Comments: 23
G-8 [2014-12-06 16:42:22 +0000 UTC]
I appreciate that you take the time to develop the characters. More fun this way.
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Wicked-Detective [2014-04-17 14:46:52 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully set out Mollz, looks great before you even read it.....
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Kiokuffiib11 [2014-03-28 20:26:32 +0000 UTC]
Sounds like the nurse has alternative plans. Looking forward to seeing more.
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territeacher [2014-03-24 12:40:02 +0000 UTC]
Very Good
The Herr Dr infatuation with LuLu-L is clearly driving a wedge between his assistant Nurse and Duty, either way it is not looking hopeful for any rescue of LuLu Lightening.
I suspect the Nurse might just be suppressing her deep depraved erotic feeling for LuLu, crushing her skull is too quick She wants to Humiliate Her, keep her as a Pet and keep the Herr Dr as a Pet.
Oh Yes! Eureka that it.
She could have them both how wicked make him watch His LuLu Suffer, She could keep them chained up forever what purgatory for a brilliant mind and a helpless heroin.
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A-4M [2014-03-24 01:59:36 +0000 UTC]
You created this plotline so you might as well finish it.
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A-4M In reply to MollyFootman [2014-03-26 18:03:41 +0000 UTC]
Nods to that.
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DoctorDoom00 [2014-03-23 15:28:54 +0000 UTC]
I never trusted that Nurse. What a Meanie!
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CaptainZammo [2014-03-23 11:56:57 +0000 UTC]
As Tania points out--Blah Blah is often needed. Looks like the Nurse may make a play for Ms Lightning herself--You've got me curious again...
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phraught [2014-03-23 06:19:05 +0000 UTC]
nice interplay - I'm looking forward to seeing more!
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saloniko [2014-03-23 04:32:42 +0000 UTC]
dun dun dun
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