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Montplaisir — No More
Published: 2009-05-03 02:27:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 94; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description You look over me slowly,
Make your decision,
Start talking.

I listen to every word you have to say,
Every single thing you throw out there,
I offer a suggestion or two,
You prattle on like you haven’t even heard me,
‘Cause I’m not here to offer advice,
I’m just here to listen,
You something like that,
Go talk to a wall.

You’re not the only one either,
Everyone I know is like that,
Simply put,
I’m their wall,
Ain’t good enough to be their friend,
Not popular enough to be anybody else’s,
So I’m the only one safe enough to talk to,
The only one around who won’t spill it to everyone else,
I am, in essence,
A cold stone wall,
I’m everybody’s wall,
Save for a few.

Written on,
Spit on,
Graffitied and beaten,
Whispered to and yelled at,
You can do almost anything to me,
Say almost anything to me,
And like the sucker I am,
I’ll let you come back and do it all again.

I’m done playing the dunce,
Through playing at caring,
I’m not anything to you,
Worth not even the grimiest penny in your pocket,
You want someone to talk to eh?
More like someone to talk at,
Y’all need someone to listen?
Find someone who gives a damn.
I’m through caring about you,
Or her, or him, or anyone,
Who won’t lend an ear to my suggestions,
My advice,
My own problems.
Want someone to hear all your problems?
The walls fed up,
And it’s decided to finally pick up and leave you.
The empty hole is quite open and ready to hear you though.
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Comments: 154

Montplaisir In reply to ??? [2009-05-05 03:56:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm am perfectly fine with being a wall, someone to lean on, someone that will just listen, but I'm tired of all the people in this city being so selfish and not coming even close to reciprocating, for anybody...

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-05 03:58:52 +0000 UTC]

from your perspective, perhaps. but how could love occur without the reciprocal?
you can never see the world from your persective, so do not generalize! is a fundamental lesson, that generalizing will get you {...} in life.

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-05 04:00:32 +0000 UTC]

My poems aren't about the world, they're about people. Every poem is about a person, or a group of people, and this one isn't an exception.

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-05 04:03:27 +0000 UTC]

as tyou wish sir, as you wish to see you will, and as you wish to think you will, the only thing I can do is every once in a while to make you think. so your perspective still only sees a poretion of the world or person.

another day another night, i am sleeping

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-05 11:51:16 +0000 UTC]

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-05 20:23:00 +0000 UTC]

I be saying hi!!!!!!!!!


how are you?
I am leaving in 30ish mins sooooo hi!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-05 22:10:15 +0000 UTC]

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teardownthefence [2009-05-03 19:46:30 +0000 UTC]

I can see why you liked Dislocated Shoulder so much. This poem is amazing, and oh so true. I really like it and sadly can relate.

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Montplaisir In reply to teardownthefence [2009-05-03 19:48:01 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it...

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teardownthefence In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-03 19:52:07 +0000 UTC]

I did. It was really good

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Montplaisir In reply to teardownthefence [2009-05-03 19:54:53 +0000 UTC]

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nightengale1993 [2009-05-03 02:34:12 +0000 UTC]

oooh! make another poem!!!!
Im not making you a brick wall..... =3< (that my friend is a laughing meepit!! got it!!! a meepit!!!)

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-03 02:38:40 +0000 UTC]

Only so much writing in me right now
And no, you are an anti-wall of sorts
meepits!!!

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-12 21:23:31 +0000 UTC]

hi how is it going?
how was school

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-12 21:39:28 +0000 UTC]

Heya!

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-10 23:24:34 +0000 UTC]

MEEP!!!!!!!!!!!!
im making a yahoo acount anyway...

im making the email..
guess



Abstractchick@yahoo.com

HAHA!
so now you can email me too..
and theres this thing matt uses called yahoo messanger, which is basically quick chat
will; you try it out sometime?
+ WHERE ARE YOU?!?!??!

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-10 23:37:55 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, dinner came quickly and it was unexpected. Yahoo messenger...I have MSN, but not yahoo, but I might be able to coax my pc into another app

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-10 23:43:08 +0000 UTC]

ok
its actually
Abstractchick18@yahoo.com

just abstractchick was taken

now im messing around making an avatar.

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-10 23:44:41 +0000 UTC]

Have you had dinner yet?

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-10 23:47:59 +0000 UTC]

nopes

whatcha thinkin bout?

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-10 23:49:49 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm....you, Math, music and money, in that order.

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-10 23:52:14 +0000 UTC]

ahh the 3 m'a

im kinda thinking about what im giving to my mom still...
im coming up with some poem idea or something..
this is what im thinking:

well i'll make a journal..

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-10 23:56:23 +0000 UTC]

Ah, nice spin on the aboriginal legend. I think it's very good

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-10 23:57:42 +0000 UTC]

its no spin, its the story but.. is it appropriate for mother's day?...

if so: should I write it out and illustrate, or print it and then draw on the paper?...

AHAHAHAHAH

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-11 00:00:29 +0000 UTC]

I must've heard the abbreviated version. Anyways..hmmm...is it approriate? I don't know. It sort of is and isn't, if you know what I mean.
Uhmm...I think that writing it out and drawing it would hold more sentimental value than printing it out..'Cause it took more work that ways..

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-11 00:03:11 +0000 UTC]

ok, glad to confirm that writing it out would be worth it

i can't tell though if it is appropriate. but i think it id. i guess i'll run with it for now..

after this avatar I'll write it out

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-11 00:04:26 +0000 UTC]

What's the avatar look like?

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-11 00:06:54 +0000 UTC]

well idk.. its.. WAAHH
its a person anyway a female that doesn't look like me, but im making a person.

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-11 00:08:26 +0000 UTC]

lol, nice

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-11 00:09:47 +0000 UTC]

well im messing around. I have always liked looking
at indian/kimono dresses. but it doesn't work out in rl..

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-11 00:12:25 +0000 UTC]

lol, ah, I see. Any chance you're going to try that messenger thing out?

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-11 00:15:57 +0000 UTC]

well i have it downloaded and stuff, but i have noone to use it with

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-11 00:18:43 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, don't know about that

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-11 19:17:56 +0000 UTC]

hiya how was your day?

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-11 19:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Was good. How about you?

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-11 20:00:43 +0000 UTC]

woke up 6:45 sick, went to sleep till 11;45 been watching csi new york since in a blanket on the couch. im downstair at my mom's comp but still watching csi.

et tu?

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-11 20:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Awww, how bad is it?
My day was okay, got some funny comments for the hair, actually managed to absorb most of the math info, and things went pretty well, all in all.

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-11 20:05:36 +0000 UTC]

im fine for now, just on some meds. its a combo atk nose, throat, and ears. just like the old days


how ya feelin?

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-11 20:07:56 +0000 UTC]

fun....
Me? Heh, worried, tired, content. Not at all the kind of writing mood I was hoping for
You?

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-11 20:10:26 +0000 UTC]

not feeling, just sick sick and watching csi

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-11 20:10:59 +0000 UTC]

Are the espisodes any good?

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-11 20:12:48 +0000 UTC]

yeah, but even if i've seen these before i don't remember the ending

whatcha wanna do?

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-11 20:16:25 +0000 UTC]

I don't quite know what it is I want to do. On an exclusively "ME" level, I'd like to finish the first chapter of The Deceived (story after The Hidden), but I can't think of how to write it properly, and I'm not in the mood to write it as it needs to be. I'll have to wait, but still....
On a personal level, I'd like to keep talking to you...and, I found myself a feature of Yahoo that is quite interesting

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-11 20:23:22 +0000 UTC]

ah, yahoo is not on this comp and i don't want to move
i'll see if i can download it and we can chat on it

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-11 20:25:23 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I see. No need to worry yourself, it was just something interesting I found that we might want to try sometime, though I can already see what the result would be

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-11 20:28:31 +0000 UTC]

i got it on, but i cannot fig out how to im you

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-11 20:29:07 +0000 UTC]

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-09 19:37:21 +0000 UTC]

HELLO?

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-09 19:38:39 +0000 UTC]

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-09 21:00:06 +0000 UTC]

meep meep meep meep meepity meep meep meep

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