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Info pertains to Teamwork Doujin

Hane Hiyoko はね ヒヨコ
Age: 13
Birthday: 02/14
Bloodtype: B
Registration ID: 010878
Hidden Village: Leaf
Rank: Chuunin
Academy Grad Age: 9
Chuunin Exam Age: 10
Jounin Age: ---
Chakra Nature: Wind
Teammates: Inchiki Ame, Uchiha Shisui
Sensei: Working on name

STATS
Ninjutsu: 3
Taijutsu: 3.5
Genjutsu: 2
Intelligence: 3
Force: 2
Speed: 4
Stamina: 3
Seal Knowledge: 2.5



Did some slight altercations as well. No worries, her jounin form was unchanged since everyone seems to like her as a jounin. Note, her jounin form will not be seen in Teamwork unless the doujin becomes a success.


Hiyoko © Me
Naruto © Masashi Kishimoto
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Comments: 119

SydneyCrystalStar [2011-11-26 15:58:16 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!!

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yaoifan890 [2011-09-08 11:08:08 +0000 UTC]

With the stats are they out of 5 or 10 and is it a general all Shinobi/Konoichi ranking or by rank like Genin 1-5/10 Chunin1-5/10 Jonin 1-5/10 ANBU 1-5/10 Kage 1-5/10?

Otherwise the art and design of your OC seems to be quite solid, However I see a lack of details on her personality and personality along with neurology and emotion make a person a person and not otherwise.

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Mockingbyrd In reply to yaoifan890 [2011-09-09 01:42:59 +0000 UTC]

its a 5 point system, 5 being the strongest so hiyoko is strongest with taijutsu and speed but her force is low (i made it like that so that she uses her speed to hit hard since shes not that strong, giving her a weakness and how she tries to overcome it) but i dont understand wat u mean by ranking...

naturally since i havent yet submitted anything on that yet but with some revisions coming soon, i hope to change that and present more of her ^^ and possibly other OCs

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yaoifan890 In reply to Mockingbyrd [2011-09-09 08:02:30 +0000 UTC]

by Ranking I mean is the point system for all ninja or is it devided by rank like is she a 4/5 speed for her rank or 4/5 speed for any ninja. if it's ninja wide you should factor in how shinobi and konoichi grow over their career and how vast the differences between the ranks are, for example Genin being barely able to do most things and Jonin being fearsome vetrians of hardship and death and the Kage on another level entirely being that only one per great nation is allowed and they must be the strongest within it's borders to bear the title.

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Mockingbyrd In reply to yaoifan890 [2011-09-09 14:41:47 +0000 UTC]

ahh i c now. its a 5 point system based on her abilities alone. at this point, im probably going to alter it a little bit and apply it to her when shes a jounin.

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XxLunar-EternalxX [2011-09-02 22:41:41 +0000 UTC]

OOOHHH SHE 'TIS SOUNDING AMAZING! Kinda reminds me of Kushina. XD

Btw, what's your doujin about? o3o

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Mockingbyrd In reply to XxLunar-EternalxX [2011-09-03 03:40:03 +0000 UTC]

thankies, the doujinshi was going to be basically a prequel with team minato as the leads... so far, its on a good hiatus

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XxLunar-EternalxX In reply to Mockingbyrd [2011-09-03 19:24:26 +0000 UTC]

Sure~

Ah...I see. :3 Why the hiatus?

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Mockingbyrd In reply to XxLunar-EternalxX [2011-09-04 03:40:10 +0000 UTC]

so much work to put it, too little time... lol

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XxLunar-EternalxX In reply to Mockingbyrd [2011-09-05 20:50:46 +0000 UTC]

XD I see.

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brookieXblossom [2011-08-31 06:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Her hair style makes me think of Sakura, and so do her clothes (only the 2nd outfit really XD). But I like that she is brunette and has a wind style chakra nature. Very nice
The little hoodie is very cute too.

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Mockingbyrd In reply to brookieXblossom [2011-08-31 22:01:57 +0000 UTC]

well, im making changes to her design... mostly adding a fourth one and revamping her genin and slight editing with chuunin and jounin, maybe some slight stats as well, so maybe then she will be less like sakura lol

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brookieXblossom In reply to Mockingbyrd [2011-09-01 07:30:40 +0000 UTC]

I do like her though :3
The main reason why I rarely make OC's is because they are always compared to actual characters. Well... I always compare them to actual characters XD
I still cant let go of the fact that you made her brunette. Pretty much all of the OC's I've seen by other people have odd coloured hair (YAY BLUE! YAY GREEN! YAY PINK! NOW LET'S FUSE THEM TOGETHER, PUT THEM ON SOMEONES HEAD, AND CALL IT HAIR!) and ridiculously unsuitable clothes (E.g. A ninja wearing a puffy dress, or someone of royalty wearing a miniskirt), but your character makes sense. She isn't over the top, but she isn't boring

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Mockingbyrd In reply to brookieXblossom [2011-09-01 19:01:39 +0000 UTC]

yay!! lol

yeah, i have another oc here that gets compared to being a child of naruto and sakura and im like '...what?' here's a pic of him [link] the only thing similar is the eye color, he doesnt even have the right shade of blond -__- though his personality is a trickster like naruto, just pushed more into high gear

well, shes more of a reddish hue brunette lol a little eccentric but not totally off the wall. its like my hair color now, its red but it looks like a natural red lol but i agree with u, ive seen a lot of ocs and their design is over the top and have weird names that dont work into the naruto world. at least when i try to create one, they're not the most powerful or the weakest. like hiyoko here... i would say shes about comparable to kurenai and anko when it comes to power overall. not making her out to be strong enough to be the next hokage or anything like that

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KentaRaikiri [2010-12-19 21:27:35 +0000 UTC]

Kenta: wow. I wish I could make outfits that easily...

Her Jonin pose looks alot like Sakura, but I still think it's pretty cool.

Hope your Teamwork Doujinshi becomes a huge success!

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Mockingbyrd In reply to KentaRaikiri [2010-12-20 02:49:31 +0000 UTC]

lol character design is a fav of mine. and yeah i did take the pose from a sakura picture, but she is different from sakura. yeah shes a medic-nin, but unlike sakura shes not a whiny baby and is a woman can actually kick ass (a rare species in kishimoto's world lol) well right now, the doujinshi is on hiatus

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KentaRaikiri In reply to Mockingbyrd [2010-12-21 20:06:46 +0000 UTC]

Kenta: Oh well. Not everyone has all the time in the world, so I don't blame you. Though I still feel kinda slow compared to alot of people who put up something, like, everyday of the week.

But aside from Shippuden Sakura, Tsunade and Anko, I can only thing of Yuugao Uzuki (ANBU) as the only kick-ass Kunoichi in the Naruto world.

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Ana-Hyuuga-951 [2010-11-22 02:54:23 +0000 UTC]

love it

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KakashiHatake2nd [2010-07-18 10:50:04 +0000 UTC]

I usually dont like made up characters put in to the storyline that much. But I do like this, and that's because u do things right. That and your pictures are great! ^ ^

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taz-uchiha [2010-01-29 21:04:54 +0000 UTC]

OMD, I can't wait to see more of you Doushin(?)
I love your character design, and your attention to teh details; you even designed the clan symbol XD
Anyway, will read in a mo XD

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Mockingbyrd In reply to taz-uchiha [2010-01-29 22:38:51 +0000 UTC]

hehehe thankies for me, hiyoko is my fav since shes based a little on me and was my first, took so many trial runs with her (her initial color theme was brown! o__o) happy with the end result though

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taz-uchiha In reply to Mockingbyrd [2010-01-30 17:54:51 +0000 UTC]

Really O.o
I wonder what that look like... It probably wouldn't be that bad, seen as it suit her hair and all that XD
She looks awesome, and also, as a jounin, someone who could kick some serious ass, but in a better way then Sakura. Yeah, I already love the look of her, and I can't wait to see some more. *wink wink* XD

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Mockingbyrd In reply to taz-uchiha [2010-01-31 03:41:53 +0000 UTC]

trust me, it was bad. here is a link back to one of my devs featuring it: under 2005 and at least unlike the other girls that kishi protrays, she will actually kiss ass and not be some damsel in distress. and no worries, there i will be plenty more of hiyoko ^^

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taz-uchiha In reply to Mockingbyrd [2010-01-31 15:57:58 +0000 UTC]

XD Can't wait XD

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Koragg1 [2009-12-07 02:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Totally doing something like this for my Naruto character. Nice work!

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Fightcanis [2009-10-23 00:32:03 +0000 UTC]

Is that somewhere to read her clan's abilitys?
She's great, love her jonin outfit.

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Mockingbyrd In reply to Fightcanis [2009-10-23 13:36:51 +0000 UTC]

i will be posting up a pic featuring her clan's ability so no worries ^^ and thankies!~ everyone seems to love her jounin outfit O__o

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leontinees [2009-09-16 18:40:45 +0000 UTC]

kyaaaaa, she´s very beautiful! I like her!

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DJ-Daniel [2009-08-30 04:12:49 +0000 UTC]

I had a project of my own, that involved Naruto's descendant and stuff like that.

It was going great, but then my buddy decided not to help me out and I failed...

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Ma-ri-ni-ka [2009-08-21 10:07:20 +0000 UTC]

Last pose reminds me of Sakura, who are her parents?

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Mockingbyrd In reply to Ma-ri-ni-ka [2009-08-21 15:48:48 +0000 UTC]

yea, i took the pose from a sakura pic

So far the working names for her parents are Tsubame being her mother and Misago being her father. She will have an older brother named Youshun (another working name since his first name was Takamaru until Suna named their damn bird that! lol ) that will be featured in a future arc if the series last that long lol, and right now trying to decide if she should have a sister named Suzume...

If you look at each name though, its like how the Inuzuka family is named for each part of a dog. Each member of the family is named after a bird or bird related terms! Tsubame = swallow, Misago = osprey, Youshun = hawk + falcon, Suzume = sparrow, Hiyoko = small chick...

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ToonTwins [2009-08-21 01:51:11 +0000 UTC]

Nice job Like the design on the back of her jacket

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GrauerWolf [2009-08-20 20:42:12 +0000 UTC]

i would like to join her group X3

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Freaky-chan [2009-08-20 20:34:54 +0000 UTC]

this is the greatest ^-^

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Cupcake-Chan95 [2009-08-20 19:51:15 +0000 UTC]

I think she's cute.
I really love how you did the clothes.
Although the pose of her as a jounin isn't very creative, I still like the picture.

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Mockingbyrd In reply to Cupcake-Chan95 [2009-08-21 02:11:43 +0000 UTC]

thankies!~ yea this is just a ref, ive done more of her with more original poses

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FlameWolf82 [2009-07-20 09:55:17 +0000 UTC]

i love these characters!! i would read every page and comment if you went through with the naruto doujin!! this is so awesome, nice work

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SongaiIzoa [2009-06-15 02:18:04 +0000 UTC]

Man she looks awesome, she looks like she would be in the show. Really nice work, I love how innocent she looks as a genin and how badass she looks as a jonin. Nice job, high five!

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SongaiIzoa [2009-06-15 02:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Man she looks awesome, she looks like she would be in the show. Really nice work, I love how innocent she looks as a genin and how badass she looks as a jonin. Nice job, high five!

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moomoocandy [2009-05-12 08:04:42 +0000 UTC]

i like her jounin one :3..woot power of the bellys! D8

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lhblackbeard [2009-05-06 07:05:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow, an OC that actually is very well designed! I love her jounin outfit :3

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Mockingbyrd In reply to lhblackbeard [2009-05-06 15:03:14 +0000 UTC]

...why does everyone like her and in her jounin outfit?! thankies!~ :hug"

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lhblackbeard In reply to Mockingbyrd [2009-05-06 19:03:18 +0000 UTC]

lol its very well designed

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inutasha13 [2009-04-29 02:58:16 +0000 UTC]

all your characters make me want to draw them REAEEEALLY badly.

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Mockingbyrd In reply to inutasha13 [2009-04-29 03:42:20 +0000 UTC]

hehehe thats a good thing then! >w< lol

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inutasha13 In reply to Mockingbyrd [2009-04-29 03:44:16 +0000 UTC]

YESH can i draw them as long as i tell evryone they're yours?

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Mockingbyrd In reply to inutasha13 [2009-04-29 04:07:55 +0000 UTC]

of course!! i would love fanart of my characters >w< just of course, give credit where credit is due ^w^

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inutasha13 In reply to Mockingbyrd [2009-04-30 01:01:38 +0000 UTC]

XDDD YAY

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Cecixx19 [2009-02-21 04:54:34 +0000 UTC]

I though she is so cool. Out of all the ones you created she's my favorite.

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xellcocoa999 [2009-01-25 02:55:18 +0000 UTC]

i love the outfits xD they pwn any of my characters' clothes

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