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molofishy — In the End
Published: 2007-02-07 22:57:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 243; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description A flame at the end of you,
To roll your threads back,
To iron your nose down,
And trim your hands red-

In a blueish-saffron coat-
To bury you in a whirl
Of a crisp tesla mesh:  
Gouging marbles through

With the most beautiful day
One kick behind,
And the darkest day
Punching holes through;
The sun shines shades
On an empty man

Nothing is left to say.
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Comments: 9

mooray [2007-03-14 20:29:00 +0000 UTC]

Your poetry has evolved.
I find this poem incredibly surreal.
It's fantastic.

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inter4life [2007-02-12 08:34:26 +0000 UTC]

wow.. ur back, and ur back with an amazing poem! great work, i love the imagrey and the emotions

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molofishy In reply to inter4life [2007-02-15 19:08:22 +0000 UTC]

You really like it? Thanks again for always commenting on my stuff..

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inter4life In reply to molofishy [2007-02-17 10:12:16 +0000 UTC]

yeah i do! lol.. your welcome

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RiseAgainst89 [2007-02-08 03:34:18 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome except it reminds me about how much i suck at life, or at least at poetry

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molofishy In reply to RiseAgainst89 [2007-02-10 08:30:29 +0000 UTC]

Nope, you don't suck at poety. I just read 'Forgive or Forget' and 'As Life Goes on'. There's a lot of emotion in your writing - I love poetry about people's emotions. Some people can't even write about how they feel: that are always too afraid to express their sadness/happiness, love/anger. Respect

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RiseAgainst89 In reply to molofishy [2007-02-13 00:42:52 +0000 UTC]

Aww...thanks that just made my day

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lonesometears [2007-02-08 01:10:32 +0000 UTC]

this is good, ^-^ glad you posted some thing new, hun!~

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molofishy In reply to lonesometears [2007-02-10 08:30:46 +0000 UTC]

Yea, it's been a while: thanks so much again.

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