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Montplaisir — The Abyss
Published: 2009-05-06 00:19:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 39; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Shelter in the shadows sought,
Anew your reputation wrought,
Filled with cold and loneliness,
Brisk conversations and timelessness,
Armor made to hide your soul,
Forces you to pay a toll,
Your feelings the shadows shall control.

There’s a difference though,
Between the shadows and the void,
And between the void and the abyss.
The shadows hide,
And the void leads to the abyss,
Almost unconditionally,
And while the shadows may lead,
To the void,
It is not often so.

Entrance to the void is easy,
Returning from that place is hard,
For while the shadows blend with the light,
The void only absorbs.

The void will control what you have left,
Until of course there’s nothing left,
At which point you’ll leave the void,
Entering the abyss,
From which there is no escape.
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Comments: 4

nightengale1993 [2009-05-06 00:20:47 +0000 UTC]

mm i think adding those two weakened the first part..

just my opinion

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-06 00:22:45 +0000 UTC]

That is definitely a possibility, but this was the original..I knew the first part was stronger, which is why I threw it up seperately

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nightengale1993 In reply to Montplaisir [2009-05-06 00:24:43 +0000 UTC]

mmmk

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Montplaisir In reply to nightengale1993 [2009-05-06 00:25:49 +0000 UTC]

lol

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