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Mortis-Angelus — Destroyed World
Published: 2007-07-12 09:56:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1740; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 48
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Ok... This was meant for the Pack submition of Space-artists...and im realy pissed off i didnt turn it in, to be honest i was unsure of what to do and in the end forgot. This all was topped of by the fact i wasnt home for a week and so on and on....Im pretty anoyed at my self but hey.Ok i dont consider this finished but it was a nice start i thought. The concept is pretty average its been done alot before also a reason i didnt submit.
anyway hope its something half decent to look at.
comments very welcome
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Hi Dennis! Hadn't heard from you in a while! Good to see you still at it. I like this one, but seeing's how it's a W.I.P I'll do my best to try and critique it. Sorry also cause I don't know much about space art. But anyways, I quite like the composition, but I think the light shining from the top left should have more texture to it - bits of grain sort of smokey - but really slight. I think that would add more 3D to it and allow richer light and dark sort of thing. Well there's my input! Keep up the good work man
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Yeah, I agree with SamInc04.
If a planets getting owned, i think people would expect to see something in the space around it. Maybe some dust, fog, rocks, etc....
But since its a WIP, it looks good so far
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thanks you two yea lots of good input thx
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an sich schonmal nicht schlecht
is aber irgentwie noch nicht ganz ausgereift
fehlen noch paar details auf dem plani sowie im hintergrund
und irgentwie gehen ein paar strahlen von der sonne in die falsche richtung ( zu sehen unter den schiffen links, sind paar dicke durchsichtige helle streifen, auch über dem planeten zu sehen) die müssten eig. in einem anderen winkel stehen
den schatten von dem planeten würd ich vll. abschließen lassen, also do das an den rändern nichts mehr durch scheint
ansonsten sieht das schon ganz nett aus
kann noch was tolles draus werden
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ja klar hast natuerlich recht, vielen dank fuer die tips, mal schaun ob hier noch dran fummle,
danke
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