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Published: 2011-02-08 03:35:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 272; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 9
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UPDATE: Thanks for all the critique! It was really helpful. But I still want more AND now, the important part. Moon, no matter what form is ALWAYS part cat. So stop telling me she doesn't look like a wolf! She looks enough like one. Being bulkier and larger.
This, in my opinion, is the most beautiful thing I have ever drawn. And it was really fun too! This is the drawing I plan to use to see my improvement over years. This song never gets old. :3
Time: 1 hour - 2 hours
Program: Adobe Photoshop CS4 w/ Tablet
Okay, back to normal crazy hyper me who uses too many commas! XD Anyways Moon's wolfy form. This is what it WILL BE. Okay? This is my ref. (OMG THE EYES ARE FREAKING AMAZING!) X3 Anyways I REALLY want critique on this! I want my skills to improve. Now, COPYRIGHT TIME! Everyones favorite!
Song: Before The End by The Script
Link to song: [link]
Moon (c) ~Moondreamwarrior
Art(Amazingly)(c)~Moondreamwarrior
Once again, critique!
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XD Stop saying that!
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lol sorry, my friends shoved something in my brain (i think) and now its one of my fave adjectives
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EEEEE!! MOON, THIS IS *AWESOME*. seriously, great job! NOW, CRAPPY CRITIQUING TIME *puts on serious face*
I think that although the wolf looks a *teeny* bit cat-like, it's still really good... plus that makes it all moon-ish XD yay.
But, omg, the EYESSSS *they blow me away* *is blown away by moon's awesometatiousfulness* *whoa long word there* no, really though, they're like, ALIIIIIVE! yay! also i like the hair. so cool how its kinda glowiong.
And the rain looks really nice!!
EEEEEEEEEE BACK TO FRIEND-FREAKING-OUT-TIME. Whoa! It's soooooooooooo amazing. and it only took u, like, less than 2 hrs *omg*
anyway fantasticness XD
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X3 Thank you! So many people talk about the cat thing. No matter what she is ALWAYS half cat! XD I'm gonna edit that.
And awesometatiousfulness? Best.Word.EVER!
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heehee i think so 2
AWESOMETATIOUSFULNESSSSSSSSSSSSS *sings*
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*sings*
awesometatiousful...
awesometatiousful...
awesometatiousfulneeeeeeeesssssss!!!!
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*SINGS*
AWESOMETATIOUSFULLLLL
AWESOMETATIOUSFULLLLLLLLLLLL
AWESOMTATIOUSFULNESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!
*heehee YAY SUGAR*
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3X
hey a sad evil kitteh!
X3
poor kitteh
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X3 kittehhhhhhh
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YAY!
Awesometatiousfulness!
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awesometatiousful kitteh of doom!
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i thought it look cattish too.though i like the ears and all thier fluffyness.now at first i did not see the brightspot on her,but i like it because it looks like a moon shining on her kie her name.but i didn't know if that what it was supposed to be.now if you think about it and blow up the pic and the end of her hair you can see a curl now that curl has a gap in it.i don't know why that bugs me.now bravo to the eyes i luv them so much.bavo and an awesome job to be more modern.
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I know about the gap. That was on purpose! Only true artist can make it work.
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Yahoo. Now. I iz bored.
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OH MY! LOVELY! Now, my pathetic attempt at a critique. Bear in mind, I am in no way a critic. Apologies are given in advance, in case the below critique offends you, or seems unfair in some way.
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First off, allow me to begin by saying that this piece blew me away. The eyes, what sparkle and glow they have! They draw so much attention to them. Professionally done, my friend, professionally done. The rain effects,are dazzling, and the way it looks on Moon's fur is something most artists choose to ignore. Lovely clouds. The grass is nice, though, I notice a strange bright patch under Moon.. Is the rest under a shadow? I understand that this is a wolf... The muzzle seems too short, perhaps it is supposed to be this way though. It seems more cat-like, as do the ears. And the legs confuse me... They seem short. Perhaps I am not looking at it right, but that is what it seems to be for me. I like the gradient background. It works very well with Moon's pelt colors, and marking colors. The script is perfectly placed, and bright enough to make you read it first, then drink in the beauty of the picture. Overall, I give this a 5 out of 5.
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Once again, apologies if this offends you, or seems unfair. I am in no way, shape, or form a professional critic. I do not claim to have more knowledge of anatomy, colors, art style, or anything of the sort. I am merely a teenager attempting to critique a fellow artist's work.
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Thank you! And the reason she looks more like a cat is because it was supposed to be her cat form in the first place. :3 And she always looks a bit like a cat. (Imagine that, a bird with paws. XD)
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Ooh! I thought I read "wolf form". Sorry!
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You did. Moon always looks a bit like a cat!
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DON'T COPY ME! XD
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IT'S A FREE EMOTICON. I CAN USE IT. XD
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I HATE YOU! XD(jk)
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OH! WELL NOW, I'M OFFENDED! (jk)
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YOU SHOULD BE!XD
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GOOD, 'CAUSE I AM!
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WHEE! I'M TICKED OFF NOW! XD
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It's sweet, isn't it? (Sweet in the cool sense, not the "awww" sense)
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Oh, sorry, gotta eat dinner! BRB!
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Bye!:3 For now.
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I love it. It sets such a beautiful mood. And as you say: the eyes are amazing!.
One thing, I would like to see, is that you fix the lettering with a better text. It can be the same color, or a little lighter but better text. Yep, love the rain and the glow!
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Yeah. I just found a text I liked 'cause I couldn't find anything that fits it. And Thank you!
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