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Published: 2011-07-22 21:23:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 454; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 7
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Description a wish to walk
among the stars
grounded
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Comments: 19

saiun [2011-11-21 02:52:28 +0000 UTC]


Well done! Your work has earned an Honorable Mention in the Haiku Club's 2011 Tanabata Contest .



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Lupina24 [2011-08-24 04:29:34 +0000 UTC]

I love the irony of this piece. Even when knowing it is impossible you still hope or wish for it to be true. This is inspiring ethereal and depressing. A challenge to pull off in so few words. Well done!

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mooshu17 In reply to Lupina24 [2011-08-25 22:30:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it. Part of the inspiration came from the end of the shuttle program. It's always good to wish for the impossible

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Lupina24 In reply to mooshu17 [2011-08-25 23:33:29 +0000 UTC]

ahh, yeah, the end of the shuttle program is a harsh blow to the scientific community. I agree, wishing for the impossible is inspiring.

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somnomollior [2011-08-20 12:54:18 +0000 UTC]

It looks so good in the tree, and nice to see one outside too. I think the road looks great going off in to the distance with the stars leading on and upwards. The words are inspiring too.

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mooshu17 In reply to somnomollior [2011-08-22 13:31:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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vividrose [2011-08-17 20:35:35 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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mooshu17 In reply to vividrose [2011-08-22 13:31:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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vividrose In reply to mooshu17 [2011-08-22 20:43:36 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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betwixtthepages [2011-07-25 02:41:57 +0000 UTC]

Lovely. Very, very lovely. I especially adore your word choice. Nice work!

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mooshu17 In reply to betwixtthepages [2011-07-25 12:40:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for your wonderful comment and taking the time to come read my poem

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betwixtthepages In reply to mooshu17 [2011-07-25 13:04:59 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome!

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saiun [2011-07-25 00:57:39 +0000 UTC]

Accepted for the Haiku Club's 2011 Tanabata Contest ! Make sure to check out the other entries and our contest history as well.

Good luck and consider participating in our other active events .



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saiun [2011-07-25 00:52:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow... this one really hit home for me.

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mooshu17 In reply to saiun [2011-07-25 01:38:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it. I'm pretty pleased with it. Do you like my tanzaku?

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saiun In reply to mooshu17 [2011-07-25 03:08:34 +0000 UTC]

I do!

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somnomollior [2011-07-23 16:41:47 +0000 UTC]

I am envious of your entry. Impressive. I have ideas for mine but haven't found the time to do it yet. Hopefully next week.

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mooshu17 In reply to somnomollior [2011-07-24 19:07:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'd been musing on it for about a week before I actually came up with anything. I look forward to your entry

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somnomollior In reply to mooshu17 [2011-07-26 12:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Still procrastinating!

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