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Christine992 [2017-02-07 22:03:25 +0000 UTC]
I was browsing and happened to see this. It is good? Should I start from the beginning?
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kartaegirl [2011-08-28 23:18:09 +0000 UTC]
hmmm... i had an imaginary friend when i was very little and her name was shadow....
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invisiblexnxwatching [2010-10-01 14:53:36 +0000 UTC]
I noticed that you have alot of the characters from ur other stories or atleast they have the same name. Like shadow and chistopher
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MoonlightIllusionist In reply to invisiblexnxwatching [2010-10-03 17:32:13 +0000 UTC]
Yea, when I first did this story, I was thinking of throwing them in...and having a chapter or two in 'The Guardian' to work this way....but I decided against it...>> So they shows up randomly xD
~MLI
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Misa-Misa-Kisa [2010-03-05 16:27:50 +0000 UTC]
very very good.
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dark-daughter-devil [2010-01-24 23:35:56 +0000 UTC]
Are You going to continue "My vampire Romance" ? Please say yes!...I love your writing its amazing, and im dieing to know what happens next
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MoonlightIllusionist In reply to dark-daughter-devil [2010-01-25 00:38:45 +0000 UTC]
Lol It's finished already. It ends on Chapter 31 I believe, and then the sequel is 'Crimson Love'. Which isnt finished just yet...>> The rest of 'My Vampire Romance' Should be there...I know it is somewhere...XD
~MLI
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MoonlightIllusionist In reply to dark-daughter-devil [2010-01-26 02:39:09 +0000 UTC]
As of right now I believe the number is 17....but the number I have on my outline is about 29. And thats how many it should have when it finishes. Maybe more...it depends on if I revamp it...but who knows...
~MLI
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taylor123bach [2009-03-03 03:15:35 +0000 UTC]
wow i really enjoy reading your stuff!!!u have got talent!!!i keep gettin in trouble cause iwont get off the computer from reading it!!!i love it!!!
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purplesun1 [2009-01-29 08:14:09 +0000 UTC]
MAN THIS STORIE IA AWSOME.YOU MADE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH VAMPIRES NOW.IT JUST GETS MORE AND MORE EXCITING AS YOU READ ON.
P.S:YOUR STORY IS PROBAPLY 100,NO,1000 TIMES BETTER THEN STEPHENIE MEYERS BOOKS.SHE SHOULD BE JEALOUS.
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MoonlightIllusionist In reply to purplesun1 [2009-01-29 15:57:39 +0000 UTC]
okay now THAT'S a super good compliment! XD I've had so many ppl tell me my story's somewhat like Twilight...bugs the shiz outa me...
~MLI
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Mandie94 [2008-08-22 15:52:58 +0000 UTC]
I love this soooo much!!!! its blowing my mind cause i want to know what happens so bad!!! this is so not the twilight series because this is sooo very much better!!!! An im not sure but is vampire kisses thebook with the gothic girl named raven who falls in love with a boy named alexander??? cause i know i read but i cant remember if that was the story? any way this so is the sh*ts and i cant wait til chapter 29!!!!!!!!!
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MoonlightIllusionist In reply to Mandie94 [2008-08-22 17:10:03 +0000 UTC]
And yes, Thats Vampire Kisses^^ Very good series. Im reading book 4 now after re-reading the series while I waited for book 5 lol
~MLI
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MoonlightIllusionist In reply to Mandie94 [2008-08-22 17:07:23 +0000 UTC]
lol Wow...Why thank you^^ I start school on Monday. I'm sure I might be bored enough to get some writing in, so maybe by Wensday I'll have 29^^
~MLI
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MoonlightIllusionist In reply to adrie545 [2008-08-16 17:11:03 +0000 UTC]
THANK YOU! YES! Another person who doesnt think this is from the damn twilight series >] and yes, I love Vampire Kisses. I read Vampire kisses when I need inspiration and then I can always write this story. So it is very inspired by it^^ And thank you <3
I'm trying to write more, but I'm out of state right now. I'll be back the 18th, so maybe I'll get something done within the week before school starts...but know I will continue it during school XD somehow I find it easier to get interested in it during school lol
But thank you for your kind words <3 they are VERY appreciated<3
~MLI
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DeadlyVampireUnicorn [2008-08-11 00:09:37 +0000 UTC]
AHH! SHADOW IS BACK SHADOW IS BACK!! RUN AND HIDE!! RUN AND HIDE!!!
xd
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Smiling-Vixen [2008-08-09 18:44:45 +0000 UTC]
i cant wait for the next chapter
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LaurenIsDreaming [2008-08-09 15:21:38 +0000 UTC]
I don't mean to sound nasty or spiteful or anything, but what little I read of that sounded really like Eclipse by Stephenie Meyer.
Kind of.
It's good though.
Mind you, I can't talk, I'm writing a vamp-romance too.
Kind of.
nvm.
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MoonlightIllusionist In reply to LaurenIsDreaming [2008-08-09 17:46:32 +0000 UTC]
I have NEVER even read eclipse from Stephenie Meyer.
I'm on page 60, and stopped there cause I got bored.
I have better books to get my inspiration from, or better SONGS.
Im not trying to be a bitch but to me, personally, thats an insult.
I have an entire journal entry on the whole "my story is not inspired by stephenie meyer's stuff!" thing..
But thanks. Not trying to be mean, I just dont like being told everything I write reminds them of the fucking twilight series, over and over again, when I didnt even LIKE it that much.
~MLI
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LaurenIsDreaming In reply to MoonlightIllusionist [2008-08-09 18:14:06 +0000 UTC]
Wow.
You're pretty passionate on the whole "I just dont like being told everything I write reminds them of the f**king twilight series" front aren't you. I really respect that.
I'm REALLY sorry if you thought I was implying you'd plagerised it or taken ideas or something.
I guess it's just cause when I finished reading Twilight I started hearing voices and it kinda stuck with me.
Really, really sorry for annoying you.
Lauren M
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MoonlightIllusionist In reply to LaurenIsDreaming [2008-08-09 18:18:36 +0000 UTC]
Im sorry to come off like a bitch, but yes, I am very passionate about it. I want to be a writer when I grow up, and being told my stuff is like her's just kind blows my dreams away, ya know?
And thats fine, I get the same way with "Vampire Kisses" from Ellen Schrieber. (thats like a total awesome series too, if you haven't read it. I recommend it. )
And its fine ^^ I was already in a bad mood cause my internet connection was being like...gayer than a fag to the point where I had to restart my comp to get it back >[ stupid thing.
But thank you for reading, and commenting. Try from the 1st chapter next time please lol it is a book.
~MLI
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LaurenIsDreaming In reply to MoonlightIllusionist [2008-08-09 18:37:00 +0000 UTC]
Next time you write something you should keep it off here and send it off to a publisher; like I said in my comment your stuff is pretty good.
Lauren M
PS I understand what you mean about being stuck in some randomer's shadow.
It stinks.
Can you imagine if you wanted to write a novel about a school for wizards? That would be one badass shadow.
PPS I'm going to read your book now!
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MoonlightIllusionist In reply to LaurenIsDreaming [2008-08-09 18:49:37 +0000 UTC]
Lol I dont think I'm going to make "My vampire romance" into a book..."The Guardian" is my book and I have no way of sending it to a publisher lol.
and yea, I but that would suck ._.
lol thank you.
~MLI
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LaurenIsDreaming In reply to MoonlightIllusionist [2008-08-09 18:56:41 +0000 UTC]
Well, there's loads of tutorials out there on getting published, my favourite is How To Write a Novel in 100 Days or Less.
You keep working at it, I'm sure it'll be awesome.
Sorry for the insult and thanks for the discourse.
Lauren M
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MoonlightIllusionist In reply to LaurenIsDreaming [2008-08-09 19:07:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. ^^ and sorry for being kinda a bitch(minus the kinda) XD Just woken up, kinda irritated already, XD by bad.
~MLI
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