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Published: 2010-12-05 23:40:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 892; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 11
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I love Spring <3
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MS Paint
Iaza
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(This is like a crit, but I have no premium membership)
First off, the good side-
I have seen some of your earlier art, and I must say in the past year, your art has improved a great deal! Why I chose this to comment is this: I love the colours. They are quite divine-and I love the way that Mercury-and the clouds-are appearing to jump out of the scenery. The shading is marvelous, and the cloud designs are quite nice! I also love the way that you didn't need to blur the clouds, and make them look nice. The mountains in the background blend well to the piece. This scenery is a perfect example of what I personally picture when I think of the season of Spring. The way the light shines off of the flowers and Mercury's hair are quite nice.
And now the part that hopefully helps you as an artist-
I personally think that the sun is quite nice, but I think there could have been another shade of yellow before the fading colours, and while I'm on the sun-I think you should take notice that some of the fur on her back could have had a shade of a lighter purple or white, showing where the sun is reflecting light off her fur. You may want to take some other notice that you could have put other shades of purple in the eyes and blended them.
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Unfortunately I am a pencil artist, and I don't use colour often. Altogether. It's a great piece, and it's hard for mento detect flaws in it, but I hope this helped you!
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Thanks for the critic!
I'll definatly take your points into consideration next time :3
Heheh you picked out my highlight fault xD
This has helped :3
Thanks again <3
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This was done on MS paint? Really? When I saw this on your profile I thought: "Oh cool Photoshop drawing"
Excellent Job!
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Yup MS Paint, I find doing pixel work on a pixel only program a whole lot easier x w x
Plus photoshop = bleh!
Why thank you :3
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..Yeah it was
I do a lot of my pixel work on paint xD it's easier lol
But I used Iaza to turn the bg invisible xDD
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lawl, I despise paint ^^' it's only one layer, and that's what I hate the most.
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this is awesome, beautiful colours and the background is just so peaceful looking
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Thanks <3
I was going for that effect yey
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this is beautiful Hikari >w<
I love the shading and background <3
and the colors is amazing, your one of my fave artist Hikair
I want you to know that
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Glad you like it Ann <3
Aww jeez I'm so honored >///<
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I love it
lol x3 it's true c:
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Eehee.. 
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O.M.Chizz oAo That's so amazing~*** I LOVE your use of colours. Mixed with your style it's absolutely gorgeous~* ♥♥♥
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Dude the stule ruins this lol xDD
But thanks <3
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Oh Nicole this is so beautiful..
The colors, their fantastic!
I feel like I'm peering into a gorgeous valley, the mountains look so good..
and the clouds, and the light radiating off the sun, its fantastic.
Your color choice is stunning, as always. But this piece especially.
And I also notice the little hearts in Mercury's design x3
I like that alot, its very creative ^^
This is amazing, you really are improving all the time.
I love you <3
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But it's ruined Lauren D: I really hate it
Glad you like the colours though, I worked hard getting all of them xDD
Bah they could be better :1
xDD Hearst for Chizzle <33
Really you think so ?
I love you to
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I love it lol
its just, so simplistic in complicated ways.
Lauren likes that type of shit c:
Naw! Hearts for Chizzle! <3
Well she greatly appreciates it <3
Hell yeah I think so!
It's incredible, really.
Always always always <3
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