Kraneimation [2019-06-19 05:20:07 +0000 UTC]
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Firstly, I really like what you did with the style of Freddie. It's really cool and it certainly brings a cartoonish take on the legendary singer himself. Also the background looks really beautiful, with the rainbow style.
I however... do kinda have some problems with this drawing.
Firstly, the anatomy. Now I sometimes struggle with anatomy too, so you're not alone on this, but I think the shoulders are the biggest problem. They seem way too big. It seems.. a bit off. I get that it's your own style, but maybe downsize the shoulders a bit.
Next, the hair on Freddie's chest. I know that the actual Freddie Mercury did have a lot of chest hair, but it seems like you went a lil bit overboard on the hair. Personally, I think maybe instead of using the paintbrush, use maybe the tool you draw with, and make tiny hairs on his chest. It might be a lil time consuming, but it'll certainly pay off!
And finally, and this is a lil short, but the nose seems a bit wonkey. Again, this is something I'm guilty of, since my noses aren't great either, but yeah, maybe fix up his nose a lil bit, and it'll be just fine. ^^
I can see you definitely have the potential to be good at drawing, but you might have to do just a little bit of work.
Hopefully I wasn't too harsh, and I hope you have a wonderful day/night! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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Procar In reply to MouseAvenger [2019-05-05 20:06:19 +0000 UTC]
uhm...well, iti s still nice music, not my favourite one, but I would like to listen them x3
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