3wyl [2010-11-25 19:33:13 +0000 UTC]
It's like there is a fight going on.. and it's pretty interesting because you've made it sound physical, and yet the heart (in this sense) is metaphorical?Makes you think, anyway. I like how you've portrayed vulnerability there... or about to portray?Great stuff.
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mooneyfire In reply to 3wyl [2010-11-26 00:55:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank yooou! I'm really glad you pretty much figured out exactly what I was going for. I really appreciate the input!
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