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mouse-stories In reply to AsthmaticTiger [2018-12-08 17:24:41 +0000 UTC]
Glad you're interested! Chapter 2 should be ready soon~
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falloutghoul [2018-12-04 23:37:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm looking forward to chapter 2.
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mouse-stories In reply to falloutghoul [2018-12-05 01:59:27 +0000 UTC]
Good! That'll be coming out... sometime soonish, probably
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Straif5 [2018-12-03 06:13:57 +0000 UTC]
Im liking where this is going already...
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A-Random-Dude-001 [2018-12-03 03:42:33 +0000 UTC]
Commenting here for both Chapter 0 and 1; I'm liking the worldbuilding and ideas so far! The descriptions were nice and helped expand upon the 'feeling' of the setting. Can't wait for the next part!
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mouse-stories In reply to A-Random-Dude-001 [2018-12-03 03:51:19 +0000 UTC]
thaaanks I'm really trying my best to not spend the whole time worldbuilding so that I can include actual story. I'll probably include a nice little blurb at the start of each chapter to explain some aspect of the setting so I don't have to waste words on it in the narrative.
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A-Random-Dude-001 In reply to mouse-stories [2018-12-03 03:54:17 +0000 UTC]
That actually sounds like a pretty good idea, having a small worldbuilding blurb at the start of the chapter, separated from the main content using a horizontal rule or something.
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mouse-stories In reply to A-Random-Dude-001 [2018-12-03 04:34:45 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, 'cuz I could literally drone on about that kind of stuff endlessly, lol
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