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Phuindrad [2020-12-27 17:57:46 +0000 UTC]
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alexwarlorn [2019-10-16 02:48:45 +0000 UTC]
Chara, you tried to restart a war, and traumatized your adopted family, stop pretending you're a neutral party.
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mjSensei259 [2019-09-18 14:19:42 +0000 UTC]
Aaaa I seen HazeSpawn's Frisk and squealed xD, Judgement Hall was always my favorite.
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IvyLeafTea [2019-09-04 03:23:35 +0000 UTC]
My heart overflows with joy! Your comic is lovely and I'm so honored that you included the Frisk from my story in it. Thank you so much. You've really made my day ^_^
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MotherOfTheUniverse In reply to IvyLeafTea [2019-09-04 04:16:33 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome! I love day-making! I’m glad you like my comic thus far! 🥰
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higgihai [2019-08-21 20:58:16 +0000 UTC]
You did an amazing job of making the different Frisks! I could definitely tell which one was which and they all look so cute!!! Nice work :3
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higgihai [2019-08-21 20:57:01 +0000 UTC]
*My frisk cries in a corner*
Lmfao Jk can't wait for more!
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higgihai [2019-08-21 20:56:33 +0000 UTC]
It's gonna get a little FRISKY
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TC-96 [2019-08-21 02:01:45 +0000 UTC]
Heyyyy ET!Frisk my boy!
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MotherOfTheUniverse In reply to Taleea [2019-08-21 20:43:32 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome! I really like your AU. The art style is amazing, and I love the story thus far. And thank you! I was pretty sure I did somewhat of a bad job at drawing your Frisk, so thanks for the applause!
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Taleea In reply to MotherOfTheUniverse [2019-08-29 20:46:32 +0000 UTC]
Sorry for the late reply.
You're very welcome and... Nah, you did well.
Afterall it's really not a simple thing to emulate a style. ^^
And I'm glad you like my works so far ^^ Be welcome at any time to see what's new.
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MotherOfTheUniverse In reply to Taleea [2019-08-29 21:33:20 +0000 UTC]
Na, your cool! Any reply is a good reply to me!
And thank you! I'm glad you thought I did well. I gotta say, this was my favorite page to draw. And I'll be reading every update you've got with your comics, you can be sure of that!
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Y3llowHatMous3 [2019-08-20 16:26:58 +0000 UTC]
Funny thing is Kiddo is not the original Frisk from the timeline before the screwed up reset. The original Frisk is on the surface while their sibling is the one that’s with Sans and Papyrus. But it’s still cool that you add Kiddo to the bunch, even thou they wouldn’t know a thing about the resets and timelines. I very happy they were still mentioned, thank you so much!
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littlelululu [2019-08-20 06:52:20 +0000 UTC]
is just a game nobody cares what character you control or what NPC you meet what they thinking because is just a game.
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MissJulyFarraday [2019-08-20 02:49:28 +0000 UTC]
THIS. I think that if the UT fandom kept that in mind, there wouldn't be as much pointless arguments on many things.
But by this logic, shouldn't there also be more than one version of Chara too? Considering that their background story is pretty vague too and people interpret them as diversely as they do for Frisk...
And OMG, I am so happy that you included my Frisk in this! I did consider the possibility of that first Frisk be mine, but I thought it would be too egocentrical to assume this. And thank you for the kind words about my work! I'm flattered. ^///^ It's nice to see that you browsed through my art to see how I drew Frisk. Though, her clothes are normally not that dark. I drew it that way to display that the room she was fighting in was dark. (You couldn't have known, I drew young Frisk just once.) But it's okay, it at least makes my Frisk look a bit different from the others. You did a good job drawing her, she looks cute!
(Just to say, you misspelled Noelle's name. You basically wrote the male version of the name, lol. This one is even rarer than the female name, because I don't know people who'd name their son "Christmas". XD)
And you have a point about OUAT. The quality did decrease in seasons 5 and 6. My favourite seasons are 1, 3, 4 and 7. (Though, I did like the part of season 5 when the gang went inthe Underworld. That's mostly my fascination for the life after death question.) Even though I adored that show, I did see some flaws and mistakes made by the writers. And when I wrote my fic, I borrowed from the show only the best. And since you're entering the ground of retcon with your story, I advise you to be very careful and look at OUAT as an example of some mistakes to not make. Really, if you are not careful, it's very easy to fail a story. Because if handled wrongly, a bad retcon can either generate a character degradation, or to diminish the impact of some important canonically pre-established moments. Keep this in mind and you'll succeed at doing a good retcon.
Oh, and Rumplestiltskin is the reason of my love for neutral characters. I like to imagine Chara having some of his vibes, lol.
And also, just like you I adore the Mettaton vs Frisk fight animation! It's the very first fan-work of UT that I saw and it has also contributed into shipping Papyrisk. (Papyrus has heart eyes when he watches Frisk pose on tv! )
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MotherOfTheUniverse In reply to MissJulyFarraday [2019-08-21 21:00:54 +0000 UTC]
We'll be getting into the different Chara's as well, though it won't be too focused on, mostly to avoid the headache. Getting meta makes my head spin. And of course I included your Frisk! Your my bruh, so you must be included. And thanks! I did my best. I liked the colors too. Though, I didn't realize the lighting was different . I'll fix Noelle's name later. I was tired that day. I haven't actually seen the 7th season of OUAT. The musical episode ruined the show for me. I admittedly liked some aspects of the 5th season, though the retcon was already getting wishy-washy come 4th season and it kinda all went downhill from there. I've got a good amount of plot planned, and as far as I've come with the layout, there shouldn't be a problem with characterization at this point, though I'm still trying to smooth out a few road blocks. It should be fine though. And now that you mention it, Chara does have the occasional Rumplestiltskin vibe. Though, I'd like to imagine they're a bit more trustworthy, though, that just might be hopeful thinking. Thus far the only thing I really trust my Chara with is protecting Frisk ;D And I noticed those heart eyes in the Mettaton vs Frisk fight, Pappy. You can't hide them from me!
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MissJulyFarraday In reply to MotherOfTheUniverse [2019-08-21 21:26:16 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, after the second half of season 4, the retcon started to fail. (I'll never forgive the writers for what they did with Snow and Charming's dark secret. They clearly made this up out of the mood of the moment, and it sucked because Snow White represents a more tender period of my life... it's not fair what they did with her character during this arc.) Ow, so you hated the musical episode? That's a pity, my opinion is completely opposite. I'm a very Disney person, so I adored the musical. And I often listen the songs over and over. (I even parodied Zelena's song as if sang by Chara in my story!) But each tgeir own, I guess. I love season 7, yet a big of the fandom dislikes it (which I don't get).
Yes, I can imagine Chara being slightly more truthworthy than Rumple. I hope they'll have equally hilarious moments from time to time. (I adored Rumple's antics in the show!^^)
And it's normal you didn't realize why Frisk's clothing is darker. Like I said, it's okay and I like how the darker shades look on her. It actually suits her. ^_^
By the way, I forgot to ask. What is the number 40 supposed to represent? (The "fourty traits" Chara mentions.) Is this normal I don't get what it means, or am I just dumb?
And how comes Frisk doesn't know her past? Don't the players invent one for their versions of Frisk just like their personality? Or this player just never thought too much about it?
Anyway, it was a great page.
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MotherOfTheUniverse In reply to MissJulyFarraday [2019-08-21 22:05:43 +0000 UTC]
The player is sorta supposed to resemble me. In my case, I had so many different and contradicting headcannons on what Frisk life was like before she climbed the mountain that I ultimately decided not to think about it too hard. Frisk does have a backstory, but it's a bit different than what we've been lead to believe thus far. The player's backstory sorta imprints onto Frisk, but contradicting choices can muddle it. For example, if I really fell down the mountain, I would be excited to go back to my home, since I've got a family that I love, but I will always have my Frisk choose to stay with Toriel, despite the fact that if I was actually in this situation, I would not do that.
As for Frisk 40 traits, I tried to explain it best I could. But in more detail, when you play Undertale for the first time and build your Frisk, by making decisions, your character gains personality traits, which build them into an actually human rather than a blank slate. For example: If your playing for the first time, and you run into the bullets like Flowey told you, you'd gain "Trust", since you trusted Flowey. If you don't run into them, on the other hand, you'll gain "suspicion". If the only reason you didn't run into them, however, is because you suck at the game mechanics, you won't earn a trait at all at that spot. Kinda like that.
I would've enjoyed the musical episode if it was more of a one-off thing, but then they incorporated it into the plot, which kinda ruined the momentum/tone of the moments, so that got me mad. I did appreciate that they had Snow and Charming make a mistake, but it still ruined characterization and plot threads, so I would've changed the thing they did. Like, maybe they where gonna do the bad thing, but decided not to, but because the author was an ass it still got done anyways. Idk, I like humans making mistakes, but not when it messes up past stuff. I kinda wanna watch season 7 (I heard it features Tiana, so I like that), but I'm also kinda done with that point in my life. Moved on to other fandoms, I guess. Though, it will always be a point of nostalgia.
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MissJulyFarraday In reply to MotherOfTheUniverse [2019-08-21 23:26:23 +0000 UTC]
Season 7 is really worth watch it at least for Rumplestiltskin's character developement. I won't spoil anything, but you see that he went through a long and perilous way, and his story is concluded beautifully. (And Tiana actually is a cool character! )
I don't mind the Charmings make a mistake, it makes them more human. But the idea was just handled wrongly. It would've worked if it had been thought in advance and hinted that they had some dark secret all along. But it wasn't the case and it's obvious. That secret of theirs clearly wasn't part of their lives up until the plot required so. Or, your suggestion would've worked too, since we've seen that the Author has the power to make you act out of character (the Apprentice did what he did against his will). "Fringe" was a much better show in the aspect of retcon and foreshadowing and you could sense that its story was thought long and wide beforehand. Are you familiar with it? If not, it's worth a watch. It had similar themes to "Handplates".
But you do have a strange logic of things regarding that musical episode. I, on the contrary, think that if they had all started singing for no reason without a real connection to the story, it would've been off-setting. Everything you do must make sense and properly be incorporated into the plot, that's a number one rule of writing! The sudden singing was actually one of the things the writers explained the best, lol. XD Way too often, they pulled out the "shut up, it's magic" card. And it can be very frustrating to a reader or viewer of a story, if you abuse of those factors. So, be careful with that too in your story. I hope you have established rules of how magic and DT function, for a much better coherence.
As for Frisk, it's never clearly stated that they do have an actual "home". They may or they may not. If they do not, it would make sense that they decide to stay with Toriel, finding a home with all the new people they met. But again, everyone has their own interpretations and it's normal to struggle with headcanons on this aspect.
And so, does that mean that "fourty" was rather an abstract number?
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MotherOfTheUniverse In reply to MissJulyFarraday [2019-08-22 00:46:58 +0000 UTC]
I've got the functions of DT planned, though it may get a bit complicated. I'll have to do my best to explain it. As for Frisk, their past is all a matter of interpretation, which I will attempt to address eventually. This story has definitely got a LONG way to go. And forty is a bit of an abstract number. Its basically the number of named personality traits inside a person.
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KnightA3 [2019-08-20 01:51:10 +0000 UTC]
Heey! I like that you included the different interpretations of Frisk. And that you included specific ones by a bunch of different people. And I could totally tell which one was mine! You did pretty good at emulating all the styles, considering how many are there. And imitating styles can be hard.
Also really like that you're emphasizing that there is no bad guy
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MotherOfTheUniverse In reply to KnightA3 [2019-08-21 21:04:07 +0000 UTC]
I was excited to draw all the Frisk. I really like how flexible the character is. I can easily picture me as her, going through the underground, making friends, probably dying a lot cause I suck at dodging, but that's besides the point. And I'm glad you liked the styles. I did my best!
Of course, there is no bad guy. Just people trying their best, making mistakes, and trying to fix said mistakes.
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KnightA3 In reply to MotherOfTheUniverse [2019-08-22 16:55:24 +0000 UTC]
We know so little about Frisk, it's easy for there to be so many different interpretations. I know people like to say that the game emphasizes that Frisk is a character separate from you, but...at the end you can choose whether Frisk has someplace else to go or not. Which would determine whether or not Toriel becomes Frisk's mom after the game. And that's not something Frisk gets to choose. So I think the player really does have an influence over Frisk's character beyond just being the puppetmaster. So I like your take on it.
Yeah. Lots of people seem to just like blaming someone for everything. Whether it's Frisk, or Chara(usually Chara), or the player. The closest thing to an actual bad guy was Flowey, and even Flowey was just...misguided.
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Seshirukun [2019-08-20 00:20:11 +0000 UTC]
Omg thank you for mentioning my 'version' of frisk XD
It's awesome how you took the time to draw each one differently, ngl, that takes time when drawing things for the first time
I honestly never thought someone kept tabs on my comics, even less my art style
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MotherOfTheUniverse In reply to Seshirukun [2019-08-21 21:06:00 +0000 UTC]
Your art style is amazing. I did my best to draw it as accurately as possible. Plus, I just like character designs, and a chance to draw multiple Frisk was something I couldn't not take. I love your art style, and your comics are all hilarious.
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LKWayvern [2019-08-20 00:04:22 +0000 UTC]
Mm. On the one hand, I don't believe Frisk or Chara are meant to represent the Player. Frisk is the vessel that we use to interact with the world, but they are their own person. They know things we don't... such as their name. And we only get that name-- realize that this is Frisk, not us, if we follow a certain path. Perhaps they didn't have much say on that path, but they retained some sense of self.
Chara, meanwhile, is who we influence personlity-wise-- our consequences shown to us under the name we chose, the kind of person we turned Frisk and them into out of 'curiosity' or due to desiring a challenge.
Not to mention, Flowey's plea to the player(or Chara, or both) to 'let Frisk live their life'.
That said, I do get how we get so very many Frisks. Taking the narachara theory and the theory that Chara names the songs, we get a very fleshed out character for Chara, but we've still got little, if anything really, about Frisk. Though we do something get comments about what they like or dislike from Chara-- they don't start laughing so hard they cry upon seeing Snowdrake's mother(though Chara might)... Okay admittedly that's all that comes to mind immediately but hints are few and far between.
But in Undertale and Deltarune it was made a big deal of that Chara and Kris are their own people, so I don't understand why Frisk would be the exception.
Then again, like I said. hard to tell really anything about them. A lot of gaps to fill in. So. Can't blame people for filling in those gaps. Not everyone likes digging as deep as I like to.
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MotherOfTheUniverse In reply to LKWayvern [2019-08-21 21:13:59 +0000 UTC]
There's more to Frisk then what even Chara knows. And we'll be exploring the idea of being your own person. Frisk has got a lot of self discovery to get through, and I'm pretty excited for it.
My biggest theory on the three humans of Undertale (KFC) is that Frisk is supposed to represent your identity (personality, gender, ideals, etc), while Chara is meant to represent your will (choices). Kris is what happens when the vessel rejects the player controlling them, hence the ripping out their soul scene in Deltarune, and the more defined personality. (I mean, the only choice you've got for Kris personality wise is wether Kris is more of a "Susie No!" kind of guy or a "I'll just go along with what Susie's doing" kind of guy). The inspiration for a sort of build-a-frisk system in the game was inspired by one of Zarla's comics, and where she explained how flexible Frisk's characterization can be. I am planning on diving into Frisk identity, and what makes her vessel and what makes her more. I like digging deep too, and I'm excited to see where it goes.
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LKWayvern In reply to MotherOfTheUniverse [2019-08-22 01:21:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh my. I shall look forwards to it...
Huh. I dunno about Frisk representing another's identity. Since Deltarune's release I've been developing my own theories on that.
I saw a really good theory that the red soul wasn't determination, but instead 'Being Yourself'(Based off how in the Ball Game, instead of red being using determination, it's continuing to be yourself I believe). If Frisk and Chara retain their own personalities, then Frisk keeps their name, and gets the best possible ending. Checking mirrors results in Chara telling Frisk 'It's you!' or later on, 'It's you, Frisk!' Frisk stays their own person. Chara manages to help you save Asriel, and you learn their story and history, and achieve the goal they died tried to die for.
But if Frisk does not remain true to themself, but instead kills others under your influence, then they fade as a person and become irrelevant. We never learn their name. Chara starts controlling them as well as yourself. When you check mirrors you get 'It's me, Chara', too. Even Chara, as a red soul, can't really escape from this-- their whole worldview being warped to center on the accumulation of power, rather than freeing than monsters.
Then there's Kris, seeming to be the only one with the ability to well and truly reject you and your influence. Perhaps because they're older, or have been experimenting with reset abilities(or, the disconcerting theory that you are not their first player, and thus they have acquired experience in facing entities like you. Something interesting about Kris is the emotional reaction they have to you throwing away the trash ball in their inventory in the Light World, or drinking the hot chocolate.)
I am pretty interested where you take Frisk, though.
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