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Published: 2008-05-31 20:25:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 936; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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I'm extremely pleased with this. I'm trying to work on my shading techniques, and I'm so happy with how his muscles came out. I'm so pleased with this overall, though his hair and claws kind of bug me. I might tweak this a little later, but I'm so excited that its done that I have to post it.This is Hugh Jackman as Wolverine. I lost the link for the reference, but here it is on my photobucket: [link]
I'd love some feedback.
Used: stomps, pencils 5B, 2B, HB, 2H, F, mechanical pencil, eraser, tissue.
Lol, I probably drew this on the grainiest paper ever.
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You drew the angle on his left arm perfectly, good job.
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Mm, thanks, that was one of the things I focused on while drawing this.
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The pose and the shading really make this! Awesome work!
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Holy flipidy! 
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It's great! This is really well done, his expression is awesome!
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Rally well done, I can't see what you don't like about the hair but I think you're having problems with the claws because a) they don't really seem to come out of the hand, more on top. Maybe a few highlights to suggest that they're under the skin would fix that problem. b) perspective, both sets of claws are the same size in the drawing so those on the left (right hand) should be longer and the ones on the right should taper more sharply I think imo. And yes that is really grainy paper and no fun to work with 
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Thanks very much for the C&C.
I really wish I'd done it on smoother paper, but I guess it's too late now haha.
Thanks again.
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No problem, it's not really something to fix up. Just something you can keep in mind next time; perspective can be really difficult and just needs practice, I doubt any artist really gets it even after a few practices, it's one of those things you have to constantly develop.
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great work, your tones are very well done and have achieved form and good muscle definiation, and the haair is good too, really well done
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This is really good! I like the hair and claws... 
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Great work. The dynamic pose really catches the eye.
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Hey it's Logan! Wolverine! YAY nice job! Looks really realistic. Perspective looks good as well. It's still hard even if you use a reference.
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Oh it definately is.
Thanks a lot.
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splendid job !
the right hand's claws as you have said yourself bother the eye a little - about the hair, i like it.
What bothered my eye again was one his eyes, looking unfocused, but it's a minor thing.
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