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xaviir20 [2016-05-15 01:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Does Ralph's eyes turn blue when he gets mad?

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xaviir20 [2015-11-11 02:57:43 +0000 UTC]

He looks angry like hulk and Mike is like betty when she calms him down.

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RebekahKroeplin [2013-07-11 03:00:30 +0000 UTC]

I almost started crying when I read this!    I literally screamed out loud, though, at the end of that chapter.  OH MY CHEEZIT, THAT WAS TERRIBLY AMAZING.

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RazorWolfFlare [2013-06-25 18:16:27 +0000 UTC]

I just finished reading chapter 43 and I like the cliff hanger you did at the end of the chapter. It makes me wan't to read the next chapter no matter how long it takes for you to post it.

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RazorWolfFlare [2013-06-24 16:51:21 +0000 UTC]

You got to have your story published as a book some day. That's how good it is. You should make another story about a kid that gets sucked up into the digital world of the arcade. And the first person he sees is Ralph.

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JenZphantom [2013-06-23 17:39:05 +0000 UTC]

Another cliff-hanger...
I can honestly say that I've never read a story before that has gripped me in the way that 'Love Bug' has! And I've read more than a few books and fan-fictions in my time! Seriously, I just don't want this story to end, you're an excellent story-teller and illustrator!
I just hope you've got a happy ending planned!

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redbirds003 [2013-06-23 06:28:01 +0000 UTC]

This chapter was utterly amazing girl! Love your artwork too btw! Oh and if you haven`t checked, you`ve got a few reviews already(including mine ).

And again, keep up the great work your almost there!

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amam2217 [2013-06-23 02:11:39 +0000 UTC]

I hate having to wait for the next chapter! It's pure torture!!! : [ This chapter was so awesome!

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CraftyKeronian [2013-06-23 01:37:25 +0000 UTC]

excellent work! i think it's a nice touch that ralph's teeth glow too. the only thing i can think of to add to this picture is maybe adding some shading around the cords holding him so it looks like they're digging into his skin more or at least alludes to the welts forming underneath the bands

and don't worry about coloring it on a whim. the color really adds to the picture as it is

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GND-KicaCris [2013-06-23 01:02:23 +0000 UTC]

T_____________________T WHYYYYYYYYYY?!!! I still can't form coherent comments after reading this chapter!!!!!! *Gross sobing*

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DisneyThorn92 [2013-06-23 00:31:34 +0000 UTC]

Another pair of masterpieces. Both the chapter and the picture. I don't know if anyone (audience or character) really found Ralph scary in the original movie, but looking at the animal rage in his face here is terrifying. I don't know where Mike found the courage, but this is not the wide-eyed naive little painter who was amazed that she had two hands about 30 chapters ago. She has come a long way, and I can't wait to see her go even further.

And the four crying out the Bad Guy Affirmation is so touching. A bit corny, but a necessary corniness after the carnage of the last few chapters. The writing for the possessed Ralph is especially chilling, as the cold, calculating virus gives in to the re-emergence of Ralph's emotions. Please, don't stop here.

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