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Mogwai1988 — To Make You Happy - pag 24
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Published: 2017-10-12 21:14:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1218; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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The way things are going...I think it'll take me about three or four pages to get to the backstory part.Finally!!!
Maybe stock up on tissues before then???
Tips and constructive Critiques are welcome!
Since I am not that skilled in making a comic just yet.
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Comments: 9
Awww... my heart can't take the cuteness!!!!
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this tunnel is this how sans teleports or an regular tunnel ?
also great page
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Regular tunnel.
And thanks! ^^
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Gosh this is so cute <3
I honestly don't have anything to add, your style is
very much your own, and I recognize it right away!
I quite love it
I'm already stocked on tissues but it'll take a lot
to make me cry
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Thank you!
I'm glad to hear that!
Oh well...maybe you won't need them???
The sadness part is subjective anyway.
I mean...what generates feels for one doesn't have to generate feels for another.
But I do plan to make it quite sad at some points.
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Stock up on tissues before then?? Oh boy. I hope I'm ready! :b
Critiques welcome... Honestly, you're doing everything very well. The characters, the paneling, and the backgrounds especially are very well done. If I have anything to suggest, it would only be to make the squiggly line to the speech bubbles less so. It's a little bit distracting.
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Well maybe.
Just be sure.
It's all still an subjective thing in the end after all.
But I was hoping to make things sad soon anyway.
Alrighty! Good to know! Thank you. ^^
I'll try to make the speech bubble lines with less curves from now on.
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Well, I do like sad stories ^^
No problem! :3
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