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eternalJonathan [2018-08-11 20:19:50 +0000 UTC]
Sassy's first speech bubble should be above monster mutts otherwise the dialog is read out of order. Also she should say "I'd like you to meet them"
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MJLegacy In reply to eternalJonathan [2018-08-11 20:28:37 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I think I should have numbered the bubbles in order as a matter of fact, but other then that what do you think of the story?
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