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Published: 2014-01-29 16:32:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 30265; Favourites: 580; Downloads: 761
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Hey y'all!New milestone for me and my page: 24 000 pageviews (almost 25 as I write this) and 830 watchers
I hope you like this drawing I made to celebrate!
THANK YOU <3
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First off...welcome back! Hope your computer's still functional and everything, and here's your first critique of your return:
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And I think that'll do it. Not to bad a return, and I hope to see more from you in the future!
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I'm not so sure that her right breast looks off. It kind of matches the slightly different shoulder and collarbone on that side. Maybe intentional. I'll assume it was.
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Thanks for the welcoming!
I love to implement small details and a personal touch to my girls's outfits, glad it pays off
What do you mean with "abstract anatomy"? More cartoony?
I'm myself most happy about the line-quality in this one ^^
She's angled quite heavily to her right so I think that far breast should be distinctively "smaller", but maybe I overdid it a tiny bit.
The cleavage looks like that because I was aiming for a "tight/too small bra - look". I was thinking that the edge of her bra presses her breasts up and makes 'em bulge out a bit, and therefore the cleavage-line gets that look.
Yeah maybe not, to make the text look perfectly realistic I should have written it by hand, but I also wanted it to be easily readable. Choices...
Thanks
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Well, you're definitely proving to be quite the fashionista.
And yeah, just more cartoony. A few more liberties taken with it that don't harm the picture as a whole, really.
And that's true...a lot of artists tend to be REALLY unsteady with their lines (like I am) so having a steady hand is a really big benefit to art
Yeah, I think if you were to go with that, the breast might be better bulging OUTWARD a little bit more, you know? Just because of how much it's being squished by the other breast.
Well, I literally think the ONLY problem that's messing up the cleavage might be the fact that the small cleavage line for the breast on the left (her right) seems to flow down with the cleavage, when from that angle, where it joins the cleavage would likely be hidden behind the swell of the right breast (her left). Know what I mean?
And yeah, I totally know that issue. It's not a big deal at all, it was just a nitpicky critique
You're welcome!
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I see what u mean Naomi, thanks!
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Amazing. Great breasts. And I love her looking down.
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Glad u think so! ^^
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We'll then stay tuned for future updates! ^^
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