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I know this is too late for valentine... But this "Sweat Valentine", I've been working on this since 2009 until now, 2011. Freaking 3 years! =[]=" (Familiar cast phrase? That's because I learn English from YGO Abridged Series. Hooray~)
In 2009 I couldn't finish this because of my work routine.
In 2010, I was busy with master degree enrollment examination.
First half year 2011, I was busy with thesis and my original comics, "Chubby Mummy". [link]

And now.. Finally I DID IT! On first thought, I'd publish them as e-book and sale them on e-bay or something. But after 3 years, I had changed my mind. It's only 8 pages, I'm not gonna sale this... It's weird and I also not have confidence enough. So I just put them on DA. Hope some kind person 'll read it. hmmm~

The story is... Yami was going to give valentine chocolate to Kaiba. So... Let see what Kaiba 'd react. =v=

Your opinion is such a precious thing to me. Thanks a lot! ^^




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Comments: 23

bluerosefantasy [2013-11-30 16:04:27 +0000 UTC]

Aww he's got Pocky! X3 Beautiful comic! ^^

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KojimaRika [2013-06-01 19:49:49 +0000 UTC]

awe yugi wants to give him choclate too

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IssyWerewolf [2012-08-23 10:38:46 +0000 UTC]

POOKY!!!!!!!!!!GIMME!!!!
btw great comic ^^

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beezebeora [2011-09-22 15:09:54 +0000 UTC]

heh Kaiba is so full of himself <3 its so cute! Oh man, I think you improve on coloring a lot ;u; that or im not used to seeing this choice of skin colors~ I love it! Especially Kaibas face on the first panel!

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SamCyberCat [2011-08-26 13:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Awww, Seto looks so smug about his gifts, I really like that expression. XD

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ghostwolfs13 [2011-08-23 17:39:09 +0000 UTC]

Haha Yami was spotted Poor Seto ...being handsome *shakes head* he has such a difficult life lol. This looks awesome

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DomaYuset [2011-08-21 01:33:33 +0000 UTC]

<333333333333 I love this! Favorite page!

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Moondogla In reply to DomaYuset [2011-08-21 09:28:23 +0000 UTC]

Ekkkkk~ I'm glad-I'm glad. Thanks a lot!

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AkirasArtWorld [2011-08-21 00:42:04 +0000 UTC]

Aww! Yami has pocky for Kaiba! X3 Cute~!

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Moondogla In reply to AkirasArtWorld [2011-08-21 09:29:37 +0000 UTC]

heehee~Thanks a lot. Pocky has a thing.

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AkirasArtWorld In reply to Moondogla [2011-08-21 17:54:08 +0000 UTC]

lol I see ^^

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Doggy-Yasha [2011-08-20 22:11:36 +0000 UTC]

must continue reading! but...just a helpful hint Moon, it should be "they're from girls" not "they're from a girls" ...it would only be a girl if it were a single girl more then one doesnt need the "a" jsut thought I would help ya out ^^

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Moondogla In reply to Doggy-Yasha [2011-08-21 08:32:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for correcting words for me. I've just already edited it. (Actually, the translator want me to use "they're from the girls." But I think it won't fit the balloon so I use 'a' instead. hehe~ I'm so embarrassed. Thanks again for tell me before it's too late.)

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Doggy-Yasha In reply to Moondogla [2011-08-21 13:59:01 +0000 UTC]

lol.
(The translater would have been right had you gone with that, but it being a speech bubble with limited space I see why you tried to shorten it. ^^. Glad I could help)

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meshimoon [2011-08-20 19:09:43 +0000 UTC]

He was planning on giving Kaiba pocky??

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Moondogla In reply to meshimoon [2011-08-21 09:31:57 +0000 UTC]

Yes! Glad you see. He tried to give Kaiba pocky as valentine chocolate. fufufu~

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fuuDANGO [2011-08-20 18:24:33 +0000 UTC]

Why the hell is it named SWEAT valentine? I don't get it. Did you mean SWEET? That's a huge mistake there buddy

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Moondogla In reply to fuuDANGO [2011-08-21 09:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Ah~ Yes, like you said, it should be 'sweet' not 'sweat'. But I try to use word play to make the doujinshi name more memorable. And it is not really a sweet love story. It is such an awkward lovestory that could make people sweat.

Anyway, thanks a lot for telling this. I knew sometime using word play is not really good execution. Next time I will pay more attention on nominating. ^^"

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fuuDANGO In reply to Moondogla [2011-08-21 11:19:46 +0000 UTC]

No need to thank me
I was surprised, so I had to ask XD Nice colouring btw

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Moondogla In reply to fuuDANGO [2011-08-21 11:43:36 +0000 UTC]

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KDdreamer [2011-08-20 18:24:10 +0000 UTC]

YOUR PAGES ARE SO PRETTYYY!!!
i'm excited for the rest of them <3

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Moondogla In reply to KDdreamer [2011-08-21 09:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Glad you see this pretty. That encourages me a lot. heehee~

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KDdreamer In reply to Moondogla [2011-08-22 03:58:28 +0000 UTC]

;w; I'm glad!! Cant wait to see more of your art!!!
<3

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