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This page didn't resulted like I wanted ):Its quite strange so I'm not sure how much clear its for you, I would like to know what do you understood about this panel.
The leaf of the ladybug its terrible made D:
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It looks to me as though he was caught up in some sort of sudden spell.
In the midst of his wanderings, something took advantage of his idle mind.
Sometimes free roaming, can get us to let our guards down, especially in the very
moment when we enjoy ourselves. This is probably what is taking place. 
I'm enjoying the visual story. I was going to comment on every page, but honestly
had enjoyed it so much I had to see what was going to happen next. ^^
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well drawn, but i have no idea what's happening. are those wisps some kind of magic? the top and bottom seem unrelated.
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I believe the wisps of light are like the nature's energy/spirit
It's almost like he's sort of semi-merging with it or connecting to it and feeling the flow of life through mature's energy. That's what I got out of it.
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This is so beautiful, The color scheme makesΒ it looks so peaceful. Sorry if my english is bad.
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El protagonista despues de caminar en esa tierra desconocida entra en sincronia con la naturaleza.
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Your work is so inspiring to me. There are so many narratives that you could imagine for each grouping that you post. They all just make my imagination go in so many directions at once in my mind. If you don't already have work with animation or illustration companies, you should.Β
For the story, it seems as if the child is playing alone on an early evening and it is the time of year where summer gives way to autumn. The child notices the changing of the plants in detail for the first time and wonders what makes the leaves die when the weather changes. In his ignorance, he worries that the plants are ill and suffering, not understanding that it is the way of things, and natural for leaves to wither and fall away as the days grow shorter and the temperature chills.
This is my impressions of this panel. It is very lovely. The color scheme is great.
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Reminds me of when standing in a wood and a great wind overtakes you. The rustle of leaves are sounded all around and you notice the smells, the feel of wind, the sound of the forest.Β Your senses sort of awaken; it's a pretty magical feeling. You did a good job of capturing that for me.Β
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I keep imagining the fish-critic from Spongebob going "perrrrfect censorship!"
Really though, these are fantastic.Β Keep up the good work.
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read it in his voice too.
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I'M SO FUCKING HAPPY SOMEONE REMEMBERS THAT SPONGEBOB EPISODE!
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I wonder what he would do if he met a girl right now...
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From what I hear, the appearance of a Nude Adolescent is viewed as being a very wondrous & pure visage and symbolizes the Innocents of what the world could become. So I wouldn't worry about the matter. This is still a very interesting comic to gaze at, more so without the dialog. Silence is Golden.
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Hmm, are you good at traditional painting? I've never been able to make this kind of work, and I think it's because I'm no good at painting.Β
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I have more experience in watercolors
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That might be it then.Β
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Otro maestro chileno me escribe! 0:
que esta pasando aqui? xd
Muchas gracias por tus palabras C:
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Hahahaha hace poquito un amigo me mostro tu galeria y raye la papa. Le comente a otros colegas y todos se volvieron locos hahaha
Siga con su pulento y bello trabajo.
Saludos!
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Genial compare, muchas gracias por pasarse el dato xd
Me han alegrado mucho sus contactos
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What I understood from the panel is...
The boy steps onto (or into) something magical, which swirls up around him and begins to hypnotize him. To me, the images in the bottom half of the page look like visions that the magic is giving him.
Did I understand it correctly?
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Very close ^^Β just missing to say, that it was the nature inself that "magical thing"
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Beautiful, allthough i hope he would have pants on 
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xd this way nature conection its stronger, don't worry soon he'll be dressed again C:
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i guess XD
okay. Still enjoying every page
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Parece como si se fusionara con la naturaleza
~ se uno con el bosqueeeeeeeeeee~
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It's awesome, don't worry!
I just wished you weren't forced to put the a leaf or something to cover there, but stupid DA rules are stupid for a reason... the ironic fact is that, this way, the attention of the viewer is guided there more than it would without the censorship.Β
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I don't know DA rules, but sure they reach the same conclusion as me.Β Our civilization is still inmature on this matter.
Β I'm just not sure how educative is this leaf.Β Β Remove it have a big cost and a big progress /:
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I sadly also agree... the censorship both ruins the natural beauty of this comic, and it also draws attention to it. It's quite ironic that an art site would have rules against nudity in this context, especially when there is nothing sinister or wrong with it.
In all honesty, I believe the majority of our civilisation is not as immature as is claimed. However, it is always down to those very few individuals who ruin it for the rest of us, and perverse the world we live.
However, if I were to purchase a physical copy of this graphic novel (and if there was a physical novel of this comic, I would be VERY tempted to buy it for the amazing art alone), I would want no unnecessary censorship - I would want to experience the true nature of the art and it's story.
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I perfectly understand what you mean and I fully agree.
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