Comments: 11
oikg800 [2010-06-06 08:34:36 +0000 UTC]
wow i mean wow its truly beautiful in a way of friendship. i wish for you to continue with it it feels like its missing more than what it truly is.
and Jack (the real one ) is experiencing the most wanted emotion in life love
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Lolibeagle In reply to oikg800 [2012-10-29 06:18:52 +0000 UTC]
I agree this story you wrote is just beautiful and it would make me very happy to see you continue with it because it has an almost unfinished touchy feel to it (does that make sense?)
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MissKeith In reply to oikg800 [2010-06-07 02:55:02 +0000 UTC]
Aw. Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it! at some point I will continue. As of right now i'm working on a fan comic adaption of a story I wrote.
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MissKeith In reply to oikg800 [2010-06-07 20:55:40 +0000 UTC]
Okie Dokie
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0ArmoredSoul0 [2009-03-19 04:28:52 +0000 UTC]
I really, Really, REALLY want to give Jack (the real one) a very big hug.
Guy needs it now more than ever it seems.
...
Will this be continuing?
I know it says Part 2 of 2, but it seems...
Unfinished.
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MissKeith In reply to 0ArmoredSoul0 [2009-03-22 02:07:43 +0000 UTC]
Well, yes and no. I originally had intended for the story to have n actual ending...but, leaving the reader wondering exactly how it ends seems a little more rewarding. I have thought about writing a one-shot to follow up the story, but its on the back burner.
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0ArmoredSoul0 In reply to MissKeith [2009-03-22 05:09:53 +0000 UTC]
It really does make one wonder, you did a good job on that part.
The one shot would be nice, just to wrap up the series, but I understand where you're coming from.
Allowing the reader's mind to fly is a most rewarding experience.
^^
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Bellette [2009-02-07 01:04:16 +0000 UTC]
Cold and melaconlic as the colors of the picture. And nice as the other aftermath chapter ^^
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MissKeith [2009-02-04 07:22:08 +0000 UTC]
Finally, I have internet again! Woo...anyway, I really like way the piece for this story turned out, with the blue and all. I hae a fondness for this story, because it really has no beginning or ending...it is what it is; and it is a fluffy relationship between two people that arose from caos. Well...that's my rant. Hope you enjoyed the read...or the art, whichever floats your boat.
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me.
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