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Moonhawk424 — The 'L' Word chap11 by-nc-nd
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Description At first, all they saw was a wall of blinding white light.

Startled , eyes burning and half blinded by the light, Amy and the Doctor threw their arms over their faces, shielding their eyes.

Hurriedly the Doctor searched in the inside pockets of his jacket blindly, and pulled out two pairs of modified dark sunglasses. He gave a pair to Amy and both of them put them on, looking around.

As her eyes adjusted slowly and her surroundings became clear, Amy gasped in amazement, laughing a little in shocked pleasure.

Spreading his arms wide in delight, the Doctor cried "Indah Permata!"

He grinned at Amy. "The first discovered habitable star. Means 'beautiful jewel' in Malay."

Amy blinked, "The Malaysians discovered it??"

He looked at her oddly, "Hey! Every nation has it's time." The Time Lord laughed, "Especially on Earth."

They were standing on crystal, which must have been about 20 miles thick. It was beautifully transparent, and underneath it you could see the bright flames of the star, flickering and burning and sending rainbows of light up through the ground.

To their left, a forest of tapering crystal towers spewed shimmers of heat and smoke into the pale blue sky, and to the right, a huge bulbous set of domes and spires- much like any typical desert palace, stood proud, surrounded by mountains of crystal. It was indescribably beautiful, and for a while Amy just stared whilst the Doctor watched her, grinning.

There was a low hum and the Doctor looked up, squinting into the light of the two suns and a red planet hanging in the sky. Slowly, a huge white ship with golden sides came gleaming into view. He nudged Amy and pointed up.

"Look! Here they come- the first ever guests to a star. This is history! And it means I know the date- it's the year 48,263 and, on your calendar, basically the…." He frowned, counting on his fingers.

"The first of August. On that ship are all the most important leaders of humanity, and they're here to declare this star, officially, 'open'."

Smiling, Amy clung to the Doctor's arm. "So, I guess there's gonna be like a big opening ceremony yeah? And 49th century paparazzi…?"

The Doctor nodded. "Mhm, oh, and of course, a royal ball….and a buffet with the best food in the last eight galaxies you lot have discovered…"

Amy nodded thoughtfully, "And I suppose…With your psychic paper, you could probably…."

The Doctor nodded. "Oh yeah, I can get us in. Of course, we'd have to be appropriately dressed…." Amy grabbed the Doctor and grinned and the Time Lord grinned madly back.

"Come on then, lets go!!"

Amy half ran- half hobbled back to the TARDIS and disappeared inside. The Doctor watched her, then turned to look at the crystal star, and the ship, slowly landing outside the palace.

I have to keep her with me, it's just not the same alone…

Quietly, he followed her back into the TARDIS.

X

About 45 minutes later the Doctor was waiting for Amy outside the wardrobe, dressed in a smart black tuxedo with a blood red bow tie. He actually kind of liked the outfit- although he'd refused to swap his boots, which the TARDIS had insisted on cleaning anyway. Amy's ankle had heeled and he'd taken off the bandages, relishing her astonishment, but she'd now taken half an hour to get ready, and they were running late.

Peeking at his watch the Doctor knocked on the door, again.

"Aaaamy!! Hurry up! At this rate we're going to miss the arrival of President Satu- and he teleports onto the buffet table, it's brilliant!!"

From far away there came the echo of a laugh. "Alright alright, hang on."

There was a scuffle and a rustle, and, finally the door opened from behind the Doctor, and out stepped Amy. Amelia Jessica Pond. The Doctor blinked.

He'd never realized she was so….beautiful.

Her long red hair hung down over her shoulders in loose curls, and her eyes were emphasized by flashes of black and gold makeup. Her lips were red and she wore white pearl drop earrings on golden chains, with a necklace dripping pearls to match. Her dress was strapless, and flared into a full skirt at her hips from being almost corseted- it was bright, shimmering gold, and she quite literally glowed.

She looked at him suspiciously, and blood flushed her cheeks pink, completing the picture. "What?"

The Doctor shrugged and grinned mischievously, spreading his arms wide. " 'She walks in beauty, like the night,' " He quoted, his voice dropping  unconsciously.

Amy raised an eyebrow, still standing in the doorway, illuminated by the light of the wardrobe.

The Doctor could have sworn the TARDIS had dimmed the lights. Surely they weren't normally this warm, honey colored glow….

"Who said that?"

The Doctor smiled and shrugged, "Lord Byron." He paused, checking himself. "The first Lord Byron, that is- the one from your time. Actually, it's a poem."

Amy leaned against the door, and the gold silk flowed over her body like a waterfall of light.

What was with this tingling sensation, and sudden obsession with light?! Maybe he'd hit his head…

"How does the rest go?"

The Doctor looked at her, startled, blue-grey eyes sparkling with secret intelligence. "Hmm?"

Amy smiled, "The poem, how does it go?"

He grinned a little, and dropped his voice, taking her left hand and putting his right on her waist, and began to gently dance her into the control room, the poem their music in the warm, dim light.

"She walks in Beauty like the night," He waltzed her down the dim corridor, stepping softly.

"Of cloudness climes and starry skies," he spun her and Amy laughed, her scarlet curls flying. They stepped down the steps, the Doctor keeping a firm grip on his companion, supporting her so she felt weightless as they drifted around the console.

They reached the doors and he pulled her gently closer, slowly turning in a circle as he moved his face next to hers, smiling into her eyes. "And all that's best of dark and bright,"

He moved his left hand to gently cup her cheek, "meet in her aspect and her eyes…"

They stared at each other, breathing slightly irregular, hearts stammering, caught in the moment. Their lips were barely an inch apart. Amy's hair framed her face and her eyes sparkled. Her cheek under the Doctor's palm was warm and soft.

The Doctor smiled- though sadness flashed into his eyes, and he let her go, stepping back and raising his hands.

"That's how it goes."

Amy smiled at him, gazing into his eyes with an intensity that seemed to pierce his soul. "It's beautiful."
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Comments: 52

Moonhawk424 In reply to ??? [2011-03-22 08:31:46 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks very much, if you follow the link you can read the rest, and the sequel....i've flipped the switch on anonymous reviews so if you want you can review too and just stick your da name in your pen name...?

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larak333 In reply to Moonhawk424 [2011-03-23 00:21:33 +0000 UTC]

wait... im new...sorta....

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Moonhawk424 In reply to larak333 [2011-03-23 07:33:21 +0000 UTC]

haha ok, there's a link in my artist comments, click it, follow it and it'll take you to the fic, down the bottom is an option to pick chapters and a little bubble that lets you review

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larak333 [2011-03-21 01:54:44 +0000 UTC]

but what's the L word?

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Moonhawk424 In reply to larak333 [2011-03-21 08:26:42 +0000 UTC]

haha 'love'- you know how people say the 'f' word instead of swearing? well, the doc, being the silly thing he is, is trying very hard not to think the 'l' word, because if he does he might have to admit some difficult truths about the way he feels....it just seemed like something the doctor would do I guess

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HappyCatSaysDie [2011-01-03 16:34:52 +0000 UTC]

also NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE, I WILL DIE OTHERWISE.

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Moonhawk424 In reply to HappyCatSaysDie [2011-01-04 14:42:33 +0000 UTC]

haha, hey there- thanks for all your lovely comments, umm, I'll do my best- but I'm not that great at uploading stuff on here (something always goes wrong), there is a link to the rest in my note if you check- and there's a sequel to this story too if you're interested? Thanks again.

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HappyCatSaysDie In reply to Moonhawk424 [2011-01-04 18:51:27 +0000 UTC]

a sequel? cool, where can I find this sequel?

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Moonhawk424 In reply to HappyCatSaysDie [2011-01-04 21:34:01 +0000 UTC]

haha have you read the other 20 chapters of this? umm, anyhoo, if you have, the sequel is 'Growing Up' and you can find it here:
[link]

thanks so much for your enthusiasm!

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HappyCatSaysDie In reply to Moonhawk424 [2011-01-05 07:28:42 +0000 UTC]

THANKS

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Moonhawk424 In reply to HappyCatSaysDie [2011-01-05 17:24:41 +0000 UTC]

no worries please do let me know what you think, there or here. I hope you enjoy it.

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HappyCatSaysDie In reply to Moonhawk424 [2011-01-06 16:58:59 +0000 UTC]

I love it, I was up all night reading it the plot is wonderful and the romance is PURE FLUFF

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Moonhawk424 In reply to HappyCatSaysDie [2011-01-06 20:32:21 +0000 UTC]

hahaha- that both or the one, and I'm glad you like it, though I'm not sure concerning my writing skills if I should be flattered or offended....heck- you liked it, thankyou!!! <3 I'm doing Alice's 3rd birthday/late new year/christmas oneshot atm, just as a little add on- will be posted by the 13 hopefully

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HappyCatSaysDie In reply to Moonhawk424 [2011-01-07 17:07:56 +0000 UTC]

HORAY

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Moonhawk424 In reply to HappyCatSaysDie [2011-01-07 19:48:10 +0000 UTC]

haha- glad to know someone will read it

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HappyCatSaysDie In reply to Moonhawk424 [2011-01-09 21:36:42 +0000 UTC]

we all are

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Moonhawk424 In reply to HappyCatSaysDie [2011-01-10 07:15:11 +0000 UTC]

all of who? hey? haha, also, it's escalating a little too fast- gonna be more than a oneshot atm...

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HappyCatSaysDie In reply to Moonhawk424 [2011-01-11 16:37:49 +0000 UTC]

ALL OF EVERYONE
I need to take my medication...

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Moonhawk424 In reply to HappyCatSaysDie [2011-01-12 12:51:54 +0000 UTC]

haha, i've finished it now, and it's gonna be more than a oneshot. but I think i'll still keep it short, a little 3 chap 'episode'
lol there-there *pats shoulder

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HappyCatSaysDie In reply to Moonhawk424 [2011-01-14 22:52:22 +0000 UTC]

*gulps several purple tablets, calms down*
send me a link when you'r finished plz :3

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Moonhawk424 In reply to HappyCatSaysDie [2011-01-15 08:32:12 +0000 UTC]

haha already done it hang on [link]

hope you like it!

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HappyCatSaysDie In reply to Moonhawk424 [2011-01-15 23:26:26 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU

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Moonhawk424 In reply to HappyCatSaysDie [2011-01-16 19:40:13 +0000 UTC]

haha no worries

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HappyCatSaysDie In reply to Moonhawk424 [2011-01-23 16:00:49 +0000 UTC]

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HappyCatSaysDie [2011-01-03 10:58:23 +0000 UTC]

OK, I have read this fluff 10 times now and it never gets old, I just cant stop O_O

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HappyCatSaysDie [2011-01-02 23:17:14 +0000 UTC]

I usualy think fanfic is stupid and badly written but this is beautifuly done, this chapter is by far the best (Doctor who poetry For the world)

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spyro9981 [2010-09-26 19:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaw man! this is was so amazeing! are you going to write more of this. or is that the way it ends? please don't tell me thast ti beacsue tjis is just awesome. I need to read on!

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Moonhawk424 In reply to spyro9981 [2010-09-27 18:25:34 +0000 UTC]

haha no- I've written the rest, all 23 chaps, and a sequel lol, go to my profile on fanfic and click the link- I flipped the switch on anonymous reviews, so please do tell me what you think.
here's the link:
[link]

so glad you like it!

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Just-Mina [2010-08-29 06:30:06 +0000 UTC]

I just read this chap on fanfiction.net and came here to this just to tell you how AMAZINGLY HAPPY this fluff made me :')
okay, so I officially love you (and it's possible that I may be a little overly sentimental because it's 8:30 am and I haven't slept a minute, I just had to stay up reading this and watching doctor who scenes)

you are SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SOOOOO good

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Moonhawk424 In reply to Just-Mina [2010-08-29 10:02:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks so so so so so so so sooooo much! I hope you get a good night's sleep eventually, and I'm glad you like my story!
Kat

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Just-Mina In reply to Moonhawk424 [2010-08-29 12:54:36 +0000 UTC]

unfortunatly I'm still sitting here reading xD
straaange

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Moonhawk424 In reply to Just-Mina [2010-08-29 14:31:02 +0000 UTC]

lol- not strange- flattering still, thanks a lot!!

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Just-Mina In reply to Moonhawk424 [2010-08-29 15:45:12 +0000 UTC]

and I'm VERY very sorry but I've commented almost every chapter in fanfiction.net. I apologize for that from the bottom of my fangirl heart, but I just like telling people my opinions even though they're probably not interested in it at all...that's basically what my life seems to be about ^^

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Moonhawk424 In reply to Just-Mina [2010-08-29 16:31:27 +0000 UTC]

woah don't apologise!! I love getting feedback- otherwise I have no idea what works and what doesn't- what people think, and that's why I use the site in the first place! Please continue to do so, I really appreciate it!
Kat

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Just-Mina In reply to Moonhawk424 [2010-08-29 16:59:39 +0000 UTC]

yeah but I think it's mostly silly things so I'll try to write some more productive comments in the future ^^

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Moonhawk424 In reply to Just-Mina [2010-08-30 02:02:18 +0000 UTC]

ok thankyou!

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xXLittle-WolfieXx [2010-08-06 23:47:09 +0000 UTC]

You so have to write more! After this chapter, I'd be overly confused and disappointed if you stopped writing this! I'll be waiting...and waiting...and waiting...and waiting some more...for the next chapter. I love the poem; so much feeling!

(Did I mention waiting?)

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HappyCatSaysDie In reply to xXLittle-WolfieXx [2011-01-02 23:17:35 +0000 UTC]

I completely agree ^-^

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Moonhawk424 In reply to xXLittle-WolfieXx [2010-08-07 05:22:29 +0000 UTC]

yup and thanks, glad you enjoyed it- go to the fic!!

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xXLittle-WolfieXx In reply to Moonhawk424 [2010-08-07 05:53:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah! I never saw that! TO THE FIC!

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Moonhawk424 In reply to xXLittle-WolfieXx [2010-08-07 14:18:33 +0000 UTC]

haha hope you enjoy it!

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xXLittle-WolfieXx In reply to Moonhawk424 [2010-08-08 02:32:08 +0000 UTC]

And there is a sequel! I must read that also!

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Moonhawk424 In reply to xXLittle-WolfieXx [2010-08-08 07:10:10 +0000 UTC]

hehe hope you do, don't forget to review the rest and let me know what you think!! ;D

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xXLittle-WolfieXx In reply to Moonhawk424 [2010-08-08 07:44:43 +0000 UTC]

I'll be sure to review! You'll definitely know it's me; I'll probably always be on high!

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Moonhawk424 In reply to xXLittle-WolfieXx [2010-08-08 09:02:33 +0000 UTC]

hahaha lol, fair enough, can't wait!

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xXLittle-WolfieXx In reply to Moonhawk424 [2010-08-08 09:16:55 +0000 UTC]

That, and I also said who I was...bound to be a giveaway!

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Moonhawk424 In reply to xXLittle-WolfieXx [2010-08-08 10:25:30 +0000 UTC]

yup, just saw your review and replied- can't wait for the next and your witty opinion

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xXLittle-WolfieXx In reply to Moonhawk424 [2010-08-08 20:51:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I have many of those...

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Moonhawk424 In reply to xXLittle-WolfieXx [2010-08-09 03:05:47 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Dreccas [2010-06-30 09:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Haven't bothered reading anything previous yet, might get around to that later, but I found this quite good
Love the doctor

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