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mmishee ā€” Wendy and Sally

Published: 2010-01-12 14:31:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 4121; Favourites: 162; Downloads: 62
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Description A gift for Sally and Wendy! ^__^
Just to say thanks for being kickety ass friends.

I've been working on this when i havent been working on commissions for about a week, not entirely happy with it, i have to find my own digital style, and then improve it. I'm trying to practise it whenever i can.

Oh yeah, they're on the floor, thats suppose to be carpet 8D ... yeah.

I really hope you guys like it! ^__^

Sally (c)
Wendy (c)
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mmishee In reply to ??? [2010-01-19 04:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks so much for the critique! ^__^

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PhoebeHedgefox In reply to mmishee [2010-01-19 04:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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Manice008 [2010-01-12 17:46:13 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


well lets see here, i'll take a shot at critique.

i have to say u have really mastered your style but that doesn't mean that there is never room for improvement e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

after much looking, one thing i see that sets it off from being perfect is that that there is no shadow connecting them to the floor. This gives it the look that they are floating in water. also with the shading on the fur and air of the two characters (more on the rabbits ear closest to us) looks a little over shaded giving it a more depth picture, like its underwater lol

another tiny thing i think could be added is a darker pupil in the eye, just to give it more soul,character, and expression

thats all i could find that needed a little work. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

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mmishee In reply to Manice008 [2010-01-13 01:22:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique! ^__^

I tried to apply shadow, but that didnt seem to work. Do you think i needed a more solid form of a shadow as opposed to the soft one i used?

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Manice008 In reply to mmishee [2010-01-13 01:23:44 +0000 UTC]

well depending, did you want a more directional light like a sun or more faded shadow like inside a room?

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mmishee In reply to Manice008 [2010-01-13 02:51:01 +0000 UTC]

well it's supposed to be inside a room, they're near a window with natural light

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Manice008 In reply to mmishee [2010-01-13 04:01:06 +0000 UTC]

lol well is the sun in the in the window? or is it facing awayon the other side of the house

there are to many rules to shading x_X

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mmishee In reply to Manice008 [2010-01-13 05:15:31 +0000 UTC]

in the window 83

its complicated

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Manice008 In reply to mmishee [2010-01-13 05:26:02 +0000 UTC]

no i understand.

so it would be a harder shadow with soft edges all facing the opposite way of the light... right?

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mmishee In reply to Manice008 [2010-01-13 08:41:16 +0000 UTC]

I believe so. ^__^ i might try a harder look, see how that works. Thanks for your help!

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Manice008 In reply to mmishee [2010-01-13 16:46:19 +0000 UTC]

any time ^^

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flarrthegriffen [2010-12-24 23:40:06 +0000 UTC]

YAY! i love those guys!! XD but wat do you mean " i must find my own drawing style." isnt this your style?? or someone elsez...

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mmishee In reply to flarrthegriffen [2011-01-06 10:23:01 +0000 UTC]

ha ha noo i meant i want to improve me style XD or just develop a better one.

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skyheart2012 [2010-07-25 02:33:29 +0000 UTC]

wow that looks really good woundering ifd you would like to join my sonic team because ive been a fan of your art for a while now hope you respond

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mmishee In reply to skyheart2012 [2010-07-25 02:34:25 +0000 UTC]

sorry im not interested. 83

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skyheart2012 In reply to mmishee [2010-07-25 02:42:42 +0000 UTC]

thats fine its better to ask then not at all

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EvilEnvy [2010-01-23 14:31:03 +0000 UTC]

thats GOOD

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Sorain26 [2010-01-17 20:30:15 +0000 UTC]

Cool, great job on the expressions and BG.

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mmishee In reply to Sorain26 [2010-01-18 02:47:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks 83

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kaiba-j [2010-01-15 19:15:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeah; this looks very good.
Your digital skills look excellent
May I ask what program you used for the colouring? And whether you drew the line-art on the computer or not?
Cheers!

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mmishee In reply to kaiba-j [2010-01-16 06:13:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^_^

I use photoshop CS2, and i did draw the lines on the computer.

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Valejandra-Fox [2010-01-15 09:37:53 +0000 UTC]

I the way this is colored, it caught my attention immediately in my inbox
They look really cute too x3

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mmishee In reply to Valejandra-Fox [2010-01-15 13:29:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! 8D

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Valejandra-Fox In reply to mmishee [2010-01-16 10:09:39 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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AllHailWeegee [2010-01-15 01:48:07 +0000 UTC]

They're staring at me! (XD)

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CornPoop [2010-01-14 15:27:44 +0000 UTC]

This looks almost official, the expressions and the anatomy look very similar to official Sega art, so good job on that

And to fix the problem of it not looking like carpet, i suggest you add more texture to it, maybe with photoshop or something to make it look more floofy instead of lat-looking

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mmishee In reply to CornPoop [2010-01-15 14:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^__^

Yeah i experimented with different brushes to see if i could do it, but maybe if i used an effect it could have worked. I'll try again at another time. 83

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MegaManZero90 [2010-01-14 11:50:46 +0000 UTC]

Either ther both lying on the same bed or they're floating on wate-...wait, that desn't make sense since there still wearing clothes .w.

Anywho~ Love the lighting on the colors. Gives it a...a phrase or something that I can't come up with xD Keep up the good work

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mmishee In reply to MegaManZero90 [2010-01-14 11:56:17 +0000 UTC]

*points to artist comment*

thanks 83

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MegaManZero90 In reply to mmishee [2010-01-16 03:55:07 +0000 UTC]

*Sees it* Oh. Guess I didn't read that part Sorry.

Your welcome 83

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Lyanna-the-Ghost [2010-01-14 01:21:27 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful! even though they're just on the floor you made it so effective~~! This pic is awesome~!

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mmishee In reply to Lyanna-the-Ghost [2010-01-14 02:20:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^_^

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WendyAtticus [2010-01-13 11:47:51 +0000 UTC]

Eeeeeless!~ X3 This is so mega sweet of you!~
I totally love the coloring! It's so pretty and smooth, the shading is absolutely gorgeous and in all the right places~ And the line art is nice and thin, really making it look nice! <3
Eeeee~~ XD I can't get over how adorable it is~ I've been staring at it for almost an hour trying to think of what to say. XD I do enjoy how your pics leave me speechless a lot of the time though 8D
Wendy and Sally's hair looks fantastic! And the fuzz on Sally's cheeks too This is so coolio! Thank you so much Eless!

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mmishee In reply to WendyAtticus [2010-01-13 11:56:27 +0000 UTC]

Aww im so glad you like it wendy! X3

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esonic64 [2010-01-13 11:43:05 +0000 UTC]

Both of them look very nice to me! Keep it up

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mmishee In reply to esonic64 [2010-01-13 11:58:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^_^

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esonic64 In reply to mmishee [2010-01-13 12:11:02 +0000 UTC]

No Problem

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erickthesonicfan [2010-01-13 08:04:11 +0000 UTC]

yey

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sonamy4ev8 [2010-01-13 06:09:23 +0000 UTC]

Aww! how cute

Sally looks tired XD

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mmishee In reply to sonamy4ev8 [2010-01-13 08:42:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks X3 yes

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sonamy4ev8 In reply to mmishee [2010-01-14 00:29:26 +0000 UTC]

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Faerie-StarV [2010-01-13 02:07:03 +0000 UTC]

Nice pic of those two! Wendy looks excited about something while Sally looks sleepy!

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mmishee In reply to Faerie-StarV [2010-01-13 02:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^_^

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Faerie-StarV In reply to mmishee [2010-01-13 02:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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Acting101 [2010-01-13 01:59:16 +0000 UTC]

That's really good Eless! What are they doing exactly?

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mmishee In reply to Acting101 [2010-01-13 02:38:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks 83 just lying on the floor. XD

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Acting101 In reply to mmishee [2010-01-13 22:49:07 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I like to lay on the floor when it's really hot.

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Cosmeon [2010-01-13 01:27:40 +0000 UTC]

Now I wonder what they're thinking... XD

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SoftKeychains [2010-01-13 00:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Happiness and sorrowness.
Just one more with angryness and they will be a perfect dodrio, XD
Just kidding!

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mmishee In reply to SoftKeychains [2010-01-13 01:42:38 +0000 UTC]

Your silly. |D

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