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Mitch-el — Morning Stretch - Take Two

Published: 2008-05-15 00:44:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 909; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 10
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Description A second take on the first "Morning Stretch" composition that I completed a few days back.

One of the deviantArt members who commented on the previous piece suggested that I lighten the background -- make it a yellow-ish/white tone so as to make the foreground pop out more. I decided to give it a shot and... I do like the result. I think that I may have made the background a little too bright, but other than that it seems to work all right. Thanks for the advice ~mebay!

Advanced critique is encouraged, as always.

-- Mitch

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Comments: 19

MtheMagnificent [2023-10-21 22:51:51 +0000 UTC]

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EternallyOptimistic [2008-07-25 03:00:12 +0000 UTC]

That is nice - those colors work well together.

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Mitch-el In reply to EternallyOptimistic [2008-07-29 18:42:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

-- Mitch

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EternallyOptimistic In reply to Mitch-el [2008-08-05 00:07:55 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Peace-love-frogs [2008-05-16 12:22:52 +0000 UTC]

that was a good idea, now the picture looks brighter and much more happy!

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Mitch-el In reply to Peace-love-frogs [2008-05-16 19:31:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Props goes to ~mebay for the suggestion. Heheh.

-- Mitch

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Peace-love-frogs In reply to Mitch-el [2008-05-16 22:41:10 +0000 UTC]

well, good job to both of you, it looks great

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Mitch-el In reply to Peace-love-frogs [2008-05-17 00:28:49 +0000 UTC]

Heheh. Thanks!

-- Mitch

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The-Vampire-Danchan [2008-05-16 04:53:09 +0000 UTC]

I like the yellow background, it does make it pop out a bit more

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Mitch-el In reply to The-Vampire-Danchan [2008-05-16 19:30:08 +0000 UTC]

I think so, too.

Thanks!

-- Mitch

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Simba83 [2008-05-16 02:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Nothing better than the first morning stretch!! haha

very nice pic!! ^^

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Mitch-el In reply to Simba83 [2008-05-16 02:42:28 +0000 UTC]

Heheh. Thank you!

-- Mitch

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mebay [2008-05-15 04:40:34 +0000 UTC]

Very well done! That backgound is so much better. It really makes the motive pop. Actully it makes the whole pic more interesting. There's not so much detail that it's confusing.
I'm very glad I could help you! Keep it up and goog luck!

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Mitch-el In reply to mebay [2008-05-15 06:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you very much! I was rather worried that you wouldn't like it -- thought that the background was too bright. Heh.

Thank you very much, once again, for the comments and critique! It is most appreciated.

-- Mitch

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softballchick94 [2008-05-15 04:32:04 +0000 UTC]

GREAT JOB!! THE BACKROUND ROCKS!!!

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Mitch-el In reply to softballchick94 [2008-05-15 06:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

-- Mitch

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softballchick94 In reply to Mitch-el [2008-05-16 22:31:28 +0000 UTC]

NO PROBLEM!!!!!

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SmandyDandy [2008-05-15 01:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Morton! And the backround looks great

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Mitch-el In reply to SmandyDandy [2008-05-15 04:21:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

-- Mitch

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