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MoonsChild — It's Time
Published: 2004-06-16 16:58:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 301; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 6
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Description I knew you loved him
yet I clung to the hope
That you may turn around
And see my love for you.

I thought Time would make it right.
Thought that somehow,
You and I are meant to be.
You, my childhood dream.

But now,seeing you hold him,
Crying, ready to die for him
As I for you, know that
It's time to let you go.
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Comments: 7

alitalia [2008-09-04 23:29:40 +0000 UTC]

ok ah, how come ngayon ko lang nakita to?

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chiachrome [2004-09-03 18:27:04 +0000 UTC]

very good ^_^ not too much rhyming. i think rhyming is great for comedy but not for drama. this is just right.

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MoonsChild In reply to chiachrome [2004-09-03 18:50:29 +0000 UTC]

hmm.. i think around the time i made this i was too lazy to try thinking of rhyming words
and thanks.

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chiachrome In reply to MoonsChild [2004-09-03 18:55:54 +0000 UTC]

well, laziness has it's uses, i say. and this is a keeper. ^_^

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sophyX [2004-06-16 17:19:10 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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sophyX [2004-06-16 17:00:22 +0000 UTC]

awe... this is really sad, resignation sometimes is the solution... but sometimes holding on is what matter...
good work.

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MoonsChild In reply to sophyX [2004-06-16 17:09:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks... i submitted this poem just a few minutes ago. thanks again.

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