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Mondeur — Jen, Part 6 by-nc-nd [NSFW]
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Published: 2015-01-15 00:08:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 5941; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Description For the second time Jen woke up quite peacefully. She relished the feeling of the soft bed covers and sheets on her bare skin. The sensation had returned and she was determined to make the most of it, pulling her body up into a foetal position to stroke her legs. She smiled. But no plans were forming “maybe I’ve got to take every day as it comes”, she told herself. All she wanted to do was fill the gap, to truly know where she was. She thought that to test this she needs to move in a straight line from her room as far away from it as she could. All set, with her confidence, her underwear and her shoes, she theatrically kicked down the door, hurt her foot, opened it and left the room.

“Right then!” she called out, soldiering onwards into the thick of it all. Initially she was taken back by how pretty it was, but how uneventful it was. After several hours of trekking she began to pick up speed, instead of taking it all in she simply began bounding over landscapes in her search for civilisation. It wasn’t easy. Hiking through this jungle was much slower than running on a flat, tarmacked pavement. What felt like 20 miles was more like 8. But still she carried on, climbing up the occasional tree to see onto the horizon. “There’s no end!” she said, climbing down in a mild panic. What if there is nothing around? What if I’m stuck here forever?

As night time fell she grew tired. Not wanting to end up as a snack for the vicious creatures in the dark, she climbed up a thick tree and wedged herself into spiralling branches, creating a tough hammock. It wasn’t comfy in the slightest, but she lay back, folded her arms, sighed, and fell asleep. She was woken a few times in the night by restless creatures below. Whatever they were they couldn’t see her.

The next morning she awoke in the tree “Oh thank YOU!”, she called out, to whoever was in control. The thought of doing this again in another direction filled her with dread.

Sliding out of the tree she continued the path she had set out on.

12 hours later and something was up ahead. The first indication was a slight burning smell, followed by a definitely crackling sound, “Fire?!” she thought. Getting closer and Jen began to see signs of life — bags and items were scattered in a pile in a small clearing.

“Hello?! Is anyone… there?!” the excited girl cried out.
“Listen, I’ve been lost in here for days now, I need your help!”

But nothing replied back.

Jen crept closer to the pile hoping to find someone with headphones on, jokingly, worryingly imaging them listening to a “Learn English” guide.

“Are you aware of what you stumbled into” a hidden, familiar voice called out.
“Hi again!” Jen said, all her fears dissipating. A confidence struck her as she approached the voice.

Out of nowhere a thick, green coil lashed around her torso. “Yeah! Hi again!” she said back to it.

The snake woman, unsure why someone would approach her with this attitude, gave her a sudden squeeze from the single loop.

“Yeah this might be hard for you to understand but we’ve met before!”
“I’ve never seen you in my life, and I’ve lived a long life”
“I seem to be living the same day over and over again. Once I die I just wake up back in my bed, somewhere over that way” Jen gestured, but the snake woman was having none of it, taking the girl for a fool she rolled another coil just on top of her feet. She could feel the weight of this one. The one around her torso was tight but she could sense the snake woman lifting it. The coil on her the tops of her feet rotated slightly and boy could Jen feel it!

“Please just listen to me!” Jen demanded, “All you told me last time was that you learnt English a long time ago from people you captured… um. Russian, Spanish and Scandinavian too! No wait… that’s not a country it’s a region. Norwegian!”
“Hmmm” the snake woman pondered, “that is a little strange.”
“Yup! You told me before you ate me!”
“Tell me girl, how many times have we met… how many times have I eaten you?”
“Only twice so far. I’ve got to say it’s fun in your coils but it does actually does hurt when you crush people. You always tell me it won’t hurt… but it does!”
“I know. It probably would do. But people are so upset when they’re about to die. They always beg and cry. I think I just need to do it quicker, you know? I shouldn’t talk to them before hand.”
“See what you’re doing now doesn’t hurt. There’s a reassuring quality about it. Like yeah, this is probably what everyone else that has been caught by you feels. It’s like being glomped. This bit isn’t bad.”
“… glomped?” The snake woman replied.
“Yeah. Like a tight hug.”
“Thanks. I’ll have to remember that. The names Ella by the way.” the snake woman said, now completely disarmed by Jen’s cheeky charm, giving her the best tool to instantly get the woman’s trust should she die again.
“Under my umber-ella ella” Jen half sang, attempting to shake her booty as much as she could in the tight grip.
“What on earth is that?”
“Oh it’s a song! Your name sounds just like it. I guess I’m under Ella.”
“Yeah you know I haven’t decided what to do with you. So if I decide to eat you right now you’ll just wake up in your bed… and I’ll get a meal?”
“Yeah pretty much”
“Then what’s stopping me from eating you?”
“Well nothing! But I do need your help. See I don’t actually know what’s going on with me. It’s kind of fun but I’d like to know if there is a way to stop it… once I get bored with this. Even paradise must get boring.”
“Yeah, but only if you help me first. I’m also a bit lost in here. It looks familiar but I’ve never been to this part of the forest before, I guess we can explore it together.”
“Oh?” asked Jen.
“I’ll help you out if you help me out. I want to test some manoeuvres on you.”
“Yeah… sure I guess!”

Jen wasn’t sure what to make of these, she didn’t want to die again. She had travelled so far today and was hoping to continue. “Just don’t kill me!” she told Ella. “I won’t! I can detect my prey’s heartbeat. Even if you get knocked out you’ll wake up here with me.”

Just like that Ella spooled herself away behind a tree. “Okay, now… walk!”

Jen slipped off her ballet flats, even at home she was always plodding around her place in bare feet. A few steps in and Ella pounced on her, wrapping her higher up in an instant from her knees all up to the top of her head. Jen panicked and tried to scramble out of it, but her arms were also pinned deep in the cocoon. She muffled something under the pressure of the coil on her face. Ella laid her down on the floor. There was no pressure on Jen at all, she was only being held still. Slowly, the coils lifted off her body. “What did you think?”

“See… that’s quite good. You don’t get to see my eyes and we can’t talk. To be honest I couldn’t even hear!”
“Oh good!” Ella replied “I’ll start using this one. It’s actually one I’ve been considering using for a while now. It’s just that sometimes people can offer things useful in return of their life back”. “However…” Ella said, tightening her grip on the girl again. “I’m still hungry you know. And if what you say is true you’ll be back here tomorrow.”
“No!” Jen called out, watching as the coil above her face began to smother her. “I walked ALL day to get here. You are NOT eating me now! And beside you promi-”

Ella’s tail now rested on Jen’s whole body. She began toying with her, rotating, squeezing, massaging her whole body. She could feel Jen’s heart-rate increasing and her lungs couldn’t pull any air in. The feeling of her being asphyxiated in under her body was quite an moreish sensation, something to get lost in. Ella smirked as she continued this movement until Jen’s heart slowed down.

“I’m sorry” Ella said, lifting the coil off Jen’s face.
“HEY! Don’t. It’s not funny! I did not walk across a JUNGLE to meet the craziest… what are you again?”
“I’m a naga”
“A crazy naga who appears to have an addiction to wrapping people up in her tail and suffocating them!”
“I’m sorry!” Ella said, holding back a small laugh.
“Right then. Come on. Let’s go. I promise you if we find a way out you can eat me. It’s still fun here… I don’t want to go yet!”

Jen was released, Ella searched the pile in the clearing whilst Jen looked for her shoes. Unable to find them, she shrugged and the two set off in the direction Jen had been going all day.

Ella was an unusual looking woman, well the woman part was, obviously the snake part wasn’t very feminine, Jen thought as she finally had time to take in the detail of her. Ella’s human body was slender, tall, taller than an average person. Her breasts were held in some kind of animal skin bra. Her head was most mysterious, she couldn’t pin down her hair colour as it shifted between white, blue and grey, but it was cut short and choppy. Her eyes were an emerald green and her face was void of acne or spots. She was flawless.

“Hey Ella” Jen called out, with Ella only slightly turning her head. “What is this place?”
“You know… I’m not sure. I’m sure people have given it names in the past. But everyone always says something different.”
“It’s just there’s not really much here. Except you and some snake that keeps barging into my room every day”
“Oh those things! They’re just snakes. There’s not really a lot for them to eat here so once they picked up on your presence that was it for you! If you stood still for long enough they’ll eventually find you.”
“Do you eat them?”
“Sometimes. But they’re more of a snack. We do get quite a few humans here. Sometimes if I haven’t eaten in a while I’ll resort to one of the natives”
“Natives?”
“Yeah. They usually offer up some young girl as a sacrifice to me if they see me skulking around their villages. It’s not right but it’s food. Everything needs to eat.”

Complete darkness was fast approaching.

“Hey Ella, can you see in the dark?”
“Yeah, can’t you?!”
“No! Can we just camp here for tonight?”
“As you wish.”
“Ha! Just like in that film”
“What film? A thin manmade sheet?”, the confused naga asked.
“No! It’s like a story but visual. They’re great. You’ve never seen one?”
“I don’t think we have them here.” she replied back.

The two came to a stop at a nice flat space, Ella lay back against a tree. “Come here” she asked. Jen climbed over some branches and saw Ella had created a sleeping bag of coils. “Just lie in here” she asked. “Don’t worry, I’m not going to eat you… yet”, she giggled.

The two stayed up for hours just talking. Jen couldn’t put her finger on why, but she felt safe wrapped up tight. She was sleeping with the alpha predator and nothing could get her

There was a purpose to all this. She knew that if something happened and she went back, the best way to get Ella on her side quickly would be to know more details, more keys to unlock doors as it were. Ella’s talks reverberated with a sense of age and wisdom. She was ab aeterno, having picked up details and stories dating back to conquerers of these lands and had a zen quality about her, as if she could see what was going to happen next. If Da Vinci was a master of art, she was a master of life.

Every so often Ella would tease Jen into shock by giving little jolts of her coils, it was playful. Ella knew the power she had and the image she displayed, it was funny to her to remind Jen where she was.

Having been exposed to the outside air too long, Jen pulled her feet in a bit to keep warm.

“Oh are you cold? I really don’t feel it!” Ella asked.
Jen nodded. Ella wrapped more of her body around the girl and they both settled in for sleep.



Ella woke much earlier than Jen but remained still to let her get her rest. She knew they’d have a big day ahead of them. On waking up Jen tried to sit upright like she had been doing every other morning in this jungle, an immediate shock befell her before she realised where she was. “AHH!” she screamed, unable to move her arms or legs.

“Oh good morning, did you forget where you are?”
“A little bit! haha” she laughed in embarrassment.
“I’m afraid I don’t have anything for breakfast. I don’t know what you eat!”
“You know what I’m not actually hungry. Thirsty though!”
“There’s a river near here I think, can you hear it?”
“No?”
“Oh yeah those human ears of yours! Well, it’s over this way.” she said as she began to unspool around the girl. The friction felt nice on her skin. It wasn’t slimy or greasy like it appeared.

Jen followed Ella as she cut a straight path through the thick forest. The weight of her body pressed down any foliage on the ground and made travel quick. The two remained quiet after last night, both happy at their new friendships and both apprehensive about saying anything out of place.

“There we are” Ella shouted back, “Just like I said!”.

Sure enough there was the river that she had seen before, though much further downstream. It was wider here and much more choppy.  “Don’t be too long!” Ella called out, carrying a slight worried tone in her voice.

Jen walked down to the water front, removing her shoes so they didn’t get muddy, with the intention of washing her clothes and grabbing a drink. The water was murky but it was all she had access too. She cupped some of the water and reluctantly slurped it down. Removing her bra she cupped her breasts to look over to make sure Ella wasn’t watching — intentionally or not. Ella was collapsed on the ground. Her eyes were wide open and her mouth moving slightly, but nothing else was nearby! Was this some kind of serpent woman thing? “Hey! Are you okay?!” a concerned Jen screamed over. “Wait there I’m coming over!!!”

Jen dropped her bra to the muddy bank and ran up to the downed Ella. On approach she noticed her legs felt weak. She wobbled, stumbled, and collapsed too on the ground beside the snake woman.

Jen tried to tilt her head backwards to face Ella to no avail. Her muscles had simply stopped working, only her lungs worked, purely on autopilot. Her heart wanted to race but couldn’t, as if guided by a larger force. She wanted to scream, to cry, to escape. Her consciousness waned in and out making it difficult to process the image in front of her of Ella halfway into a vast snakes gullet. Occurring in an almost stuttered stop motion, Ella was scooped into the mouth of this thing and a few blinks later she had vanished. The vast black snake approached her. The next thing she knew she saw it over her feet, and up to her neck as everything went dark. The flesh of the throat sealed her open mouth and nose with its baggy folds as breathing became impossible.
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thisgirlroolzz [2015-01-15 02:21:54 +0000 UTC]

That was interesting, I hope Ella is ok, Jen sure needs her I think. Im glad you are making this into a longer story with lots of plot, its fun, please keep going.

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