HOME | DD
mpanther — Mephis' Free Ride 03
Published: 2009-03-03 08:04:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 3924; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 52
Redirect to original
Description
I took up a commission offer to do a Transformation comic. 10 pages in all, and all sketch only.I have no idea how this conversation got started among them... Nor would I care to see how it goes... if Cait did tell that story.
Page: 3/10
<< First | < Previous | Next > | Last >>
*caitsith29 wrote the story.
=mpanther did the art.
Related content
Comments: 9
I do so love the dialogue on this page, really steals the show.
From what I can see, the characters have a pretty clear skeleton, making for nice solid designs. In the third panel, however, it doesn't appear that his vest kept the same shape.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Sorry for the delay replying, hence I was taking a quick break and planning the next short comic(s).
The dialog I credited to *caitsith29 . He's very ingenious on a witty dialog sequence and story telling. I just draw and layout the panels.
Yeah, I can write my own stories and dialog, however I feel it's better if someone with more experience gives it a shot then I.
Now for the critiquing...
Since this is a commission, I will tend to pay more attention to my clienteles' needs then my audiences'. This does not mean I will not listen to your critique, heck I've been itching for someone to give me any advice here on DA.
If I ever did ink and / or color this, yes, there will be some minor to major changes to most, if not all, of these panels. I've always considered my pencil work to be rough drafts.
As for the "vest" on the third panel (it's more of a fancy overcoat then a vest), based on the reference picture the left side was sleeveless, while the right side has a long sleeve. Doing a side profile shot, with no other reference aside a front view, it's was challenging to mentally picture how it'll come out to be.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Hmm.. Who could that kitsune who squish Cait with his rump be? ... <,<
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
I dunno, but I'm pretty sure I owe his giant tails a story still... xD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I have no idea... but if you are implying that it was you then mystery solved! Yay, now time for a kitty snack. :3
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
So... What about lighting Cait on fire... did you have anything to do with that as well?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1