learn english, write in your native language(I assume it's spanish) or don't critique at all.
I appreciate your inside but I'm gonna reject this.
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It looks really good and the shading, and perspectives are done quite well, but I think that the wings are shaded to differently from the rest of the body so it looks like the wings are not part of him, and the hair looks a bit awkward, because of how random the hair are moving. The hair almost looks like a frayed hair brush, the individual strands look nice, but have them all going in the same direction instead of randomly. Other then that though, it looks very good and is a job well done, his expression is nice and the picture flows nicely!!! : D
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I'm almost sure you're referring to his tail. And I'll admit that I could do this better. I wasn't too sure about the direction in which the wind would go. That must have been what screwed me.
About the wings, this was actually a bit of experiment gone wrong. I was trying to do a bit of different shading on the furred body (so whole body, except wings) to give it more fluffy/fur feeling. Naturally the wings were not drawn this way so it messed up my colours a bit.
Thank you for this detailed critique! It's nice to have someone to point out my errors so I can watch out for them later.
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Yeah I was talking about the tail, but yeah I understand, hair is confusing with wind, I'm helpless at it : P
Ah, well it's always good to try something new every one and a while, even if it doesn't work out the way you wanted it to
And of course! I can't wait to see how you continue to improve! : D
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Cool! I like the pose, it's very dynamic. Nice job ^w^
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Thank you.
Good to know it turned out as intended.
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You're welcome!
I'm really glad you like it.
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