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NavyBr0wnie [2011-04-17 20:49:43 +0000 UTC]
aaandd tacos...interesting story though
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NavyBr0wnie In reply to MitchtheFox [2011-04-18 11:10:14 +0000 UTC]
2 things one you said you needed therapy.... So you can't have therapy with out tacos and 2 it's I guess like a catch phrase in a sense so um.... Taco libre
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MitchtheFox In reply to NavyBr0wnie [2011-04-18 14:37:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh, for a second there i thought you were talking about Aeris's... you get the point.
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NavyBr0wnie In reply to MitchtheFox [2011-04-19 02:20:20 +0000 UTC]
wow some ones weird... its okay i can get that way also...but seriously? wow..just wow wrong taco... although...eh..never mind.
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NavyBr0wnie In reply to MitchtheFox [2011-04-19 03:47:36 +0000 UTC]
its just ow that..err when i was typeing earliar a couple of thoughts found thyre way intome head and um lets say they shouldnt be said on a post like this and i do respct wemon and men of all ages
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NavyBr0wnie In reply to MitchtheFox [2011-04-20 04:32:50 +0000 UTC]
Ah... Since we have seem to keep in conversation might as well friend me and watch me so I can has easier contact I guess oh and I can wait for nxt chapter
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hondu24 [2011-03-09 02:29:51 +0000 UTC]
cool one
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Pwnagepony777 [2011-02-26 03:59:47 +0000 UTC]
I like this! However, I didnt know hitting a girl...in...her pussy...hurted so much....u-unless....you....shove it r-ight up?
Oh god, I must gag now.
But anyway, I still think this was a good story.
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MitchtheFox In reply to Pwnagepony777 [2011-02-26 04:13:07 +0000 UTC]
not to make you throw up anymore but...
Guys=Bag
Girls=Hole
it'll hurt no matter wut
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Noogai5097 In reply to MitchtheFox [2011-02-26 05:08:55 +0000 UTC]
How is it you know this stuff!? Are you testing this out?!
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MitchtheFox In reply to Noogai5097 [2011-02-26 06:25:59 +0000 UTC]
No. (Oh crap he's figuring it out!!!) But seriously no.
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cybernet600 [2011-02-25 13:11:23 +0000 UTC]
ow thats gotta hurt
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NintendoSegaSonyGuy [2011-02-24 23:03:16 +0000 UTC]
That was very nice. Giving Leo a lead of charge for once. It's shame it's one-shot, though. =/
You should consider continuing this sometime.
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MitchtheFox In reply to NintendoSegaSonyGuy [2011-02-25 01:26:40 +0000 UTC]
already thought of another "first" about the same time with Aeris being healed by Leo for the "cunt punt" so E117 says
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E117 [2011-02-24 21:08:01 +0000 UTC]
Good use of the infamous 'Cunt Punt'! E117 Approves!
But despite some convectional and stylistic errors, this was a good read!
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Noogai5097 In reply to E117 [2011-02-26 05:07:21 +0000 UTC]
I love that you come across, to me, as the sort of "english gentlemen" sterotype, and theeeeeeeen just come and talk about how you approve the use of the "Cunt Punt"! It's actually rather cool.
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E117 In reply to Noogai5097 [2011-02-26 20:54:44 +0000 UTC]
Well, thank you much. I tend to use proper English dialect and form with people who I have little contact with, until I feel a mutual comfortability with the person to use my true American Slang.
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Glandor-Trayce [2011-02-24 06:21:07 +0000 UTC]
This is a very well written story, I sure enjoyed it.
I saw a spelling error here and there, but it wasn't too bad...nothing that was just immediately nagging at me though.
Good read overall :3
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Noogai5097 [2011-02-24 05:29:11 +0000 UTC]
Well damn! It's a bit awkward, but rather funny. Is this just a one time thing, or are you gonna continue this, it is rather entertaining, even if it was a bit crude. Ya know, now that I think about it, I never knew hitting a girl... there... hurt so much, apparently... thanks for the... uh... info =/
Was that a "For the Best" refrence I saw there? In honour of his hiaus? Cheers man, nice one.
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MitchtheFox In reply to Noogai5097 [2011-02-24 05:41:42 +0000 UTC]
1. The "for the best" reference was because i think he'll commit suicide in the story, idk.
2.If it's covered by underwear, it's going to hurt when hit hard enough, Man or Women
3.How would i continue... oh i get it. well, it's already on the comment
oh and thx
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Noogai5097 In reply to MitchtheFox [2011-02-24 15:28:00 +0000 UTC]
So wait, this isn't jus a oneshot? It would be nice to see it continued =/
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MitchtheFox In reply to Noogai5097 [2011-02-25 02:26:57 +0000 UTC]
well, i do suggest you continue yours as well padawon
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MitchtheFox In reply to Noogai5097 [2011-02-25 01:24:54 +0000 UTC]
i'm not sure how, maybe another first time thing. i guess?
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