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MosaicSplash — Firestar's Element
Published: 2010-05-12 01:21:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 537; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 12
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INSPIRED BYThis was not my original idea, I made it while looking at Jessica's picture. She sent me the file and I tried to make a picture like hers, though hers turned out WAAAAAY better
Though I still think its pretty good
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Why Mosaic this is beautifully colored and everything just looks stunning.
The shading looks very nice, but just add some detail to the fur. It looks just like you used a soft brush and then changed the opacity, but just give it some fur detail. It'll really bring the image out.
His head looks kind of strange, I can't tell if I'm supposed to be looking at it from the side, the top view of his head, or what. Fix it by making the angel easier to see. From the looks of his body it looks as if we're supposed to be viewing the side.
The fire, (or whatever the magic is lolfail on my part XD) should be glowing. It's nice and bright but the glow will bring it out.
Asfor the lighting it looks nice but make the orange from the element shine brighter on Firestar.
Other than that, this is an amazing job and looks beautiful. Good job Mosaic. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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I wanna make something like this now. :C
First off, I love the uniqueness of it. The shading is absolutely stunning. I like how you didn't do entirely one line colour and the lines aren't black. The way you did the tail is perfect. I love the anatomy! I also like the position!
I would have taken out the white dashes, and maybe made your signature a tiny bit darker. Maybe make the fire a little bigger (not by much; it doesn't really have to be changed), and in my opinion the tail would have looked better going downwards, not up.
Maybe you could have made the right ear down like the left?
I also would have changed the background colour to not such a bright red. But that's just me, xD I don't like light things.
Overall you did a fantastic job on this (: I would have liked to see this made on Livestream, though! It would have been interesting! Great job; you're really improving. You should be proud of this deviation--it's amazing. Definite +fave!
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I'm just curious, why do you critique on watermarks and signatures? I don't see how it helps the overall piece.
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Sometimes the signature is too easy to take out or it's too noticeable. You don't want your sig too noticeable but at the same time it should be there.
Watermarks should always be on art, just so it doesn't get stolen.
However I usually don't comment on watermarks/signatures.
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I still don't see exactly why, it's the artists choice to watermark or signature their art how they want to. o_O
/shrug, I get what you're saying though
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Thank you for the critique! They really help me with my art
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THANK YOU SECRET ASIAN MAN!
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