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SaraPlutonium [2010-10-08 19:14:29 +0000 UTC]
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I'm not all that familiar with Final Fantasy and its world, but judging from the reference image you used of Gurdy, you did an excellent job portraying her in your own style! It was too nice of a drawing not to give a healthy critique on.
I haven't done this in a while, so bear with me. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>
First of all, may I say that the rendering of the clothing is fantastic. Absolutely stunning. I literally sat in front of my computer staring at the clothing alone for a good five minutes straight - no exaggeration. Again, even though this was referenced using an image from the game, you have a great handle on how clothes should fold and the physics involved. The reason I say that is because despite using a screenshot, you managed to keep the material looking natural and loose, as it should be.
The shading also should be noted - I'm in awe! I love how you use several different shading techniques all in one piece... it gives the whole thing a nice, stylized look and is very pleasing to the eye. The use of both crosshatching and smudging really stands out to me. Man, I wish I had the patience to shade as nicely as you do!
Another thing I really want to point out is how you infused your own style into the piece. I can't tell you enough how much I love your style! Comparing this to the original character, I noticed you changed how the eyes look, and I love that little touch.
The only one thing I would have changed is the line right in the middle of her cape(?) that shows where the fold is. It seems a bit too thick and dark toward the end of the line. I would have smoothed out the end of the line into the cloth a bit more, so it doesn't appear so abrupt.
So this sounds like a big ball of praise and not a very good critique, but I honestly have nothing bad to say about this. Everything about this piece is well-drawn and there's so many wonderful details to look at - like the stitching in the clothing and the bits of fur around her face and ears.
Once again, beautiful job! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/>
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Jonatan [2011-11-17 22:31:01 +0000 UTC]
Whenever I see this I can picture her saying "OMF WTG!?"
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Mitch-el In reply to Jonatan [2011-11-27 04:48:45 +0000 UTC]
Ha-ha.
-- Mitch
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woerst-caese [2011-08-10 12:34:20 +0000 UTC]
so sweet
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sharkie19 [2010-09-10 03:14:50 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! I like what you've done with her eyes. I think I like your drawing more than your reference. X)
I think the shading could be a little bit darker in some places and blend some more with the lineart. Do you smudge the graphite?
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RikuZegram [2010-09-08 01:44:14 +0000 UTC]
Gosh I love that game. I was actually JUST playing it today. Weird XD
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Mitch-el In reply to RikuZegram [2010-09-08 02:55:58 +0000 UTC]
Woah, really? Weird, indeed.
-- Mitch
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RikuZegram In reply to Mitch-el [2010-09-08 03:36:28 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, my friend was borrowing it, and when he gave it back today, I had the urge to pick up where I left off with the hunts.
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Mitch-el In reply to RikuZegram [2010-09-08 19:13:30 +0000 UTC]
Ha-ha. I see. Cool. What percentage of the game have you completed? I take it you've finished almost all of the hunts.
-- Mitch
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RikuZegram In reply to Mitch-el [2010-09-09 00:12:00 +0000 UTC]
I beat the storyline. And I actually only just beat that big turtle in the desert
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lvl27-Cubone [2010-09-08 01:20:51 +0000 UTC]
YOU DREW A FREAKING MOOGLE!!!!!!!!! AAAH! CHOCOBO, NOW!
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Hannahmation [2010-09-07 23:14:27 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome! I loooove the details and shading. Nicely done, dude. Nicely done!
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Jay-Essence [2010-09-07 23:02:34 +0000 UTC]
Omygosh! That's so cute! I really like the different tones and shades of grey you made. Great job! Keep it up!
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DisfiguredStick [2010-09-07 23:00:42 +0000 UTC]
Very cute and nicely drawn!
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