vivus [2003-07-30 02:56:51 +0000 UTC]

It's about a pint of Boddingtons, drank with good company and while listening to choice tunes.

Either that or it's about fucking.

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lollie [2003-07-29 06:56:55 +0000 UTC]

I really loved it but i feel a bit, i dunno, nieve maybe, i didnt get any sexual vibe, i thought it was about someone molding into sociaety or something, good poem, but am i wrong? is it about sex? sorry, i am a bit slow....

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neo-tek [2003-07-26 18:01:37 +0000 UTC]

i like the rhyme scheme and the flightiness of the subject, the phonectic sounds of the words you used to describe it work well with the theme...i likes!
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oh yes and i'm back! i'm finished with summer session so i have time to catch back up on your submissions expect lots of comments lol

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seekingtruth [2003-07-24 23:38:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm getting some very sensual vibes from this ^_^ Always fun

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DarkS0uI [2003-07-22 06:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Yet you use so small words which mean so much… I think it becomes harder this way for we don’t have a story to go along with it.

“Molding, conforming”

Seems like something is being made and conformed to a shape, like pottery.

”Softly fitting;”

Almost seems like a ring that fits softly and comfortable.

”Searching, exploring”

First you’re looking for it, and then your exploring with it.

”Timidly flitting.”

Almost goes back to that ring which you “show off” with almost like flirting with it. As I stated words are so vague it is hard to make out but I did what I thought of it. I guess it was worth a try. Why do you keep them so deceiving and yet want us to see the meanings?

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pyro-punk [2003-07-19 16:45:23 +0000 UTC]

great as always.

i immediately thought the first 2 lines are about sexual intercourse, and the last 2 are about a child, or giving birst. thus a kinda cause and effect relation.

am i right or wrong here michelle??????

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sto67 [2003-07-19 12:01:46 +0000 UTC]

i dont know what its meant to say
but the 1st part sounds sexual
the last 2 lines sounds like a butterfly lolz
quite odd
still good haha
lataz

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optumystic [2003-07-18 19:57:37 +0000 UTC]

I don't think so. It borders on sensual, but is not sexual. It reminds me more of water, but the timidly flitting throws me.

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soluscado [2003-07-18 19:38:12 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if I just have a dirty mind, but it seems to scream sexual connotation to me . . .

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entropolity [2003-07-18 19:33:36 +0000 UTC]

I won't ruin the fun for others by saying what it's about, because I already know. But, I like it. Plus, bootyful pikkyture.

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